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Old 10-09-2004, 03:10 PM   #1
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Thumbs up for maya entertainmaent ltd.

hi all this is my first post.
kindly send ur criticks and suggessions. I m egerly waitnig for them.....


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Old 10-09-2004, 03:36 PM   #2
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Re: for maya entertainmaent ltd.

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hi all this is my first post.
kindly send ur criticks and suggessions. I m egerly waitnig for them.....


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hi amit


great work. the initial work is great. definitely ther is lot of scope to improvement

keep it up
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Old 10-09-2004, 05:20 PM   #3
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HI ALL

this is thejpg image of the animation
for seeing the moving animation,plz download the zip file and unzip it and play in flash player.

and plz plz plz send reply...and do the rating.
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Old 11-09-2004, 11:13 PM   #4
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its not so easy to get a rating you know. i see a 5 star rating, but is there 5 star work.....?
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Old 11-09-2004, 11:19 PM   #5
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well seen as though i was harsh, heres a crit

when the logo rises out of the water, why does the reflection only appear at the last minute, it would rise with the logo.

its a bit basic.

also, the logo is not even in the centre of the image!

but if its your first ever animation ever. then i suppose its not bad.

certainly not worth 5 stars though, its not cool to rate yourself....
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Old 27-09-2004, 03:59 PM   #6
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the next animation for review
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Old 27-09-2004, 09:45 PM   #7
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dude the file you uploaded is a blank html file
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Erm...the animation is pretty ok..I guess. The logo reflection snaps in. It should be present as soon as the text emerges from the water. But it all feels a tad bit on the tacky side. While being an ok animation teh design of it all is not very coherent and doesnt..feel right? Anyway, just my thoughts on it.
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im afraid its pants

who the hell is this guy anyway?? must be a joke surely
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Old 04-10-2004, 09:40 AM   #10
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The logo is too simple and ummm why is it comming out of the water? It has no connection to it at all

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