fight clip

[HollowHull]

I'm working on a minute long animation for class this is the first fight scene in my movie and my first fight scene it's kind of fast but I'll do the first second in slow motion anyway but can you guys tell me what you think of the motion or anything else you care to comment on
P.S I know the lighting/textures/and modeling are not so great
thanks for your time

http://wdcstudios.tripod.com/test/firstpunchtest3.mov

O heres another clip from my movie

http://wdcstudios.tripod.com/test/standuptestflashR.htm

[martimus]

its very cool

only things i would say are...

the fire trail from the fire man starts going forwards before the two meet. this doesnt look natural, why would that happen?

secondly, the punch is a little confusing, their seems to be a bit of fisticuffs, but its not clear when he punches, exagerate it more,

other than that i like it