First Char Animation

BartokDesign · 28-09-2004, 11:40 PM

Hello , this is a project that Im working for a Tv , I made all from skecthes , modeling , lighting , rigging and animation. It was my frist animation ok?
I known It is far from perfection very far ,but I found it funny so.....
hope u enjoy

Download the animation here

wintzell · 29-09-2004, 01:13 AM

Very good specially to be your first animation...

The running is nice but it looks strange when he looks up. Maybe to slow or just missin some sound what it is he's looking at.

Nice though

BartokDesign · 06-10-2004, 09:47 PM

Thanx , here is another

Another one

K-Walk Studios · 07-10-2004, 12:51 AM

He just jumps out into nowhere...
will he ever land?...
will he survive?...

I like the "Another one" one the most... keep up that work and you will soon be working for pixar or some other company, I don't know...

BartokDesign · 07-10-2004, 12:55 AM

are u sarcastic?

FreaK-sTyLeZ · 10-10-2004, 06:29 PM

If thats your first animation i want to see your last!
Its very good i think youre the man.

wintzell · 19-10-2004, 01:36 AM

He's a friend of mine and I don't think he's sarcastic.. think he means that if you continue the good work and work alot you'll do that.. or something like that.

BartokDesign · 19-10-2004, 03:04 AM

Nice , Im happy with that , but it sounds sarcastic anyway ehehehe .
This is a new one , I had to make the char having nice atitudes , I tryed to make it not boring .
Check this , hope u like.

good boy animation 2mb

K-Walk Studios · 19-10-2004, 04:05 AM

Sorry if I sounded sarcastic before... I'll try be nice this time

This new film is really good! It's hard to believe it's your first animation.

Somethings don't look soo good as you probably know, so the only crit I'll give you now is that when he opens his mouth, you can see right through it, just apply a 2-side material or something to fix it.

I think this could be really nice... When is your deadline?

Good luck...

BartokDesign · 26-10-2004, 11:08 PM

Thats no problem k-walk , this is my first charachter animation , I was always doing some flying logo stuff but never worked with morphs and bones ehehe . The time for this last animation was 32h , to aprove , now im ending it .

Cya

Sorry for the mess.

28-09-2004, 11:40 PM	#1
BartokDesign Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Brasil Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	First Char Animation Hello , this is a project that Im working for a Tv , I made all from skecthes , modeling , lighting , rigging and animation. It was my frist animation ok? I known It is far from perfection very far ,but I found it funny so..... hope u enjoy Download the animation here __________________ Bartok

06-10-2004, 09:47 PM	#3
BartokDesign Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Brasil Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanx , here is another Another one __________________ Bartok Last edited by BartokDesign; 19-10-2004 at 03:13 AM..

07-10-2004, 12:51 AM	#4
K-Walk Studios He who walks the K Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Sweden Posts: 143 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	poor thing He just jumps out into nowhere... will he ever land?... will he survive?... I like the "Another one" one the most... keep up that work and you will soon be working for pixar or some other company, I don't know... __________________ - The Secret To Creativity Is Knowing How To Hide Your Sources -

07-10-2004, 12:55 AM	#5
BartokDesign Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Brasil Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	are u sarcastic? __________________ Bartok

19-10-2004, 03:04 AM	#8
BartokDesign Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Brasil Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice , Im happy with that , but it sounds sarcastic anyway ehehehe . This is a new one , I had to make the char having nice atitudes , I tryed to make it not boring . Check this , hope u like. good boy animation 2mb __________________ Bartok Last edited by BartokDesign; 19-10-2004 at 03:10 AM..

29-09-2004, 01:13 AM	#2
wintzell Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 63 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Very good specially to be your first animation... The running is nice but it looks strange when he looks up. Maybe to slow or just missin some sound what it is he's looking at. Nice though

10-10-2004, 06:29 PM	#6
FreaK-sTyLeZ Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Hannover/Germany Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	If thats your first animation i want to see your last! Its very good i think youre the man.

19-10-2004, 01:36 AM	#7
wintzell Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 63 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	He's a friend of mine and I don't think he's sarcastic.. think he means that if you continue the good work and work alot you'll do that.. or something like that.

19-10-2004, 04:05 AM	#9
K-Walk Studios He who walks the K Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Sweden Posts: 143 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice... Sorry if I sounded sarcastic before... I'll try be nice this time This new film is really good! It's hard to believe it's your first animation. Somethings don't look soo good as you probably know, so the only crit I'll give you now is that when he opens his mouth, you can see right through it, just apply a 2-side material or something to fix it. I think this could be really nice... When is your deadline? Good luck... __________________ - The Secret To Creativity Is Knowing How To Hide Your Sources -

26-10-2004, 11:08 PM	#10
BartokDesign Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Brasil Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thats no problem k-walk , this is my first charachter animation , I was always doing some flying logo stuff but never worked with morphs and bones ehehe . The time for this last animation was 32h , to aprove , now im ending it . Cya Sorry for the mess. __________________ Bartok

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