Web Project, Opinions Needed!

JDM3dee · 04-10-2004, 04:02 PM

Hey! Just submitted this for assesment for my final year of high school. Its not terribly ambitious, i havent tried to use flash or anything but im pretty happy with it...

Any crits would be hugely appreciated!

thanks! JDM

EDIT: By the way all the photos are taken by me...

Chris-3DT · 04-10-2004, 04:08 PM

This is a very solid piece of work, good job!

There are two issues that I would like to address, other than that it is fine.

1- there's a line running through the name of the club, which i would let fade out just after it has crossed the photos. also it might be better to have the name of the club in one line instead of two.

2- the text of most recent news should align with the announcement/news just under it.

JDM3dee · 04-10-2004, 04:14 PM

Hah! thanks Chris! I knew there was something just niggleing at me that wasnt quite right, but i wasnt sure what it was...

Unforunately i cant easily fix the issues with the header image but the issue of the alignment i can certainly fix, and is really glaring once i saw it... Thanks!

hopefully this will take me from an 'A' to an 'A+'...

BlackSeer · 04-10-2004, 08:13 PM

Looks good, my personal view is that the header around "home" seem to be a bit out of place, and the text just below are to close to the edges of the box.

All the things below, news/sponsors and so have some air between the edges and that is good.

Ibbo · 04-10-2004, 09:34 PM

As 'Chris' said, a very solid piece of work. I like the simplicity and colour scheme. All issues i saw have already been adressed (diddnt look for too long, so there may be other things). In all its pretty good!

enjoiskating543 · 04-10-2004, 10:20 PM

pretty good, but i don't know about the rollover color when you go on one of the nav buttons, the green. maybe use a grey or orange like you used in other places.

JDM3dee · 05-10-2004, 07:04 AM

thanks all! hopefully ill address these issues tonight...

thanks!

Chokin Hazard™ · 05-10-2004, 12:11 PM

Great work dude. A better font will even make it look better..

Hey Chris dont you think we need a new forum for web related posts?

JDM3dee · 05-10-2004, 12:19 PM

thanks Chokin Hazard, but what font do you mean???

by the way i rekon a web forum would be a really good idea!

Chris-3DT · 05-10-2004, 01:26 PM

We've got one, it's called "Members websites"

JDM3dee · 05-10-2004, 01:48 PM

Haha! good point!

Chokin Hazard™ · 05-10-2004, 03:11 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Chris-3DT
We've got one, it's called "Members websites"

Sorry Chris, I never been to that section before.

And to JDM3dee

Use any good looking fonts!

04-10-2004, 04:02 PM	#1
JDM3dee Most besterest ever User Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 208 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Web Project, Opinions Needed! Hey! Just submitted this for assesment for my final year of high school. Its not terribly ambitious, i havent tried to use flash or anything but im pretty happy with it... Any crits would be hugely appreciated! thanks! JDM EDIT: By the way all the photos are taken by me... __________________ FREE Sub-domain hosting up for grabs on my server, eMail me for details and what you're after... eMail: gumbyisdabomb@gmail.com

04-10-2004, 04:08 PM	#2
Chris-3DT Threedy Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 2,361 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	This is a very solid piece of work, good job! There are two issues that I would like to address, other than that it is fine. 1- there's a line running through the name of the club, which i would let fade out just after it has crossed the photos. also it might be better to have the name of the club in one line instead of two. 2- the text of most recent news should align with the announcement/news just under it. __________________ [b]Christian

04-10-2004, 04:14 PM	#3
JDM3dee Most besterest ever User Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 208 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hah! thanks Chris! I knew there was something just niggleing at me that wasnt quite right, but i wasnt sure what it was... Unforunately i cant easily fix the issues with the header image but the issue of the alignment i can certainly fix, and is really glaring once i saw it... Thanks! hopefully this will take me from an 'A' to an 'A+'... __________________ FREE Sub-domain hosting up for grabs on my server, eMail me for details and what you're after... eMail: gumbyisdabomb@gmail.com

04-10-2004, 10:20 PM	#6
enjoiskating543 more cowbell Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 462 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	pretty good, but i don't know about the rollover color when you go on one of the nav buttons, the green. maybe use a grey or orange like you used in other places. __________________ siggy

05-10-2004, 07:04 AM	#7
JDM3dee Most besterest ever User Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 208 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks all! hopefully ill address these issues tonight... thanks! __________________ FREE Sub-domain hosting up for grabs on my server, eMail me for details and what you're after... eMail: gumbyisdabomb@gmail.com

04-10-2004, 08:13 PM	#4
BlackSeer Registered User Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: sweden Posts: 120 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks good, my personal view is that the header around "home" seem to be a bit out of place, and the text just below are to close to the edges of the box. All the things below, news/sponsors and so have some air between the edges and that is good.

04-10-2004, 09:34 PM	#5
Ibbo Registered User Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: UK, South West Posts: 592 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	As 'Chris' said, a very solid piece of work. I like the simplicity and colour scheme. All issues i saw have already been adressed (diddnt look for too long, so there may be other things). In all its pretty good!

05-10-2004, 12:11 PM	#8
Chokin Hazard™ The One And Only Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 1,054 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Great work dude. A better font will even make it look better.. Hey Chris dont you think we need a new forum for web related posts?

05-10-2004, 12:19 PM	#9
JDM3dee Most besterest ever User Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 208 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks Chokin Hazard, but what font do you mean??? by the way i rekon a web forum would be a really good idea! __________________ FREE Sub-domain hosting up for grabs on my server, eMail me for details and what you're after... eMail: gumbyisdabomb@gmail.com

05-10-2004, 01:26 PM	#10
Chris-3DT Threedy Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 2,361 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	We've got one, it's called "Members websites" __________________ [b]Christian

05-10-2004, 01:48 PM	#11
JDM3dee Most besterest ever User Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 208 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Haha! good point! __________________ FREE Sub-domain hosting up for grabs on my server, eMail me for details and what you're after... eMail: gumbyisdabomb@gmail.com

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