interior

[droopdog]

hey, here is my first interior , and first serieus render with vray
i need your help, so your comments would be welcome!

CC?


http://www.freewebtown.com/droopdog/living(vray)(2).jpg

[Aza]

hey nice work nice modeling i only think the lighting is a bit dark,u should make it a bit lighter or more light in the room good job on the modeling

[L10N]

yeah, defenetly too dark.. and the chairs dont really go in that room a low table and high bar chairs? but then again, who knows whats in that roome

otherwise, good job

[droopdog]

but there are other seats with the low table, the chairs go with the bar table!
thnx for the comments..

any idea what i can add more?

[theDig]

I love the curtains they are great but the room is little too dark for my taste!

[Marcia]

I think what makes the bar stools and high table look a little out of place (besides not being something you typically find in a living room) is that they are the focal point of your composition, and the contrast between them and the rest of the furniture makes them look out of scale, even if the size is technically correct. It's a perception thing, imo.

The render is dark, but the light seems nicely balanced; you only need to bring it up a little.

[el_crni]

u definitelly need one vray light on the window, make vray large as window size and set parameters to 10, an check box invisible... :-)
great modeling, keep up

[droopdog]

hey here is an update, i'm pretty happy with the render, but it'm not happy with the curatin/window section, maybe ill change it , what do you think of it?realistic?

http://www.freewebtown.com/droopdog/living(vray)(4).jpg

[Soprano]

Very, very nice and realistic; However, your carpet looks like gelatine

[droopdog]

hey everybody, i finally have an update
i pretty happy with it, and i should be coz it rendered 20 hours:s

i really need your comments...

[Der Meister]

it all looks good untill you see the tiger skin/furr.. it looks way to plainer bum it or do somthing to pull some textuer out of it.. then it will look really good

[el_crni]

great work out there :-)
now here is the question what material u used for the floor and can u show us parameters, those glossy reflections are waaaaay too cool :-)

thanks

[achilleale]

good work

however, architectonically speaking ... it's a little bit confuse!

you need another light source: natural or artificial, on the rightside!

and maybe the zebra texture need thickness, bump

after all it'is you first job: good! You will improve your skills soon!

[L10N]

way cool indeed

the only critics i have, is concerning the cough.. it looks a little sharp on the edge, whats up with that? and yes, the tiger skin is just too perfict, rotate it a little and try to make sipples (wrinkes or whatever) on it.. the lightning is just perfict
u almost redid the whole scene, didnt u?

one last thing, id love to see a good quality pic that last one looks like 16bit

[el_crni]

maybe try to desaturate last picture, its way to colorized that you cant see in real world
:-)