A Marines R and R

RickStefani · 08-12-2004, 09:35 AM

A work in progress that is due on next tuesday along with a 15 sec animation and the mech I am working on. School can be a pain. Here is the sketch

RickStefani · 08-12-2004, 09:35 AM

and what is colors so far

RickStefani · 08-12-2004, 10:58 AM

The hand will be redone and he is mising his other hand but this is all I can do tonight.

This is all done in photoshop CS

Androgs · 08-12-2004, 04:16 PM

Wow, good job, Rick. its really good so far, looks like a 3d, especially the head. wait to see the update..keep it up!!

Ibbo · 08-12-2004, 06:56 PM

Yeah definatly looks cool! Your studying animation or something?

RickStefani · 08-12-2004, 07:11 PM

Androgs, wow. Thanks. That is a great complement. Ibbo yes. I go to the Art istitute of phoenix. I am studying 3D animation. We do a lot of traditional drawing, life drwing and animation. I am glad that is paying off.

Chris-3DT · 08-12-2004, 07:21 PM

His right foot seems to bend awkwardly, it's good otherwise, keep us posted

neiy0 · 09-12-2004, 06:13 AM

its looks great in color, but the hand and head look way to small, or atleast out of proportion..

apart from that, excellent job

RickStefani · 14-12-2004, 01:36 AM

Christ, His foot is bent because of how it is sitting. I hope this works. Thanks for the Crit. I hope I fixxed it. Here is the finl or semi final. It is due tomarrow and I have to much to do to keap tweeking it. I hope you like it. I had to compress the hell out of it.

pogimonz · 14-12-2004, 01:44 AM

very nice piece!... I thought the character was done in 3D too at first glance... is the background done in 3D? it looks very 3D... if it's not, wow! you got the whole 3D effect down homie... well keep it up, I'm likin it much =)

RickStefani · 14-12-2004, 02:03 AM

pogimonz, the BG is a combo of 3D and painted. Thanks.

Androgs · 14-12-2004, 06:42 PM

thats a nice semi final work, Rick

. I do have some point to say:
1. I think the character and the background still doesn't seems get united each other, maybe its because the shadow or color underneath the character, but I believe you can do better

.

2. The edge of the stair or floor he's sitting is too sharp, I'd add a chamfer or rounded edge as well as cracked edge on it, to make it more natural and chaos.

3. The background is nice so far, I'd add more dramatic color on it, maybe a bit red or purple atmosphere to make the situation more deep.

thats all my suggestion, you don't have to follow it of course, just my 2 cents.

overall, Its a good job, I especially like his armor and weapon. its clearly represent that you have put a lot of hard work on it. Keep it great!!

RickStefani · 14-12-2004, 09:09 PM

Androgs, Thanks a million. Awsome crits. Here is it as I sit in class and just turned it in. It is going in the display case.. The real file is 250 megs. The jpg allone, hight quality is 30 megs. It is a huge picture. It looses a lot small like this.

rubberduck · 15-12-2004, 03:12 AM

I agree, very nice, but the hand and head seems out of proportions too me too

CHK · 16-12-2004, 06:41 AM

Amazing! It did look like 3D!! And the BG is also wonderfull!! I'm waiting for the final animation...Keep us posted!

08-12-2004, 09:35 AM	#1
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	A Marines R and R A work in progress that is due on next tuesday along with a 15 sec animation and the mech I am working on. School can be a pain. Here is the sketch __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

08-12-2004, 09:35 AM	#2
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	and what is colors so far __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

08-12-2004, 10:58 AM	#3
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The hand will be redone and he is mising his other hand but this is all I can do tonight. This is all done in photoshop CS __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

08-12-2004, 04:16 PM	#4
Androgs Digital Artist Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Indonesia Posts: 929 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Wow, good job, Rick. its really good so far, looks like a 3d, especially the head. wait to see the update..keep it up!! __________________ my portofolio

08-12-2004, 07:11 PM	#6
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Androgs, wow. Thanks. That is a great complement. Ibbo yes. I go to the Art istitute of phoenix. I am studying 3D animation. We do a lot of traditional drawing, life drwing and animation. I am glad that is paying off. __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

08-12-2004, 06:56 PM	#5
Ibbo Registered User Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: UK, South West Posts: 592 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yeah definatly looks cool! Your studying animation or something?

08-12-2004, 07:21 PM	#7
Chris-3DT Threedy Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Germany Posts: 2,361 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	His right foot seems to bend awkwardly, it's good otherwise, keep us posted __________________ [b]Christian

09-12-2004, 06:13 AM	#8
neiy0 inventor Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Proffesor Wiley's Hangout Posts: 771 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	its looks great in color, but the hand and head look way to small, or atleast out of proportion.. apart from that, excellent job __________________ iMAGINATION is more important than knowledge -Albert Einstein- H A R D W I R E D :: a 5* collaboration film!

14-12-2004, 01:36 AM	#9
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Christ, His foot is bent because of how it is sitting. I hope this works. Thanks for the Crit. I hope I fixxed it. Here is the finl or semi final. It is due tomarrow and I have to much to do to keap tweeking it. I hope you like it. I had to compress the hell out of it. __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

14-12-2004, 01:44 AM	#10
pogimonz mango smoothie! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 702 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	very nice piece!... I thought the character was done in 3D too at first glance... is the background done in 3D? it looks very 3D... if it's not, wow! you got the whole 3D effect down homie... well keep it up, I'm likin it much =)

14-12-2004, 02:03 AM	#11
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	pogimonz, the BG is a combo of 3D and painted. Thanks. __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

14-12-2004, 06:42 PM	#12
Androgs Digital Artist Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Indonesia Posts: 929 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	thats a nice semi final work, Rick. I do have some point to say: 1. I think the character and the background still doesn't seems get united each other, maybe its because the shadow or color underneath the character, but I believe you can do better. 2. The edge of the stair or floor he's sitting is too sharp, I'd add a chamfer or rounded edge as well as cracked edge on it, to make it more natural and chaos. 3. The background is nice so far, I'd add more dramatic color on it, maybe a bit red or purple atmosphere to make the situation more deep. thats all my suggestion, you don't have to follow it of course, just my 2 cents. overall, Its a good job, I especially like his armor and weapon. its clearly represent that you have put a lot of hard work on it. Keep it great!! __________________ my portofolio

14-12-2004, 09:09 PM	#13
RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Androgs, Thanks a million. Awsome crits. Here is it as I sit in class and just turned it in. It is going in the display case.. The real file is 250 megs. The jpg allone, hight quality is 30 megs. It is a huge picture. It looses a lot small like this. __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

15-12-2004, 03:12 AM	#14
rubberduck LightWave 3D User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I agree, very nice, but the hand and head seems out of proportions too me too __________________ Art Is Not A Thing; It's A Way - Elbert Hubbard

16-12-2004, 06:41 AM	#15
CHK Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Laos Posts: 316 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Amazing! It did look like 3D!! And the BG is also wonderfull!! I'm waiting for the final animation...Keep us posted!

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