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peej · 08-01-2005, 03:14 AM

Hey everyone
This is my first post in the 2d forum. Just want to know what you all think of this. I know need to get some highlights on my grass any other ideas on what I should do?

Ibbo · 08-01-2005, 05:38 PM

Hey there, welcome to the 2D section. Thats a great first piece, i love that sky! Aside from the issue with the grass i think this is a great start. One thing im not 100% sure on is the patch of brown on a cloud in the bottom right, but that aside its a great WIP.

~¤Yami¤~X¤ · 08-01-2005, 06:06 PM

The Sky is just perfect, flawless. But that post looks kind've out of place with that grass. I suggest that you define each grass plant a little more. I've seen something cover up the bottom part of your grass and look at the top of the grass feild--that looks great. I think you should try and get the rest of your grass to look like the top portion you have in your picture.

Michael · 12-01-2005, 12:04 AM

Welcome to the forums.

Humm... I would add some specularity to the grass blades and some shades too, indeed. But I don't think that to every blade... Just here and there....

I don't understand your question here... You ask us what you should do there?

It's a good start to show something more. The ground perspective suggest that something big could be shown, like a building, a flying city, a space ship... or just two friends/creatires walking around.

Hey, why won't you join our Seppdpainting Challenges?

why wonn't everyone?.....

08-01-2005, 03:14 AM	#1
peej Registered User Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	First post Hey everyone This is my first post in the 2d forum. Just want to know what you all think of this. I know need to get some highlights on my grass any other ideas on what I should do?

08-01-2005, 06:06 PM	#3
~¤Yami¤~X¤ The One Who Knows Him Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: South Carolina, USA Posts: 141 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The Sky is just perfect, flawless. But that post looks kind've out of place with that grass. I suggest that you define each grass plant a little more. I've seen something cover up the bottom part of your grass and look at the top of the grass feild--that looks great. I think you should try and get the rest of your grass to look like the top portion you have in your picture. __________________ Darkness only comes when you put out the light...

12-01-2005, 12:04 AM	#4
Michael Lone Brushboy Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Poland Posts: 711 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Welcome to the forums. Humm... I would add some specularity to the grass blades and some shades too, indeed. But I don't think that to every blade... Just here and there.... I don't understand your question here... You ask us what you should do there? It's a good start to show something more. The ground perspective suggest that something big could be shown, like a building, a flying city, a space ship... or just two friends/creatires walking around. Hey, why won't you join our Seppdpainting Challenges? why wonn't everyone?..... __________________ My CG Portfolio

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08-01-2005, 05:38 PM	#2
Ibbo Registered User Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: UK, South West Posts: 592 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey there, welcome to the 2D section. Thats a great first piece, i love that sky! Aside from the issue with the grass i think this is a great start. One thing im not 100% sure on is the patch of brown on a cloud in the bottom right, but that aside its a great WIP.

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