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Old 05-02-2005, 08:31 PM   #1
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Vehicle : Ferrari 360 Modena

Hi all, this car is modelled in Maya 6, all is a NURBS modelling. I want to hear some crits and comment for this one, also any idea on how I can improve this scene better? maybe the lighting or environment? all feedback are highly appreciated. Thanks for viewing.







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Old 07-02-2005, 12:47 PM   #2
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and here's the wire, will do a little update soon. its my second attempt for making a car, so..yeah its still so bad. I must admitted that I'm not going into detail especially the machine at the back car, because its for a short visualization and have a tight deadline on it, so I just concentrate on the outside appearance and have a luxurious style on it. So, if there's any something that I must now, please feel free to say it. Thanks.

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Looks very very nice man !!!! very nice !!!
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Old 07-02-2005, 03:11 PM   #4
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hey looks oke but
1.the rims look cheezy compared to a ferrari those rims are more a peugot 205 or 105 or a opel not a ferrari
2.the render isnt realy sharp probley because the host noting u can do about it
3.and the cut in the hood (the fron edge`s) dont show the go through though the body mesh
4.the front bumper grill looks ugly try abit smaller room between the hole`s
5.the lights looks wrong (not the actuely lights but the shape of the hole for the lights ) (not sure about this though not a realy ferrari guy)
the cars is cool though


**edit** one very bit fat point there is like a mesh error a very big one above the front wheel chassis and the door (also not sure if this is in like a ferrari or just a mesherror)
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Old 07-02-2005, 06:00 PM   #5
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Ravens, Thanks !!

Aza, wow! Many Thanks for pointing that out, I'm agree most of the thing you said for the car, dunno if I still have time to fix some problem you mention, but I'll try to fix what I can fix. here's little update. I know there's still some mesh error that I hard to fix.

but still, if there's any I must know, feel free to say it. Thanks
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