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Old 15-02-2005, 10:30 AM   #1
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hall interior.wip

hey im working on a hall interior
it is a start and doing lighting test
i hope all of u will guide me
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Old 15-02-2005, 07:48 PM   #2
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Unhappy pls reply

hey ...anybody...pls reply to my wip anybodyyyyyyyyyyy
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Old 15-02-2005, 09:07 PM   #3
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Oke here is my reply:
Overal looks pretty good, But I think the table and the sphere needs a little more work!
Keep it up
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Old 15-02-2005, 10:32 PM   #4
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The scene looks good, But i think there is something wierd with the lighting. You have the daylight coming through the window and also the spotlights on the corners? I think that the sopotlights should give you some dark shadows on the corners. And maybe you can put a glow effect on the light so we can see that it's on ( im talking about the two lights on the corners).

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Old 16-02-2005, 01:39 AM   #5
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nice job

looks pretty good, nice soft lighting. it seems odd though that the sunlight is so much dimmer than the artificial lights, even on a cloudy day, the sun is a ton brighter than most lights you'll commonly see indoors. and i think i agree with that last post about the shadows in the corners? they should be a bit darker and more noticeable i think... i especially like the glass on the table. maybe adding a pic of some sort of outdoor scene outside the window would help too, just something blurry but enough to give it a sense of something real existing outside the window.

i hate to criticise, cuz i feel like i'm being a jerk, but i really like this image, and i'm just trying to help, keep it up.
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