Female head wip c&c please

chips5k · 29-03-2005, 09:44 AM

hey guys,

i noticed a while back my edgeloop ability was somewhat lkacking so i went and ran through the joan of arc tutorial about 4 times and came out wioth the following - please c@c im also a relataive newbie to maya

elveatles · 29-03-2005, 11:11 AM

It's comming along well. My critiques: the upper lip protrudes out a little too far, and the forhead looks a little flat so try rounding it out a bit.

chips5k · 29-03-2005, 11:31 AM

yeah i wasnt sure about the forehead but now that youve mentioned it i will fix it didnt notice the lips so thanks for pointing that on out

thanks heaps for the comments

urbanthor · 29-03-2005, 02:38 PM

Looking good. But the ears should be more more on the middle. They are too far back.
You should check out:
-the back og the head, the neck.
-Too sharp nosebone.
-The ears
-The jawbone

www.3d.sk have very good human referances you should check out.

Keep it up

29-03-2005, 09:44 AM	#1
chips5k Professional newbie Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Mount Gambier, South Australia, Australia Posts: 151 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Female head wip c&c please hey guys, i noticed a while back my edgeloop ability was somewhat lkacking so i went and ran through the joan of arc tutorial about 4 times and came out wioth the following - please c@c im also a relataive newbie to maya

29-03-2005, 02:38 PM	#4
urbanthor Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looking good. But the ears should be more more on the middle. They are too far back. You should check out: -the back og the head, the neck. -Too sharp nosebone. -The ears -The jawbone www.3d.sk have very good human referances you should check out. Keep it up __________________ www.urbanthor.com

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29-03-2005, 11:11 AM	#2
elveatles Registered User Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 127 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	It's comming along well. My critiques: the upper lip protrudes out a little too far, and the forhead looks a little flat so try rounding it out a bit.

29-03-2005, 11:31 AM	#3
chips5k Professional newbie Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Mount Gambier, South Australia, Australia Posts: 151 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah i wasnt sure about the forehead but now that youve mentioned it i will fix it didnt notice the lips so thanks for pointing that on out thanks heaps for the comments

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