Butler

Maruzzella · 07-05-2005, 04:42 PM

Hello,
this is my last work is an old english butler's portrait. I hope you gonna like it.

ArTooRo · 07-05-2005, 04:50 PM

OMG!! This is great! I'm the first one to crit and I'll give You 5 stars! It should be linked from front page. Absolutely superb. I'm really impressed.
Keep up the excellent job!

07-05-2005, 05:42 PM

wow...this is superb work......
5 STARS.....
excellent first post....welcome and hope to see more works.
Software-renderer...?
And post a wire please.....

PKT · 07-05-2005, 06:14 PM

I feal almost bad to crit anything about this fantastic picture, but I think the eyes are slightly to green.

Kiss Csaba · 07-05-2005, 06:48 PM

Wow man! Great job! very-very good...

honey and chips · 07-05-2005, 07:09 PM

hey post it on 3dtotal its amazing very good model

Pixelpuppet · 07-05-2005, 07:38 PM

the skinning is fantastic! but think the fabric material needs more work.
Show some expression, it will be great!

Maruzzella · 07-05-2005, 11:36 PM

Hello thank everybody for the congratulation and also to have picked my lazyness!
You are definitely right I didn't work on the fabric as I should

But I was so happy with the face that I wanted to rush on all the rest!
I will try to emprove the quality of the clothes
About the green in the eyes... it's due because I am quiet new to mental ray, it's the first still I am doing with it, and there are some things I couldn't control the green in the eyes were one of them

I would be glad to pubblish my image on 3dtotal but I don't know how to do it..

thanks again
Maurizio

DarkLimit · 08-05-2005, 07:34 AM

I think u did a fantastic job, looks very real... my only crit would be his white shirt; could be tweaked to look a bit more soft.... Thanks for sharing..

Don stimpack · 08-05-2005, 08:14 AM

wow, this piece is really wonderfully done! i love it!

Pinchy · 08-05-2005, 10:18 AM

Top stuff, i love it, you got the "butler" look down very well, it's very convincing.

By the way, what do you mean by your last work, i see a lot of people always saying, this is my last work, does that mean you're going to stop modeling?

crazybadger · 08-05-2005, 11:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinchy

Top stuff, i love it, you got the "butler" look down very well, it's very convincing.

By the way, what do you mean by your last work, i see a lot of people always saying, this is my last work, does that mean you're going to stop modeling?

pinchy...i think this is a common mistake for non-english speaking people. English is a complex language and when I see someone say "this is my last work" i think it means "this is my latest/most recent work"

about the model:

omg thats great

Maruzzella · 08-05-2005, 05:59 PM

Yes Pinchy!
it's my latest work... sorry and thanks for the correction

GrimStefandango · 08-05-2005, 06:53 PM

Great work, very good.

The eye lids of his right eye look a bit weird though, I can't quite put my finger on it. And I think his eye lashes are missing.

3D ShaDES · 08-05-2005, 10:08 PM

nice fat guy
5* man

07-05-2005, 04:42 PM	#1
Maruzzella Registered User Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Butler Hello, this is my last work is an old english butler's portrait. I hope you gonna like it.

07-05-2005, 04:50 PM	#2
ArTooRo Star Wars Freak Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Poland Posts: 336 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	OMG!! This is great! I'm the first one to crit and I'll give You 5 stars! It should be linked from front page. Absolutely superb. I'm really impressed. Keep up the excellent job! __________________ Cheers! Artur Owśnicki www.3dartoo.blogspot.com "School Dreamer" Project WIP

07-05-2005, 06:14 PM	#4
PKT A dreaming 3D modeller Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 394 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	I feal almost bad to crit anything about this fantastic picture, but I think the eyes are slightly to green. Last edited by PKT; 18-05-2005 at 02:05 AM..

07-05-2005, 07:09 PM	#6
honey and chips Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 79 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey post it on 3dtotal its amazing very good model __________________ If lifes a joke i dont get it? I sat in bed looking at the stars then i wondered were the hell is my roof? Cool a life were can i download one of those?

07-05-2005, 11:36 PM	#8
Maruzzella Registered User Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hello thank everybody for the congratulation and also to have picked my lazyness! You are definitely right I didn't work on the fabric as I should But I was so happy with the face that I wanted to rush on all the rest! I will try to emprove the quality of the clothes About the green in the eyes... it's due because I am quiet new to mental ray, it's the first still I am doing with it, and there are some things I couldn't control the green in the eyes were one of them I would be glad to pubblish my image on 3dtotal but I don't know how to do it.. thanks again Maurizio Last edited by Maruzzella; 07-05-2005 at 11:43 PM..

07-05-2005, 05:42 PM	#3
Brent Guest Posts: n/a	wow...this is superb work...... 5 STARS..... excellent first post....welcome and hope to see more works. Software-renderer...? And post a wire please.....

07-05-2005, 06:48 PM	#5
Kiss Csaba Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Hódmezõvásárhely, Hungary Posts: 981 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wow man! Great job! very-very good...

07-05-2005, 07:38 PM	#7
Pixelpuppet Private Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	the skinning is fantastic! but think the fabric material needs more work. Show some expression, it will be great!

08-05-2005, 07:34 AM	#9
DarkLimit Roaming Fish Sorcerer Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Toronto,Canada. Posts: 134 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think u did a fantastic job, looks very real... my only crit would be his white shirt; could be tweaked to look a bit more soft.... Thanks for sharing.. __________________ http://darklimit.deviantart.com/gallery/

08-05-2005, 08:14 AM	#10
Don stimpack Registered User Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 74 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow, this piece is really wonderfully done! i love it!

08-05-2005, 10:18 AM	#11
Pinchy Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 239 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Top stuff, i love it, you got the "butler" look down very well, it's very convincing. By the way, what do you mean by your last work, i see a lot of people always saying, this is my last work, does that mean you're going to stop modeling?

08-05-2005, 05:59 PM	#13
Maruzzella Registered User Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yes Pinchy! it's my latest work... sorry and thanks for the correction

08-05-2005, 06:53 PM	#14
GrimStefandango I am the greetest Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Great work, very good. The eye lids of his right eye look a bit weird though, I can't quite put my finger on it. And I think his eye lashes are missing. __________________ The big brain am winning again!

08-05-2005, 10:08 PM	#15
3D ShaDES Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Romania Posts: 62 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice fat guy 5* man __________________ Life's a challange.

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