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- Demo reel 2005 -
Hi everybody,
I work on maya and since 7 months I try to learn how animate. This is my last work: my demoreel with everything i done last months. 30 mo 640*480 MPG1 http://cedrik24.free.fr/video/demo.mpg Some screens shots Hope you like it C&C are most welcome |
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Awesome dude! Just one thing... the bump on the pig is a bit much. simple is better some times. Other than that great job man.
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And this is what you've done in Only 7 months???
Dude YOU ROCK!!!! It's An Awesome reel :-) |
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thanks men for your feebacks
edhead--> i'm agree with the bump i forget to change it sometimes thats why it's not equal on every animation Togrbil2--> i have many free times but thanks for the comments it's very pleasant for me ![]() |
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Ya know it looked AWSOME, but I couldn't finish it.. purely and simply the music was to loud.. decrease the background music so the viewer can understand the dialougue more... other than that AWSOME. BTW are you on 10 second club?
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Very nice work !
Lots of rythm, and very good animation !
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Hey C-drik whats your schooling history? Got a job?
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Wow, this is PRO. The only thing I can really say is that when the pig was talking, his head sat still a bit too much. I am nowhere even close to being good at animating yet, but I want to learn how.
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Thanks all for your feebacks...
Bumble--> i made an another version and I increase the sound of the music zoo-prod--> hehehe nice to see you here, i'm glad to read this comments from you ClimaX--> i learned drawing during one year and after one year which one i learned maya. I finished my studies last year during this year i learned animation with Richard' William's book and i'm looking for a job... |
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If I were you I would change a few little things around. I think your animations and modeling and all that is excellent. At the end though, I would put something really impressive that will stick in an employer's mind. If it were me, I would use the clip of the pig climbing the fence and falling down. I actually laughed a little when I saw that, and it would have made a PERFECT ending to your demo reel, for several reasons:
1. It's funny - easier to remember something that's funny 2. It's very well animated 3. Very well modeled It's good to have the drawings in there, but I would put them somewhere in the middle of the reel, because that's not the main focus of the whole thing anyway, right? |
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