Old man

calvingolkowski · 04-07-2005, 06:54 PM

Hi there,

my name is Calvin Golkowski. I have been watching this board for a while now, and i love the work here. I just started modelling an old man and i would really appreciate if someone can help me with it. I am just about to take it into ZBrush, but i would like some feedback first.

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Thanks

Calvin

avinash · 04-07-2005, 08:07 PM

hi
I am avinash and i am student. I have send my face in this message pls say that it is right or not

calvingolkowski · 04-07-2005, 08:48 PM

Hi avinash,

i am sorry but i opened this thread to get comments and critique for my work. If you need critique, please open your own thread.

calvin

niki · 04-07-2005, 09:04 PM

wow ... what to say ..uhm ..it's perfect!

really ..I like the modeling a lot ..
did you use references? which 3d soft did you use for it?
I can't wait to see the details that you'll add with zbrush ..keep it up!
ah ..are you thinkin' about to model the rest of the body?
I don't remember to have seen an old body ..that would be interesting

avinash : to open new thread it's simple .. when you are in this section, organic wip forum, click on the "new thread" button, on the left of the page

Novak · 04-07-2005, 09:26 PM

Wow, Awesome, Like it alot... Keep it the great work..

Greetz, Novak

<<GhosTS>> · 04-07-2005, 09:33 PM

Great muscle work.You have really re-created the old look perfectly.Nothing much to say.Other than to say that the ear needs more work.but it can be easily ajusted using zbrush..Keep it up.

calvingolkowski · 05-07-2005, 01:14 AM

Hi,

thank you all for your encouragement. As this is my first post here, i am really happy to hear that you like the modell.

@niki-3DT: Yes, i have used reference. An old guy from 3D.sk, but i changed him alot so it doesnt really look like the original anymore :7. I modelled the man in Maya 6.5.

I was actually thinking about modelling the whole body at some point, just because of the reason you said. You dont see it much, but i have to train myself in cloth next, and i am working on another model, which is fully nude (yes, it is a girl :7), so i think i will keep him as he is after ZBrush and then eventually adding clothes.

@Novak: Thank you for the encouraging words, i can use them. I need to build up confidence

.

@GhosTS: Thank you too for encourgament and yes, i will check out the ear again. I rotated it forward in a later version i havnt uploaded, but you will see this in the ZBrush Version.

Btw, i really like the entence: Whoever does not try, does not learn. I will use that to encourge myself.

Thanks!

calvin

Stubby- · 05-07-2005, 03:00 AM

very nice.. he looks like an old man, youve cougt that good.

calvingolkowski · 08-07-2005, 04:33 AM

Hi again,

i am working on the ZBrush version now. But i have a wireframe of the model. It is quite highpoly but i will do a lowpoly model at some point too.

Calvin

calvingolkowski · 14-07-2005, 05:01 AM

Hi again,

i finally did the ZBrush verion. Thanks for any comments!

notaloser · 14-07-2005, 06:15 AM

everything but the upper lips looks good. the wrinkling there looks unreal, maybe smooth that part out a bit or check some more references.

Karvis · 14-07-2005, 06:55 AM

Wow man, that sure looks old. I dig it

jayjayk89 · 14-07-2005, 09:22 AM

I dont really like his skin...the zbrushing is good and all but try a new texture...old men's skin is usually blotchy and speckled etc...but other than that i think it looks really supremely good

Novak · 15-07-2005, 10:33 AM

Nice, updates, Like them all keep it up

Ilkejav mk5 · 15-07-2005, 10:38 AM

awesome... if you make him just a little bit more evil, he would look just like the emperor in star wars... lol...

04-07-2005, 06:54 PM	#1
calvingolkowski Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Old man Hi there, my name is Calvin Golkowski. I have been watching this board for a while now, and i love the work here. I just started modelling an old man and i would really appreciate if someone can help me with it. I am just about to take it into ZBrush, but i would like some feedback first. [IMG][/IMG] Thanks Calvin

04-07-2005, 09:04 PM	#4
niki Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Bari - ITALY Posts: 1,191 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow ... what to say ..uhm ..it's perfect! really ..I like the modeling a lot .. did you use references? which 3d soft did you use for it? I can't wait to see the details that you'll add with zbrush ..keep it up! ah ..are you thinkin' about to model the rest of the body? I don't remember to have seen an old body ..that would be interesting avinash : to open new thread it's simple .. when you are in this section, organic wip forum, click on the "new thread" button, on the left of the page __________________ www.pikoandniki.com 3D GRAPHIC High and Low poly Modeling Lighting and Rendering Animations

04-07-2005, 09:26 PM	#5
Novak Not From Earth Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: (Leuven)Belgium Posts: 1,456 Thanks: 10 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Wow, Awesome, Like it alot... Keep it the great work.. Greetz, Novak __________________ Live From Day To Day! If You Live Tomorrow! You Will Die Today! Novak \|\| XBox360 ID \|\| Novak3D

04-07-2005, 09:33 PM	#6
<<GhosTS>> Back from the dead Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Everywhere Posts: 838 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Great muscle work.You have really re-created the old look perfectly.Nothing much to say.Other than to say that the ear needs more work.but it can be easily ajusted using zbrush..Keep it up. __________________ Whoever does not try, does not learn. Put Your Comments On - Baby Girl ( New WIP ) Iguanodon - Currently Halted

05-07-2005, 03:00 AM	#8
Stubby- Teh wannabe 1337 3dsmaxer Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Denmark Posts: 159 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	very nice.. he looks like an old man, youve cougt that good. __________________ Mmmm beer... Now There's a temporary solution - Homer Simpson Bite my shiny metal ass - Bender

04-07-2005, 08:07 PM	#2
avinash Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hi I am avinash and i am student. I have send my face in this message pls say that it is right or not

04-07-2005, 08:48 PM	#3
calvingolkowski Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi avinash, i am sorry but i opened this thread to get comments and critique for my work. If you need critique, please open your own thread. calvin

05-07-2005, 01:14 AM	#7
calvingolkowski Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi, thank you all for your encouragement. As this is my first post here, i am really happy to hear that you like the modell. @niki-3DT: Yes, i have used reference. An old guy from 3D.sk, but i changed him alot so it doesnt really look like the original anymore :7. I modelled the man in Maya 6.5. I was actually thinking about modelling the whole body at some point, just because of the reason you said. You dont see it much, but i have to train myself in cloth next, and i am working on another model, which is fully nude (yes, it is a girl :7), so i think i will keep him as he is after ZBrush and then eventually adding clothes. @Novak: Thank you for the encouraging words, i can use them. I need to build up confidence . @GhosTS: Thank you too for encourgament and yes, i will check out the ear again. I rotated it forward in a later version i havnt uploaded, but you will see this in the ZBrush Version. Btw, i really like the entence: Whoever does not try, does not learn. I will use that to encourge myself. Thanks! calvin

08-07-2005, 04:33 AM	#9
calvingolkowski Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi again, i am working on the ZBrush version now. But i have a wireframe of the model. It is quite highpoly but i will do a lowpoly model at some point too. Calvin

14-07-2005, 05:01 AM	#10
calvingolkowski Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi again, i finally did the ZBrush verion. Thanks for any comments!

14-07-2005, 06:15 AM	#11
notaloser Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 151 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	everything but the upper lips looks good. the wrinkling there looks unreal, maybe smooth that part out a bit or check some more references. Last edited by notaloser; 14-07-2005 at 10:56 AM..

14-07-2005, 06:55 AM	#12
Karvis Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Finland Posts: 41 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wow man, that sure looks old. I dig it __________________ My comments may be short, but thats because I pretty much suck in english. :\|

14-07-2005, 09:22 AM	#13
jayjayk89 Slow Learner Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wisconsin, USA Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I dont really like his skin...the zbrushing is good and all but try a new texture...old men's skin is usually blotchy and speckled etc...but other than that i think it looks really supremely good

15-07-2005, 10:33 AM	#14
Novak Not From Earth Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: (Leuven)Belgium Posts: 1,456 Thanks: 10 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Nice, updates, Like them all keep it up __________________ Live From Day To Day! If You Live Tomorrow! You Will Die Today! Novak \|\| XBox360 ID \|\| Novak3D

15-07-2005, 10:38 AM	#15
Ilkejav mk5 Marquis of Montréal. Join Date: May 2005 Location: Montréal baby! best gaming city in the 'verse. Posts: 1,867 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	awesome... if you make him just a little bit more evil, he would look just like the emperor in star wars... lol...

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