fighterbomber

juanm82 · 17-07-2005, 12:43 AM

Well, I haven't made the cockpit yet, but outside the model is nearly done. I'm not so sure about the materials.
Anyway, comments are welcome

squid · 17-07-2005, 04:30 AM

Wow man, looks really nice!!

Puckducker · 17-07-2005, 12:12 PM

Hmmm, looks nice...texturing could use some work though. It's too loud, and distracting from the overall model....and it doesn't quite look like metal. Even for a desert airplane, that sort of colouring would seem to make it stand out more, rather than blend in.

By toning down the texturing you'll be able to see a lot more of the detail in your model.

Vercingetorix · 19-07-2005, 01:41 AM

I think the edges of the wings need sharpening as it looks rather soft and cartoony (which is ok if thats what you are shooting for)

I agree with abovesaid coment on texture.

juanm82 · 19-07-2005, 06:07 AM

yes, the main problem is the texture. I was thinking in posting it in the material section. I've been trying diferent options, but it haven't improved much.
I'll check the wings

17-07-2005, 12:43 AM	#1
juanm82 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	fighterbomber Well, I haven't made the cockpit yet, but outside the model is nearly done. I'm not so sure about the materials. Anyway, comments are welcome

17-07-2005, 12:12 PM	#3
Puckducker Da blue bus is calling us Join Date: May 2005 Location: Montreal, Quebec, Canada Posts: 1,297 Thanks: 0 Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Hmmm, looks nice...texturing could use some work though. It's too loud, and distracting from the overall model....and it doesn't quite look like metal. Even for a desert airplane, that sort of colouring would seem to make it stand out more, rather than blend in. By toning down the texturing you'll be able to see a lot more of the detail in your model. __________________ The only way to define the limitations of our existence is to go beyond them. CURRENT WIP: DW5-3D-Götterdämmerung -Puckducker LATEST COMPLETED PROJECT: DWIV - 3D - Puckducker - Dark Matter

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17-07-2005, 04:30 AM	#2
squid Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 8 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wow man, looks really nice!!

19-07-2005, 01:41 AM	#4
Vercingetorix Cucumber God Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Cleveland Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think the edges of the wings need sharpening as it looks rather soft and cartoony (which is ok if thats what you are shooting for) I agree with abovesaid coment on texture.

19-07-2005, 06:07 AM	#5
juanm82 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yes, the main problem is the texture. I was thinking in posting it in the material section. I've been trying diferent options, but it haven't improved much. I'll check the wings

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