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TORNADO · 20-07-2005, 01:19 AM

Hi everyone.I was planing on starting a W.I.P on Ford Mustang but I decided to do this model first.I started it this morning and I have worked on it for 3 or 4 hours.I would be very grateful if you can give me some coments.Please tell me if something doesn't look right.Thanks!

Ninto · 20-07-2005, 01:52 AM

I cannot view your images. Maybe you could attach them to your post?

TORNADO · 20-07-2005, 02:01 AM

I'm sorry about the problems.I hope everything's allright now.

TORNADO · 20-07-2005, 06:51 PM

I worked some more on the model this morning I'll keep it up!

gunsmith · 20-07-2005, 10:45 PM

Hi Tornado,
I think your model is nice so far but the edges need some correction... especially the conjunction of the side and top... and I see some hump on the rear half of hood and some dip on the front fender above the place of the wheel... another problem: there's some trouble with the width of the car... it's a bit narrow...
I could tell more if you'd post some wire.
What software do you use?
Keep it up and good work for the Mustang (what year?)

TORNADO · 20-07-2005, 11:04 PM

Hay thanks for the reply gunsmith.I'll work on the edges this night I worked ot the width of the car I hope is better now.I have worked on the front of the car.I'm using 3D max 7.I have little problems with the place where the head-light has to be.Please can someone help me and tell me how to render with brazil but to see the wire I have seen this kind of render but I don't know how to do it.
The Mustang's year is 1964 I think!

jasont028 · 21-07-2005, 01:33 PM

Hey Tornado,
Good to see you've posted some of your work. Its coming along well, what method of modelling are you using? You have a few dips and things but if you post a wireframe of your model I might be able to help you more. Have you checked out the video tutorials on 3dpalace.com?

They are awesome and helped me create my model of my car. It goes through everything you need to model of a car. Even though your not modelling the same car it offers great advice cause there is a guy narrating the whole thing. You are doing well so far, keep up the work and keep posting updates

TORNADO · 21-07-2005, 01:53 PM

Hey thanks jasont028.I have to seat down and work on those dips.Actually I haven't seen the video tutorial you are talking about but unfortunately I cat even open the web page I don't know why!I want to ask you how to render a wire render with brazil, to see the car and the wire at the same time!
Thanks and bye for now!

jasont028 · 21-07-2005, 02:22 PM

Hey Tornado,
I'm not exactly sure how to do a wireframe render, What I do is screen capture whilst in a viewport using the printscreen button on your keyboard. Then resize it in photoshop. I'm sure there is a way to do it in Brazil however I used Brazil for a while then converted to Vray because it was quicker.

What happens when you try to open the page? Maybe you need to be a member to view that page. Try this one and follow the links under video tutorials. Its the Audi A3 tutorial.

http://www.3d-palace.com/

TORNADO · 21-07-2005, 08:46 PM

Thanks man everything's allright now.I have even seen the tutorial about the Audi A3.I'm not at home right now when I come home I'll download the tutorial!

TORNADO · 21-07-2005, 11:28 PM

O my god jasont028 I saw the first 4 parts of the tutorial and I LOVED it!!!Man unfortunately because of my really slow internet I will have all of the parts tomorow(I hope) I'm planning on starting the model again but using the new way!MAN I LOVE IT!Thanks man I really apreciate it!

Aza · 22-07-2005, 12:34 AM

tornado the cars looks like it could use a facelift there are alot of bugs here is a pic with the area`s that could use attenion
yellow=detach those poly`s making it easier for u 2 work but dont forget 2 chamfer the edge`s
red=u got 2 vertexs or more there that arent welded if u chamfer it u should weld the vertexs back thogher and try a smoother chamfer
blue=u move the body of the car inside but havent done the same with the door
black=just some random bugs mostly with vertexs that arent in a straight line u should try 2 fix them

if i where u i would first fix most of the car and then move on if u move on now u could make the car rather sh!tty and full or dents
good luck'

*EDIT* doh! lol stupid me lol now there on thnx for telling :P
oh btw i forgot 2 same tornado the car is still thin i think u should make it even wider

gunsmith · 22-07-2005, 03:00 AM

Hi Tornado,
I see you got a very good help... I downloaded the Audi A3 tutorial from 3d-palace site: it's the best car modelling tutorial I've ever seen! It can be useful further when you model your dream-mustang... Keep it up and have a good work!
Bye...

Hi Aza,
you forgot to attach your helping-image I think...

jasont028 · 22-07-2005, 08:26 AM

Hey Tornado

I'm glad you got to download it. Definitely the greatest car tutorial on the net that I have found. Trust me when I say that after you have done it, cars will become a heck of a lot easier to model. Best of luck with it and I hope to see some new posts soon.

20-07-2005, 01:19 AM	#1
TORNADO 3D max FAN! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bulgaria Rousse Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Fiat Uno Hi everyone.I was planing on starting a W.I.P on Ford Mustang but I decided to do this model first.I started it this morning and I have worked on it for 3 or 4 hours.I would be very grateful if you can give me some coments.Please tell me if something doesn't look right.Thanks! __________________ Believe in yourself and others will believe in you! My Models! Last edited by TORNADO; 20-07-2005 at 03:10 AM..

20-07-2005, 01:52 AM	#2
Ninto b4k4 Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 609 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I cannot view your images. Maybe you could attach them to your post? __________________ not obtain+1

20-07-2005, 02:01 AM	#3
TORNADO 3D max FAN! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bulgaria Rousse Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I'm sorry about the problems.I hope everything's allright now. __________________ Believe in yourself and others will believe in you! My Models!

20-07-2005, 06:51 PM	#4
TORNADO 3D max FAN! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bulgaria Rousse Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I worked some more on the model this morning I'll keep it up! __________________ Believe in yourself and others will believe in you! My Models!

20-07-2005, 11:04 PM	#6
TORNADO 3D max FAN! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bulgaria Rousse Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Hay thanks for the reply gunsmith.I'll work on the edges this night I worked ot the width of the car I hope is better now.I have worked on the front of the car.I'm using 3D max 7.I have little problems with the place where the head-light has to be.Please can someone help me and tell me how to render with brazil but to see the wire I have seen this kind of render but I don't know how to do it. The Mustang's year is 1964 I think! __________________ Believe in yourself and others will believe in you! My Models! Last edited by TORNADO; 21-07-2005 at 12:10 AM..

20-07-2005, 10:45 PM	#5
gunsmith Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Hungary Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi Tornado, I think your model is nice so far but the edges need some correction... especially the conjunction of the side and top... and I see some hump on the rear half of hood and some dip on the front fender above the place of the wheel... another problem: there's some trouble with the width of the car... it's a bit narrow... I could tell more if you'd post some wire. What software do you use? Keep it up and good work for the Mustang (what year?)

21-07-2005, 01:33 PM	#7
jasont028 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 202 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey Tornado, Good to see you've posted some of your work. Its coming along well, what method of modelling are you using? You have a few dips and things but if you post a wireframe of your model I might be able to help you more. Have you checked out the video tutorials on 3dpalace.com? They are awesome and helped me create my model of my car. It goes through everything you need to model of a car. Even though your not modelling the same car it offers great advice cause there is a guy narrating the whole thing. You are doing well so far, keep up the work and keep posting updates

21-07-2005, 01:53 PM	#8
TORNADO 3D max FAN! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bulgaria Rousse Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Hey thanks jasont028.I have to seat down and work on those dips.Actually I haven't seen the video tutorial you are talking about but unfortunately I cat even open the web page I don't know why!I want to ask you how to render a wire render with brazil, to see the car and the wire at the same time! Thanks and bye for now! __________________ Believe in yourself and others will believe in you! My Models! Last edited by TORNADO; 21-07-2005 at 01:59 PM..

21-07-2005, 02:22 PM	#9
jasont028 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 202 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey Tornado, I'm not exactly sure how to do a wireframe render, What I do is screen capture whilst in a viewport using the printscreen button on your keyboard. Then resize it in photoshop. I'm sure there is a way to do it in Brazil however I used Brazil for a while then converted to Vray because it was quicker. What happens when you try to open the page? Maybe you need to be a member to view that page. Try this one and follow the links under video tutorials. Its the Audi A3 tutorial. http://www.3d-palace.com/ Last edited by jasont028; 21-07-2005 at 02:25 PM..

21-07-2005, 08:46 PM	#10
TORNADO 3D max FAN! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bulgaria Rousse Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Thanks man everything's allright now.I have even seen the tutorial about the Audi A3.I'm not at home right now when I come home I'll download the tutorial! __________________ Believe in yourself and others will believe in you! My Models!

21-07-2005, 11:28 PM	#11
TORNADO 3D max FAN! Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Bulgaria Rousse Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	O my god jasont028 I saw the first 4 parts of the tutorial and I LOVED it!!!Man unfortunately because of my really slow internet I will have all of the parts tomorow(I hope) I'm planning on starting the model again but using the new way!MAN I LOVE IT!Thanks man I really apreciate it! __________________ Believe in yourself and others will believe in you! My Models!

22-07-2005, 12:34 AM	#12
Aza Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: netherlands Posts: 263 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	tornado the cars looks like it could use a facelift there are alot of bugs here is a pic with the area`s that could use attenion yellow=detach those poly`s making it easier for u 2 work but dont forget 2 chamfer the edge`s red=u got 2 vertexs or more there that arent welded if u chamfer it u should weld the vertexs back thogher and try a smoother chamfer blue=u move the body of the car inside but havent done the same with the door black=just some random bugs mostly with vertexs that arent in a straight line u should try 2 fix them if i where u i would first fix most of the car and then move on if u move on now u could make the car rather sh!tty and full or dents good luck' EDIT doh! lol stupid me lol now there on thnx for telling :P oh btw i forgot 2 same tornado the car is still thin i think u should make it even wider __________________ school who needs it......... Last edited by Aza; 22-07-2005 at 05:31 AM..

22-07-2005, 03:00 AM	#13
gunsmith Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Hungary Posts: 65 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi Tornado, I see you got a very good help... I downloaded the Audi A3 tutorial from 3d-palace site: it's the best car modelling tutorial I've ever seen! It can be useful further when you model your dream-mustang... Keep it up and have a good work! Bye... Hi Aza, you forgot to attach your helping-image I think...

22-07-2005, 08:26 AM	#14
jasont028 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 202 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey Tornado I'm glad you got to download it. Definitely the greatest car tutorial on the net that I have found. Trust me when I say that after you have done it, cars will become a heck of a lot easier to model. Best of luck with it and I hope to see some new posts soon.

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