Lookin' for my Book

[ipdesigner]

*first post here..pls c&c

[Rubber Chicken]

The scene is generally very nice, however I feel one of the things letting it down is the door and the door handle, could do with some more detail there , also the chairs I think the brown is ment to be wood but it looks a little like plastic. But otherwise very nice .

[DawizNJ]

I think the light might be a bit too bright. Heh, too many rhyming words in that previous sentence.

Also, and it might be due to the light brightness, I cannot see any details on the other side of the door. I'm not sure if this is what you were going for, but it was the first thing I noticed and it detracted me from the scene.

Other than that minor nitpick, great work!

[Runneri]

Actually that time what those chairs are representing, wood was handled with waxes and lacquers so that they didnt look much like wood. Take a look at japanese lacquered woodcrafts too!!
I agree that the door handle could be more detailed or material better chosen.
I love that light.

[fastrak]

Door again....needs the door "jam", you know, the trim on the inside of a doorway that keeps it from swinging the wrong direction. Also, on the rail of the door, the side of the door knob, there should be a little "thingy" (don't remember what it's called) stickin out a little, least it is on all the doors I use.
Seems like the grout level is flush with the tiles, need to lower it a bit.
And, it looks like there is no other light source in the room expect what is coming through the doorway, meaning no windows or skylights, meaning my wife would kill me if I put those kind of plants in a room with no direct light source.
Just a thought or two.

[ipdesigner]

*Rubber Chicken, DawizNJ, Runneri and fastrak thnaks for all your comments guys!!
* Most of your comments are regarding my door, its detais and so with the handle. Anyway, i forgot to mention that this is just a test for me using vray lights. its my first time to use this kind of light because its so hard and very heavy for rendering. I normally used 'photometric-free point' on general lighting and 'direct light' is passing through the room. Objects on the scene were all free-stuffs! aside from the wall and door of course. I made this scene in a day plus rendering and I was so happy with the output.

*Anyway, thanks for all the critics , all are noted!

[ipdesigner]

*Rubber Chicken, DawizNJ, Runneri and fastrak thnaks for all your comments guys!!
* Most of your comments are regarding the door and its details and so with the handle. Anyway, i forgot to mention that this is just a test render using 'vray light'. Its my first time to use this kind of light because its so hard and so heavy for rendering. I normally used 'photometric-free point' on general lighting and 'direct light' if passing through a room. Objects on the scene were all free-stuffs! aside from the wall and door of course. I made this scene in a day plus rendering and I was so happy with the output.

*Anyway, thanks for all the critics , all notes listed!