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Old 16-08-2005, 08:21 PM   #1
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Question Another Nightelf

I decided to redo a Nightelf I started a few months ago....
I finished the face yesterday and now I am working on the body again.
Some C & C would be great!

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Old 16-08-2005, 09:23 PM   #2
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Very nice... Can't wait to see the rest of the figure... The modeling is very clean, doesn't look like you have any strey poly's or vertices.. Keep it up!
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Old 17-08-2005, 03:11 AM   #3
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Hi Sephiron, head shape is good but i really think you should work on the ear a bit more
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Old 17-08-2005, 03:25 AM   #4
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could you please tell me what exactly is wrong or what needs to be redone?
here and some wires of the head

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Old 17-08-2005, 06:01 AM   #5
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The part where the ear connects to the head.. it looks weird to me.. but it could be just me
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Old 17-08-2005, 02:12 PM   #6
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looms pretty good. although the ears could be a bit longer, looks more like a high elf now

and post a non smoothed wire, we might be able to see better what up with the ear-meets-head area
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Old 17-08-2005, 03:06 PM   #7
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I will tweak a bit on the ears , mainly on the head-meets-ear region.
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You know, every one wants something else....in another forum they all wanted shorter ears
I think I will make them longer and change some other things, to make him look more like a Blizzard's Nightelf but then I let them alone ^^

here is the non smoothed wire
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Old 17-08-2005, 07:58 PM   #8
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and here are some pictures showing the new ears...
what do you think about them?
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Old 18-08-2005, 01:56 AM   #9
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great job sephiron, it looks good i think you need to define the ear where it loops and goes into the head.. i hope im being helpful im still a newbie :-P
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Old 18-08-2005, 01:42 PM   #10
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i hope im being helpful im still a newbie :-P
yes! I am happy about every help ich can get!

About what you said about the ear region:
I will redo this area and this time I will comply with the references I can get from the Sneak Peak video of WoW and from the W3 videos.....
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