I'm poor

Mr.Sharky · 05-09-2005, 01:50 AM

Hey. I was so tempted to make an exterior scene. So i decided to make a poor apartment building. i have started the door. The map is from total textures v2 but i did lots of refining in photoshop to make it be a door texture. Tell me if you like the model, and if u like the green or brown one. Any suggestions, crits, etc. are needed. Thanks.

Mac · 05-09-2005, 02:14 AM

I like the brown door better, as it helps to exemplify the run down look of the building/room itself as ithink that the green door would be more of an outside entrance to the apartment block itself

Mr.Sharky · 05-09-2005, 03:01 AM

hey, yes this is an exterior scene. so the door will be visible from the outside, not the inside. so i should use the green one?

thanks for commenting

Mr.Sharky · 05-09-2005, 05:41 AM

Update time. I made a handle, rails, cloth, some better texturing.

Mr.Sharky · 05-09-2005, 06:16 AM

Update. I fixed the door texture. The unwrapped version had some tiling which made it look fake. I think it looks better.

also, any suggestions about what should be around the door? should the building start, or should there be some stone border?

RetardedMonkey · 05-09-2005, 06:28 AM

I like this concept the door is looking really good. The only thing that I see is the curtains and the glass. They need to be dirtier they dont go along with the door.

Mr.Sharky · 05-09-2005, 07:28 AM

Thanks Retarted Monkey (lmao). I was gonna do that at the end. Here's the update. Double doors. Any ideas for a stone frame or what?

Mr.Sharky · 05-09-2005, 09:24 AM

Update. ANY ideas for details on the stone border around the doors are appreciated. Thanks!

Mac · 05-09-2005, 08:07 PM

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Update. ANY ideas for details on the stone border around the doors are appreciated. Thanks!

ok that looks perfect to me..for the stone i think if you add maybe som weathering and staining from the likes of the sun/rain/general street detritus would make the stone look more crumbly, the odd patch of moss in the darker edges would look good too

Mr.Sharky · 06-09-2005, 03:29 AM

Hey man, thanks for commenting. I totally agree with you about the texturing. Update time. I changed the "stone frame", i wasn't happy with the previous one. still no "Broken" details to it though. (you think i should change the round pole?)

RickStefani · 06-09-2005, 04:53 AM

I like the shakyness you have going on. The chipped paint is great. Keap her building up.

Mac · 06-09-2005, 06:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Mr.Sharky

Hey man, thanks for commenting. I totally agree with you about the texturing. Update time. I changed the "stone frame", i wasn't happy with the previous one. still no "Broken" details to it though. (you think i should change the round pole?)

i think you should try one with a square pole also as it could help choose which one you licke better, tho i was impressed with the first stone outer too. well keep plugging at it and see how it goes

Mr.Sharky · 08-09-2005, 12:16 AM

hey mac, thanks for posting. Update. I did some fracture tests, and decided to make the poles boxy. I think this fracture is way too broken down, but maybe the viewers have a different perspective. C&C pls.

Mr.Sharky · 08-09-2005, 04:39 AM

Update. I started texturing. I will add graffitti later on. Still gotta fix some parts of the texture on some stones (i only textured half)

inveni0 · 08-09-2005, 06:11 AM

Making sufficient progress! Lots of potential here, but nothing that hasn't been seen before. I hope that this image contains a twist to make it unique in concept.

05-09-2005, 01:50 AM	#1
Mr.Sharky Beast Of Prey Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 708 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'm poor Hey. I was so tempted to make an exterior scene. So i decided to make a poor apartment building. i have started the door. The map is from total textures v2 but i did lots of refining in photoshop to make it be a door texture. Tell me if you like the model, and if u like the green or brown one. Any suggestions, crits, etc. are needed. Thanks.

05-09-2005, 02:14 AM	#2
Mac Evil Kaiser Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: In the Matrix Posts: 27 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like the brown door better, as it helps to exemplify the run down look of the building/room itself as ithink that the green door would be more of an outside entrance to the apartment block itself __________________ WIP:Heavy Rig "I stood on the corpse of the world and declared myself Emperor"

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RickStefani delinquent account Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: USA Posts: 1,326 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like the shakyness you have going on. The chipped paint is great. Keap her building up. __________________ Fatal what??? F***, forgot to save.

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inveni0 Man of the Hour Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Why right here, of course... Posts: 6,805 Thanks: 40 Thanked 35 Times in 31 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Making sufficient progress! Lots of potential here, but nothing that hasn't been seen before. I hope that this image contains a twist to make it unique in concept. __________________ The Easter Bunny is a MONSTER! - It's Out!

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05-09-2005, 03:01 AM	#3
Mr.Sharky Beast Of Prey Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 708 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey, yes this is an exterior scene. so the door will be visible from the outside, not the inside. so i should use the green one? thanks for commenting

05-09-2005, 05:41 AM	#4
Mr.Sharky Beast Of Prey Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 708 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Update time. I made a handle, rails, cloth, some better texturing.

05-09-2005, 06:16 AM	#5
Mr.Sharky Beast Of Prey Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 708 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Update. I fixed the door texture. The unwrapped version had some tiling which made it look fake. I think it looks better. also, any suggestions about what should be around the door? should the building start, or should there be some stone border?

05-09-2005, 06:28 AM	#6
RetardedMonkey Registered User Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like this concept the door is looking really good. The only thing that I see is the curtains and the glass. They need to be dirtier they dont go along with the door.

05-09-2005, 07:28 AM	#7
Mr.Sharky Beast Of Prey Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 708 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks Retarted Monkey (lmao). I was gonna do that at the end. Here's the update. Double doors. Any ideas for a stone frame or what?

05-09-2005, 09:24 AM	#8
Mr.Sharky Beast Of Prey Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 708 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Update. ANY ideas for details on the stone border around the doors are appreciated. Thanks!

06-09-2005, 03:29 AM	#10
Mr.Sharky Beast Of Prey Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 708 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey man, thanks for commenting. I totally agree with you about the texturing. Update time. I changed the "stone frame", i wasn't happy with the previous one. still no "Broken" details to it though. (you think i should change the round pole?)

08-09-2005, 12:16 AM	#13
Mr.Sharky Beast Of Prey Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 708 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey mac, thanks for posting. Update. I did some fracture tests, and decided to make the poles boxy. I think this fracture is way too broken down, but maybe the viewers have a different perspective. C&C pls.

08-09-2005, 04:39 AM	#14
Mr.Sharky Beast Of Prey Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 708 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Update. I started texturing. I will add graffitti later on. Still gotta fix some parts of the texture on some stones (i only textured half)

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