My first organic model

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 02:02 PM

i've yust started making organic model on MAYA.
i have yust started on an eye.
what do you think so far?

phonicsmonkey · 17-09-2005, 02:11 PM

um, theres not much to crit at the moment but I can see that maybe you're starting to veer in the wrong direction with this. The tear duct bit is sticking outwards for some reason?! I would advise you to work on all of the loops around the eye to make the socket, the lids etc. and then working on the tear duct, the first time I made an eye I made the same mistake and it ended up with the loops being really messed up. Try and rough out all of the basic shapes, then going in to work in the details. Good luck matey!

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 02:20 PM

better?

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 02:40 PM

now then. another upgr

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 03:33 PM

new upgrade

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 03:34 PM

cant i have ANY feedback? pleease!

matti · 17-09-2005, 03:40 PM

well um eee. it definetly looks like eye but there is something wrong in the corner(i think you`ve noticed it too

) maybe try this tut it`s really great .:LINK:.

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 03:54 PM

wowza!
great tut. thanks

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 03:59 PM

upgrade

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 04:36 PM

another upgrade

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 05:32 PM

Oh Comooon!!! At Least Give Me Some Feedback!!!!!!!!

matti · 17-09-2005, 05:54 PM

could you post up th wire??

Wizenedoldman · 17-09-2005, 06:14 PM

Would you mind making your renders smaller in dimensional size? Makes it easier to see them. Here's my advice, don't dive into the deepend from the get go, start off with figuring out your tools and how they effect the mesh, figure out how to do things first. Go through the packaged tutorials with your software, they're often some of the best one's out there, I know the Max one's are fantastic for getting to understanding the interface and toolset.

It seems like you've grabbed a 3D app and decided to create a complex model without getting to know the software first. I know you've only started with an eye and it's a big conclusion to jump to but I can see where this model is heading and it won't be pretty.

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 07:00 PM

how can i make them smaller in "dimensional site"?

DahWan · 17-09-2005, 07:01 PM

new upgr.......

17-09-2005, 02:02 PM	#1
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	My first organic model i've yust started making organic model on MAYA. i have yust started on an eye. what do you think so far? __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 02:11 PM	#2
phonicsmonkey I love XSI Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 118 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	um, theres not much to crit at the moment but I can see that maybe you're starting to veer in the wrong direction with this. The tear duct bit is sticking outwards for some reason?! I would advise you to work on all of the loops around the eye to make the socket, the lids etc. and then working on the tear duct, the first time I made an eye I made the same mistake and it ended up with the loops being really messed up. Try and rough out all of the basic shapes, then going in to work in the details. Good luck matey! __________________ Orangutan WIP

17-09-2005, 02:20 PM	#3
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	better? __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 02:40 PM	#4
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	upgrade now then. another upgr __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 03:33 PM	#5
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	new upgrade __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 03:34 PM	#6
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	cant i have ANY feedback? pleease! __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 03:40 PM	#7
matti hmm... Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Poland,Sz-n Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	well um eee. it definetly looks like eye but there is something wrong in the corner(i think you`ve noticed it too) maybe try this tut it`s really great .:LINK:. __________________ Portfolio Contact Last edited by matti; 17-09-2005 at 03:45 PM..

17-09-2005, 03:54 PM	#8
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	wowza! great tut. thanks __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 03:59 PM	#9
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	upgrade __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 04:36 PM	#10
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	another upgrade __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 05:32 PM	#11
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Oh Comooon!!! At Least Give Me Some Feedback!!!!!!!! __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 05:54 PM	#12
matti hmm... Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Poland,Sz-n Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	could you post up th wire?? __________________ Portfolio Contact

17-09-2005, 06:14 PM	#13
Wizenedoldman Flame-ed Loon Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Tatsumaki! Posts: 62 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Would you mind making your renders smaller in dimensional size? Makes it easier to see them. Here's my advice, don't dive into the deepend from the get go, start off with figuring out your tools and how they effect the mesh, figure out how to do things first. Go through the packaged tutorials with your software, they're often some of the best one's out there, I know the Max one's are fantastic for getting to understanding the interface and toolset. It seems like you've grabbed a 3D app and decided to create a complex model without getting to know the software first. I know you've only started with an eye and it's a big conclusion to jump to but I can see where this model is heading and it won't be pretty. __________________ Awww nuts My portfolio: http://www.members.optusnet.com.au/rwiffen

17-09-2005, 07:00 PM	#14
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	how can i make them smaller in "dimensional site"? __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

17-09-2005, 07:01 PM	#15
DahWan sup? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 1,243 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	new upgr....... __________________ CHALLENGE AWARDS: honorable mentions: Hero Robot Wine Rack Outdoor Grill Napkin Holder runner up's none... winners: none... - Too bad mostly all awards have been purged from the servers :P

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