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Old 21-09-2005, 10:11 PM   #1
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Porsche 959

HI, everybody.
This is a render I've done about a year ago, the first and the only one car I've ever modeled. Need you opinion for future reference.

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Old 22-09-2005, 04:06 AM   #2
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The model looks fine, I can't spot any errors, and I like the reflective chrome a lot. The colours are desaturated, but their nuances fit well ( some light pink from the sky next to a pure blue, all in contrast with the orange Porsche logo ).
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Old 22-09-2005, 08:10 PM   #3
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Sweet model man, what package did you use to model / render?
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Old 22-09-2005, 08:50 PM   #4
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The 959 is longer than this, but good job over all. Just need to check your reference photos...and stick her in a scene!
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Old 22-09-2005, 09:54 PM   #5
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shaders looks great, but the model itself seems abit off proportion.. juz like inveni0 said, should be longer
n the car still floating.. need works for the shadows
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Old 23-09-2005, 12:20 AM   #6
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Toolboy: I used maya to model, render with mental ray.

Inveni0 & Siregar: Yes, I know is a bit off proportion, I've used bad references. A dome with HDR image was used to illuminate the scene, I need to work on final gather values to get good shadow effect.
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Old 25-09-2005, 07:02 AM   #7
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Looks a bit squished in from either end...but the render is pretty good! Nice job!
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