Character Modeling

WESP · 09-11-2005, 12:59 PM

Hi there,

This is a character i started on a while ago from a sketch i ones mad,
but i think the model is not quite there yet.

any comments and critics are very welcome!
thanks,

WSP.

hotsalsaept · 09-11-2005, 01:02 PM

I like the pose, but his arms seem alittle to long.

flstudios · 09-11-2005, 01:05 PM

i think that you probably need more detail before you smooth it

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Hallaj · 09-11-2005, 04:15 PM

i agree with Flstudios , why don't you give him more time to work on details

WESP · 10-11-2005, 02:31 PM

what kind of detail would you add?
iam thinking of giving him some clothes or something???

flstudios · 10-11-2005, 02:43 PM

detail meaning -look at some pics of characters - the joints and parts of the body and face are more defined - not just all blending in to each other. It looks like you have hardly any polygons in the mesh then added a mesh smooth and its all just blended together!
Hope you understand what im saying!?

Sathe · 14-11-2005, 03:47 AM

I am not much a of a character artist but it looks like you have the base mesh. Now to ad definaition try adding a few more lines around the bicep and elbow area, and remember the closer to edges are to eachother the sharper it becomes when smoothed. It will get there but characters take time.

DahWan · 15-11-2005, 05:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sathe

I am not much a of a character artist

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehahah... haha, what ever you say, you are the best character artist I have ever seen

WESP · 15-11-2005, 05:48 PM

thanks for the compliment

09-11-2005, 12:59 PM	#1
WESP Registered User Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Character Modeling Hi there, This is a character i started on a while ago from a sketch i ones mad, but i think the model is not quite there yet. any comments and critics are very welcome! thanks, WSP.

09-11-2005, 01:05 PM	#3
flstudios floating log studios Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Dubai - From UK Posts: 78 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i think that you probably need more detail before you smooth it ) __________________ floating log studios

10-11-2005, 02:43 PM	#6
flstudios floating log studios Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Dubai - From UK Posts: 78 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	detail meaning -look at some pics of characters - the joints and parts of the body and face are more defined - not just all blending in to each other. It looks like you have hardly any polygons in the mesh then added a mesh smooth and its all just blended together! Hope you understand what im saying!? __________________ floating log studios

14-11-2005, 03:47 AM	#7
Sathe Hardstyle Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 3,367 Thanks: 97 Thanked 44 Times in 38 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	I am not much a of a character artist but it looks like you have the base mesh. Now to ad definaition try adding a few more lines around the bicep and elbow area, and remember the closer to edges are to eachother the sharper it becomes when smoothed. It will get there but characters take time. __________________ ______________________________ Hard Surface Essentials http://vimeo.com/10941211 Threedy 4 life

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09-11-2005, 01:02 PM	#2
hotsalsaept Registered User Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 163 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like the pose, but his arms seem alittle to long.

09-11-2005, 04:15 PM	#4
Hallaj Registered User Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Egypt Posts: 37 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i agree with Flstudios , why don't you give him more time to work on details

10-11-2005, 02:31 PM	#5
WESP Registered User Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	what kind of detail would you add? iam thinking of giving him some clothes or something???

15-11-2005, 05:48 PM	#9
WESP Registered User Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for the compliment

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