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Old 12-11-2005, 12:48 PM   #1
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[Pheonix Landing Craft]

Modelling has taken a couple of hours so far, probably wont get much further before i get bored again but ill post it up to see what you think... mainly gonna be texturing and effects practise again, assuming I can get the body right that is. Leg/jets are just basic place holders for the final thing.

ALL ideas welcome. Even the bad ones.
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Old 12-11-2005, 05:21 PM   #2
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The front window is coming along nicely, but the rest of the ship looks way too rounded. It hardly looks mechanical at all. Now, with that in mind, things I would suggest is sharpening up the edges and lengthening the wings. Maybe at some paneling and rivits to the hull as well to add that extra bit of detail. You are off to a good start and I say keep it and this could turn out really good.
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Old 14-11-2005, 09:09 AM   #3
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Thanks, still got lots to learn yet. Update.
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Old 14-11-2005, 02:05 PM   #4
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Update.. Looks like a bus =/
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Old 15-11-2005, 02:26 AM   #5
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hehe, first of two ideas for the jets...
The main problem for me is the random detail and panel-joins,
but I have some ideas
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I think that the jet you have posted look cool. Keep it up.
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Old 15-11-2005, 05:58 AM   #7
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Too much detail on the jet and almost none on the entire ship... think it's gonna end up weird.. why don't you try adding an engine/turbine in the beggining of the wings, and a few headlights (I can't remember the exact word ) may be
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Old 15-11-2005, 11:39 PM   #8
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Thanks Track Maniac

Jazko, i'm adding that level of detail to the whole ship, so it shouldnt look too wierd. currently im thinking i should drop the smooth look.
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Old 16-11-2005, 07:44 AM   #9
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This is the direction im taking it in...
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Old 17-11-2005, 09:44 AM   #10
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Update, new jet design - I think it looks better.
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Old 17-11-2005, 02:39 PM   #11
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I prefer the first model of jets, but an overview of all perhaps makes me cahnge advise
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