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Old 28-12-2005, 07:50 PM   #1
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g-Turbo [car, own design]

Hello once again..

Heres something what I have been doing few days. Yes, its a car, even it doesnt look like This is my second car, first didnt ever complete. Its not actually own design, just the "best" parts of other cars what I have seen somewhere. At the sketch you can see what kind it will come, if I will continue till end.

Please comments, critiques and thougths what I could do to this
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Old 28-12-2005, 10:31 PM   #2
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Forgot the clay pic..
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Old 29-12-2005, 03:45 AM   #3
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hey goljat! it looks clean, i wanna see the end of it..! ,

But i am not sure, about the front grille.. looks weird..
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Old 29-12-2005, 08:47 AM   #4
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the first word that comes to mind when i see that grill is 'whale' everything else looks pretty good though!
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Old 29-12-2005, 05:06 PM   #5
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Whale! That was funny Yeh I have been thinking to change that. Now I only have to find some nice grill. Thanks for comments.
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Looks pretty good Goljat.
Did you made a sketch of the car ? or is it just out of your head ?
Anyway i like the design.
Allso could you maybe post a wire of the rim ?
Keep it up !
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Old 30-12-2005, 01:44 AM   #7
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great stuff, this one lloks very promising keep it up.

btw, what real life cars is it inspired in(if any)?
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Old 30-12-2005, 01:56 AM   #8
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Sky_Eagle, I didnt understand your question I made the sketch but its from my head(?). THe wire you can see below.

There is some Audi, Lexus and NFS MW bodykit Thats what it try to be.
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Old 30-12-2005, 03:06 PM   #9
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Another "whale" grill With a nose
Please like it, I run out of ideas..You can freely(?) give some ideas if thats not so sexy..

Someone could tell how to do nice carbon fiber with vray.. For the bumber

[e] Added the carbon but if someone knows how to do nicer, please tell

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Old 08-01-2006, 12:14 AM   #10
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Please help me.. I cant find or imagine any nice front grill Give some suggestions. At the attachment you can see its still a whale
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1 word "Sketch"
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I think the grille arcs up to high. Try to make the top a horizontal line. Also, I'm not too fond of how far the front air dam sticks out at the "points."

As a side note, I found out a while ago (I still have some dead concepts floating around) that picking and choosing the best parts of different cars and molding them together rarely works. You have to start with one basic shape that the details have to flow with. Also, don't worry about materials just yet. That headache should come after the model is done or at least close to.

Just my 2 cents
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Old 03-02-2006, 03:51 PM   #13
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Red face

Exam weak is over finaly, back to model. Now I have been doing the basic shape. Now its just a "consept car", not "the best parts" car..

If some one know how to get material and render settings windows to main monitor, please tell Because they are now out of the monitor and I cant mix them, have to use that red on everything. My second monitor where they used to be is now at repair..

C&C wellcome


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Make sure to weld these points when you attach the parts together so that it won't curve up like that. Looks good so far though.

Edit: Forgot the pic lol.
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Old 07-02-2006, 11:45 PM   #15
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Hi guys..
Here is a litle update. Cutted the door and made some shape to side skirt. Also made side mirror.

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