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qais · 25-02-2006, 11:17 PM

Hey all,this my latest work
nth much to say (character practicing)
Hope u like it!

Mr. Bluesummers-3DT · 25-02-2006, 11:31 PM

Hey there, I've got a few critiques for you.

It's a nice image, but below her eyebrows the skin gets lighter. Why is that? It may be an artifact of the render, or perhaps this was in your texturemap. However it came around, it's kind of blunt when looking at the image.

The geometry is nice; very cartoony and fun to look at. The background however, and your HDRI map are both very realistic. I'd suggest using something in the same style. Use the HDRI for lighting, but certainly not as the background and reflect map. The trained eye can see you used the same map, in planar mapping no less, for both aspects of the image. HDRIs are usually spherical projections, so be sure to use them accordingly.

Also, you can see where I circled below her headress. It makes me feel like she doesn't have a body below this head. I'm sure you didn't create a whole body for this bust, but the problem is that the current composition hints at such a situation. Consider removing that hole, and putting in a few more details.

Good work,

qais · 25-02-2006, 11:36 PM

Thank you so much Guy BlueSummers-3DT for the comments

chris89 · 26-02-2006, 02:49 PM

i like it!

and i like the concept
maybe a gun in the left part of the picture?

agony · 27-02-2006, 06:18 PM

nice modling, I konw it is a cartoony modling but I think that a little noise in the texure would be nice.
it is good though that you have some time to work on this model since your are a tawjihi student "or I think you are".

25-02-2006, 11:17 PM	#1
qais 89 Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Amman,Jordan Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Undercover Hey all,this my latest work nth much to say (character practicing) Hope u like it! High Res __________________ Latest Works ---Honorable Mentions--- -Air Freshener -Lantern -Microscope

25-02-2006, 11:31 PM	#2
Mr. Bluesummers-3DT Supplies Coordinator Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: United States Posts: 3,343 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 8 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Hey there, I've got a few critiques for you. It's a nice image, but below her eyebrows the skin gets lighter. Why is that? It may be an artifact of the render, or perhaps this was in your texturemap. However it came around, it's kind of blunt when looking at the image. The geometry is nice; very cartoony and fun to look at. The background however, and your HDRI map are both very realistic. I'd suggest using something in the same style. Use the HDRI for lighting, but certainly not as the background and reflect map. The trained eye can see you used the same map, in planar mapping no less, for both aspects of the image. HDRIs are usually spherical projections, so be sure to use them accordingly. Also, you can see where I circled below her headress. It makes me feel like she doesn't have a body below this head. I'm sure you didn't create a whole body for this bust, but the problem is that the current composition hints at such a situation. Consider removing that hole, and putting in a few more details. Good work, __________________ Be sure to check out my blog because there's tons of useful resources there: Free 3dsMax Video Tutorials 3dsMax Tutorials and Articles 3dsMax Downloads and Scripts

25-02-2006, 11:36 PM	#3
qais 89 Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Amman,Jordan Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thank you so much Guy BlueSummers-3DT for the comments __________________ Latest Works ---Honorable Mentions--- -Air Freshener -Lantern -Microscope

27-02-2006, 06:18 PM	#5
agony Registered User Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Jordan Posts: 579 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice modling, I konw it is a cartoony modling but I think that a little noise in the texure would be nice. it is good though that you have some time to work on this model since your are a tawjihi student "or I think you are". __________________ the life revolve like a carrot, one day in your hand, and ten days in your butt. Online Profile Last edited by agony; 27-02-2006 at 06:21 PM..

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26-02-2006, 02:49 PM	#4
chris89 ._O Join Date: May 2004 Location: the netherlands Posts: 423 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like it! and i like the concept maybe a gun in the left part of the picture?

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