Jessica - Female Model [NUDITY]

[Shunters]

I must apologise for having to make a new thread for this as last time I got seriously fed up and deleted the thread as I wasn't happy with how things were going... after having some time away from it I have come back, gone back a few steps and refined the model a bit more

I have defined the front of the model more and moved some bits around... I need to add details to the back more still so thats why it seems a bit too "smooth" compared to the front

And the head is still a little too small for the body but will sort that out when the body is done...

Much happier with it now:







And again with Fastskin:

[Deto]

Her back needs lil bit more work, as you said yourself

Here's a pretty good picture showing how the 'back' bones go with skin

http://www.mcnews.com.au/motorcycler...mages/girl.jpg

Hope it helps!

[bigfootbob]

hey dude, i like what yoú have done so far.
i am modelling my first female model at the moment. just looking at some of the features you have modelled so far, has helped me figure out problems with mine.

look forward to seeing more
cheers

-BFB-

[Shunters]

Thanks for that Deto I will have a good look thanks


bigfootbob - I am not sure how I could have helped much this is my first female body model too lol

[sarN]

the body looks good but really large in scale compared to the head. the breast is really the size of the head O_o but great modelling, shes very pretty

[Shunters]

Originally Posted by sarN

the body looks good but really large in scale compared to the head. the breast is really the size of the head O_o but great modelling, shes very pretty

Yeah I know Since I said so in my original post

"And the head is still a little too small for the body but will sort that out when the body is done..."

But thanks for noticing

[Shunters]

Here are some small updates:

I have worked on the back some more... that picture Deto gave me was a great help!


Tweaked a couple of bits and made the belly button a little bigger and shallower...

[Nardes]

Looking good!
But the belly button feels slightly too big . The rest looks very natural though.

[Shunters]

Thanks Nardes, you're right about the belly button, i have reduced it slightly now, but isn't really worth posting an image up for

[Deto]

Mind if I draw few red lines over the picture to show how I'd change?

[Shunters]

Of course not go ahead Any help is appreciated!

[Deto]

My thoughts

Back image:
- Back :: I think you need to pull the 'bones'/back backwards a little, to give more shape to the back (too many back words)
- Bottom :: I think you need to 'tighten' up the butt flow (butt vs lower back flow), as its right now, it looks little like someone cut slice off
- Bottom even lower :: You need to 'hang' butts a little bit, I mean, you don't even need fat, even if you're very thin, you still usually have little hanging there when standing

Frontal image:
- Breast flow / connect :: It seems that the breasts and arms connect to the body, but have no connection between each other. You should connect the beast to the arm, they're like 'flaps' that go from arm to chest. I mean, strip, hold your hand up and look at mirror, explains it better
- Breast smooth :: As breasts hang, if they're natural, you should make the below nipple section 'round', right now it looks like she has some extra bags inside, but then again, there's millions of styles of bodies and... breasts
- Butt again :: I think her hip needs little more fat to fit better to the whole body theme which is very 'real'
- Stomach hang :: There's little elevation where stomach connects to the lower stomach, there should be smooth hang (not hang really, just 'elevation')
- Legs vs body :: I think you should smooth the 'fold' little earlier, and more smoothly But do it downwards, not upwards

Keep it up! Can't wait to see more

And picture below:

[Rych]

Hello,

I love the look on her face very cool, Also you might want to change her belly button, right now it just looks like a cirle indentation.

baron

[Mr.Sharky]

Awesome sexy expression on the face!

[Avatar-3DT]

A sweet model indeed. She is vry expresive even without any textures aldo the features of her face are a bit to the cartoony/comix side rather than realistic. Deto had some very interesting observations, you should read them carefully. Nice going so far.