Girl(nudity)

[Cankli]

Hey guys...have started yet another model without finishing the previous one...heh. I'll finish my blowfish soon tho. Hears a new female model i'm working on. C&C welcome and apreciated. I've got the head and hands mostly done now, and am gonna start working on the body. Still a number of tweaks for both, but I figure i'll get into the nuances once I've got most of the body finished. Fire away.

[Cankli]

And here's the hands so far

[xcx]

Your blowfish model was very nice model and very clean. I hope than this one shows same quatility. So far it looking good. Can we see wires?

[Cankli]

for sure bro, i'll post them tomorrow. Thanks for the nice comments for the blowfish btw....i just cant seem to finish a project, heh. And all it needs it texturing. Oh well, next year.

[Cankli]

Here's the wires, XCX. There's a couple broken edges and stuff that i still need to fix, and some other reshaping and detail work that needs to be done, but i'm going to focus on the rest of the model and do all that stuff at the end. So i don't get too hung up on the nuances right at the beginning, hehe.

[Cankli]

and the hands

[xcx]

Looking good. And I agree your way of working. It is allways good to "take over" whole model before tuning.

[URs3D.net]

Looking very good.The finger nails seem a bit too round. I'll keep track with this thread

[Cankli]

here's the body so far

[Cankli]

another update

[Deto]

Good looking so far. The stomach/body area is great

Few things that stick out a little. I think her breasts sack a little too much. I mean they're too 'round' over the bottom of them (where they connect to body).

Other thing that troubles me a bit is the sharp 'fold' where the pelvis connects to the legs. I think it should be little more smoothy

Her ankles look a little bit too think compared to rest of the legs, and also it looks little weird as they bend so much. Intentional?

The arms ain't probably ready yet, but I'll comment anyhow. I think you should add little more details to them. I mean, they're very undetailed compared to rest of the great model

And about face, it looks very manly. Maybe it should be stretched a little more to the sides (or down vertically) and make her cheeks a little more round

Can't wait to see more updates

Oh and those hands look very good

[Cankli]

thanks for the crits Deto. I agree with you on the legs, and am going to fix that. As for the pelvise, i see what you mean. And the crease is just there because I ended and edge for the time being, but i'll fix that too. Could you clarify what you meant by the brest not looking right? Anyways, thanx for your input bro, and here's the updated arm and such.

good start
there are some things you need to change.
Aside from the breasts and vagina there are no signs that this is a woman.
On the head think higher cheekbones thinner neck...
Where the top of the leg meets the torso is too straight across you need to pull the outer edges upwards to achieve a nice "v" shape that begins ant the vagina and ends just above the hip bone.
The butt is needing work it needs to be more rounded and fleshier.
In the side view of the legs on the upper leg pull the edges on the backside outwards round that area a bit.
The lower legs are bow legged at the moment..there should be a slight curve there yes but it is too much atm.
It`s a very good start but it needs to be tweaked.
Modelling is 10% creation-90% tweaking

good luck

[Deto]

I mean saggy, as breasts start to 'hang' at old age, sacking. Not sure what's the real word for it

What I mean is, the bottom of the breasts is very round and its 'hanging' over the spot where breasts connect to chest, which makes her breasts look very old, or rather bad shape... I mean, pencil test? Your breasts are getting bad/saggy if your breasts 'hold' the pencil on their own, when you put it in to the connect point. If they don't, you have good breasts

[Cankli]

Hey guys, here's the feet so far.

Brent, I agree with you regarding the head and legs. I tend to work the whole model first, then go back and tweak stuff once i'm satisfied with the general shape and such, that's why alot of things are off at this point.

Deto, ya i see what you mean with the breasts now, i'll fix it.

Thanks for the crits fellas, apreacieated. keep em comming.