Elf's Sketches

Elf · 11-05-2006, 03:59 PM

Hi, first post in thread in the 2d section!!

Gona be posting some of my sketches up here for comments etc as im trying to improve and want to move to to colouring them in photoshop when my graphics tablet arrives.
Anyway heres a sketch of jango fett from star wars that i did yesterday.

Avatar-3DT · 16-05-2006, 05:23 AM

Sketch looks nice. There are perspective issues with the arms and the drawings looks kindda flat. Defining more the light source and the shading on the shaded part could help make him pop more.

yaoyuan liang · 16-05-2006, 09:49 PM

I like it very much. STAR WAR

Elf · 16-05-2006, 10:52 PM

Thanks for your replies, and yeh i think ur right about the perspective Avatar, i wont change that one but i will try to use ur advice in my other work. I did few really quick sketches of a friend the other day and some other stuff plus quick sketch of samuel jackson which i will post when i get time.

Elf · 25-05-2006, 03:13 PM

Just a few sketches i did this week, Been so busy though havent had time to do much.
The female is a concept im working on for modeling, I know, her neck is too long! lol

memod · 25-05-2006, 05:51 PM

I think I like the concept2 one best, it has some nice and clear outlines, and does not look as manga-ish as the last of your attachments =)
and if you want to go for colouring them digitally, then a clean sketch with strong outlines certainly makes things easier.

nucron · 25-05-2006, 06:16 PM

for your anime girl, you might want to separate the nose and mouth a little by moving the mouth down just a little bit. also, for the profile, maybe make the nose come out a little more, as it looks kind of squashed right now. kind of like this:

Elf · 25-05-2006, 10:34 PM

Thanks memod, and i see what ya mean nucron, i might try editing it in photoshop and coloring them when i get my graphics tablet. I love that second picture u posted.

11-05-2006, 03:59 PM	#1
Elf Lead Designer Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Plymouth Posts: 259 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Elf's Sketches Hi, first post in thread in the 2d section!! Gona be posting some of my sketches up here for comments etc as im trying to improve and want to move to to colouring them in photoshop when my graphics tablet arrives. Anyway heres a sketch of jango fett from star wars that i did yesterday.

16-05-2006, 05:23 AM	#2
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,625 Thanks: 4 Thanked 110 Times in 104 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Sketch looks nice. There are perspective issues with the arms and the drawings looks kindda flat. Defining more the light source and the shading on the shaded part could help make him pop more. __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

25-05-2006, 05:51 PM	#6
memod Dancakes Join Date: May 2006 Location: Germany, Berlin Posts: 95 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	I think I like the concept2 one best, it has some nice and clear outlines, and does not look as manga-ish as the last of your attachments =) and if you want to go for colouring them digitally, then a clean sketch with strong outlines certainly makes things easier. __________________ portfolio: http://www.dancakes.com prints: http://memod.deviantart.com/store cgsociety: http://memod.cgsociety.org Threedy thread with my works

25-05-2006, 10:34 PM	#8
Elf Lead Designer Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Plymouth Posts: 259 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks memod, and i see what ya mean nucron, i might try editing it in photoshop and coloring them when i get my graphics tablet. I love that second picture u posted. Last edited by Elf; 25-05-2006 at 10:36 PM..

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16-05-2006, 09:49 PM	#3
yaoyuan liang Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like it very much. STAR WAR

16-05-2006, 10:52 PM	#4
Elf Lead Designer Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Plymouth Posts: 259 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for your replies, and yeh i think ur right about the perspective Avatar, i wont change that one but i will try to use ur advice in my other work. I did few really quick sketches of a friend the other day and some other stuff plus quick sketch of samuel jackson which i will post when i get time.

25-05-2006, 03:13 PM	#5
Elf Lead Designer Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Plymouth Posts: 259 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Just a few sketches i did this week, Been so busy though havent had time to do much. The female is a concept im working on for modeling, I know, her neck is too long! lol

25-05-2006, 06:16 PM	#7
nucron Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 141 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	for your anime girl, you might want to separate the nose and mouth a little by moving the mouth down just a little bit. also, for the profile, maybe make the nose come out a little more, as it looks kind of squashed right now. kind of like this:

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