My First Character XD

Jenova · 12-06-2006, 02:00 AM

I thought it was about time I started a project since I've been on the forum for a year now and haven't even made anything in 3d apart from one competition entry. This is the first thing I've tryed to make and actually stuck to it, started it this morning and its coming out better than I thought it would. Crits apprecated indeed.

metabaron · 12-06-2006, 03:00 PM

Nice progress.Send us more pics of the model concuded!

Jenova · 12-06-2006, 03:13 PM

Thanks, I'll try and work on it some more.

Sathe · 12-06-2006, 03:26 PM

The pectoral muscles are a bit to exagerated so try and bring them back a bit. Round off the chest so it falls off more to the sides and decrease the strength of the crease down the middle.
Its good to see you getting into 3d, i wish you the best of luck with it. let me know if you need any help through msn or anything.
Keep us posted.

Jenova · 12-06-2006, 10:19 PM

Cool, Ill be sure to make those corrections.

markus_omega · 15-06-2006, 10:53 PM

looks good. could you tell me how you made the abs. i'm working on a character as well but i cant get his abs to look good.

Jenova · 16-06-2006, 12:47 PM

Hmm, well as Sathe said my abs are wrong, they should go off to the side instead of stopping abrubtly, anyway, heres my abs with the highlights if you wanna use it as a bit of reference, after meshsmooth it looks pretty alright.

Tingles · 16-06-2006, 01:25 PM

the model is looking great so far man!
stick with 3D it's awsome fun!
Good luck

0sharp0 · 16-06-2006, 02:13 PM

hey!
great to see ur posting!

really cool model u hav there....but i think are some excessive loops in teh model at this stage....really cant say tho....ill have to wait and see how u connect them to the body later on.....
plus...in think the seperation of each ab is not that distinct....and the line going thru the middle shouldnt be that deep either IMO.......

but very cool...cant wait!

Jenova · 07-07-2006, 02:41 AM

Been working on another chracter from the Joan tut, made the head and some of the body, still needs imporvement. I decided to make a fight scene or something between the two of the chatracters I'm making.

12-06-2006, 02:00 AM	#1
Jenova Lol! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: London Posts: 238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	First Male and Female Characters XD I thought it was about time I started a project since I've been on the forum for a year now and haven't even made anything in 3d apart from one competition entry. This is the first thing I've tryed to make and actually stuck to it, started it this morning and its coming out better than I thought it would. Crits apprecated indeed. Last edited by Jenova; 10-07-2006 at 07:30 PM..

12-06-2006, 03:00 PM	#2
metabaron Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Greece Posts: 128 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice progress.Send us more pics of the model concuded! __________________ My webpage >>> http://www.freewebs.com/metabaron

12-06-2006, 03:13 PM	#3
Jenova Lol! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: London Posts: 238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks, I'll try and work on it some more. __________________ I finally have a topic to link to XD

12-06-2006, 03:26 PM	#4
Sathe Hardstyle Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 3,367 Thanks: 97 Thanked 44 Times in 38 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	The pectoral muscles are a bit to exagerated so try and bring them back a bit. Round off the chest so it falls off more to the sides and decrease the strength of the crease down the middle. Its good to see you getting into 3d, i wish you the best of luck with it. let me know if you need any help through msn or anything. Keep us posted. __________________ ______________________________ Hard Surface Essentials http://vimeo.com/10941211 Threedy 4 life

12-06-2006, 10:19 PM	#5
Jenova Lol! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: London Posts: 238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Cool, Ill be sure to make those corrections. __________________ I finally have a topic to link to XD

15-06-2006, 10:53 PM	#6
markus_omega certified madman Join Date: May 2006 Location: the Netherlands Posts: 370 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	looks good. could you tell me how you made the abs. i'm working on a character as well but i cant get his abs to look good.

16-06-2006, 12:47 PM	#7
Jenova Lol! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: London Posts: 238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hmm, well as Sathe said my abs are wrong, they should go off to the side instead of stopping abrubtly, anyway, heres my abs with the highlights if you wanna use it as a bit of reference, after meshsmooth it looks pretty alright. __________________ I finally have a topic to link to XD

16-06-2006, 01:25 PM	#8
Tingles Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 142 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	the model is looking great so far man! stick with 3D it's awsome fun! Good luck

16-06-2006, 02:13 PM	#9
0sharp0 Max and Zbrush own! Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Outside the BOX Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	hey! great to see ur posting! really cool model u hav there....but i think are some excessive loops in teh model at this stage....really cant say tho....ill have to wait and see how u connect them to the body later on..... plus...in think the seperation of each ab is not that distinct....and the line going thru the middle shouldnt be that deep either IMO....... but very cool...cant wait! __________________ Deviantart Gallery

07-07-2006, 02:41 AM	#10
Jenova Lol! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: London Posts: 238 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Been working on another chracter from the Joan tut, made the head and some of the body, still needs imporvement. I decided to make a fight scene or something between the two of the chatracters I'm making. __________________ I finally have a topic to link to XD

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