still life

artecnl · 14-07-2006, 07:41 AM

Hi guys, this is my last image, i spent 3 days and arround 14 hours of work, i only put some objets in my desk for reference, it was fun

well i know there is some isues and mistakes, i hope you can giveme some crtics and advices.

have a great day, and thanks for see

artecnl · 14-07-2006, 07:42 AM

steps

*Rue · 14-07-2006, 03:04 PM

Looks very not digital ^^, good job! Only thing I can find to crit is the reflection of the toy car in the camara lense, that's a bit too bright. but then just a bit ^^ .

Is that your tablet on the right side of the collage pics?

artecnl · 14-07-2006, 07:13 PM

thanks for the comment rue, and yes is my tablet there,

cheers

pasita n_n · 14-07-2006, 08:25 PM

Wow!!!

Amazing job, i think you have a lot of skills n_n
And i allways enjoy you work.

Avatar-3DT · 14-07-2006, 08:43 PM

Nice work artecnl. Interesting choice of objects. Looks like you tried to cover all the material base you could: plastic, metal and glass. a drape of somekind is missing 'tho, for cloth shading

artecnl · 14-07-2006, 09:45 PM

Thanks Pasita

and Avatar ,yes its a good idea, maybe i do another one, with cloth,

thanks

R.Kamal · 17-07-2006, 03:56 PM

nice job...buddy!i like the metal effect the best,both on the camera,perfume cover.
the reflection of the car in the camera lens needs a bit work...and for this type od composition extending the foreground a little more would create more goodlook.but thats just me.cheers!

14-07-2006, 07:41 AM	#1
artecnl IZayado Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Monterrey, Mexico Posts: 653 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	still life Hi guys, this is my last image, i spent 3 days and arround 14 hours of work, i only put some objets in my desk for reference, it was fun well i know there is some isues and mistakes, i hope you can giveme some crtics and advices. have a great day, and thanks for see __________________ my new portfolio ¡

14-07-2006, 07:42 AM	#2
artecnl IZayado Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Monterrey, Mexico Posts: 653 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	steps __________________ my new portfolio ¡

14-07-2006, 03:04 PM	#3
*Rue Pen(cil) artist Join Date: May 2005 Location: Netherlands Posts: 390 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks very not digital ^^, good job! Only thing I can find to crit is the reflection of the toy car in the camara lense, that's a bit too bright. but then just a bit ^^ . Is that your tablet on the right side of the collage pics? __________________ "Just be yourself and you will be successful." www.pure-artist.com

14-07-2006, 07:13 PM	#4
artecnl IZayado Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Monterrey, Mexico Posts: 653 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	thanks for the comment rue, and yes is my tablet there, cheers __________________ my new portfolio ¡

14-07-2006, 08:43 PM	#6
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,625 Thanks: 4 Thanked 110 Times in 104 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Nice work artecnl. Interesting choice of objects. Looks like you tried to cover all the material base you could: plastic, metal and glass. a drape of somekind is missing 'tho, for cloth shading __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

14-07-2006, 08:25 PM	#5
pasita n_n pasita n_n Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Nuevo León Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wow!!! Amazing job, i think you have a lot of skills n_n And i allways enjoy you work.

14-07-2006, 09:45 PM	#7
artecnl IZayado Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Monterrey, Mexico Posts: 653 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	Thanks Pasita and Avatar ,yes its a good idea, maybe i do another one, with cloth, thanks __________________ my new portfolio ¡

17-07-2006, 03:56 PM	#8
R.Kamal Registered User Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Hyderabad Posts: 944 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	nice job...buddy!i like the metal effect the best,both on the camera,perfume cover. the reflection of the car in the camera lens needs a bit work...and for this type od composition extending the foreground a little more would create more goodlook.but thats just me.cheers! __________________ R.Kamal Art

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