The Violin

qais · 19-07-2006, 02:20 PM

modeling this violin took almost 2 days,and it
was very challengng and fun,as for the environment
i tried many ideas but prefered to stay with the simple
one,hope you like it and comments are more than welcome

Kage · 19-07-2006, 02:49 PM

I'm afraid the image isn't loading for me...

EDIT:

Weird, after clicking your Latest Work link, and then going back, it worked...

Anyhow, the render and model looks good

As for the scene, that looks fine to me, but you know what would look excellent? A silk type effect.

MichaelM · 19-07-2006, 04:29 PM

Hey!
Nice violin. My only crits are that the strings dont seem to be straight lines. Also, on the headstock you can see hard edges, which should be smooth.

Calavera · 19-07-2006, 04:29 PM

Nice work man!

But I think you should use chamfer and autosmooth on some polys like down on the "bridge" and up on the head 'cause you can se the edges very clearly!

But overall, nice work!

zenoka · 19-07-2006, 05:29 PM

nice work!..I like the lighting

stas3d · 19-07-2006, 06:40 PM

its nice but i really think you should add some reflection on it! and better textur, maybe make it look older and add some scratches.
this your blue part in violin are often black, but background is fine...

chris89 · 21-07-2006, 05:52 PM

i really like it man, the modeling is great

the silk effect kage suggested is a pretty good idea, maybe try it

19-07-2006, 02:20 PM	#1
qais 89 Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Amman,Jordan Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The Violin modeling this violin took almost 2 days,and it was very challengng and fun,as for the environment i tried many ideas but prefered to stay with the simple one,hope you like it and comments are more than welcome __________________ Latest Works ---Honorable Mentions--- -Air Freshener -Lantern -Microscope Last edited by qais; 19-07-2006 at 03:57 PM..

19-07-2006, 02:49 PM	#2
Kage Perfectionist... Join Date: May 2006 Location: UK Posts: 3,650 Thanks: 36 Thanked 66 Times in 61 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	I'm afraid the image isn't loading for me... EDIT: Weird, after clicking your Latest Work link, and then going back, it worked... Anyhow, the render and model looks good As for the scene, that looks fine to me, but you know what would look excellent? A silk type effect. __________________ First Finished Project: Z-5500 Speaker Set Current WIP Projects: Korg Krome from PMC Xbox 360 set Older WIP Projects (Some dead for now): Z-5500 Speaker Set WIP (Now Finished) Dance Pad Model (DDR/DS) WIP Last edited by Kage; 19-07-2006 at 02:53 PM..

19-07-2006, 04:29 PM	#3
MichaelM Registered User Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: South Australia Posts: 79 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey! Nice violin. My only crits are that the strings dont seem to be straight lines. Also, on the headstock you can see hard edges, which should be smooth. __________________ http://www.nicedrums.net The forum for drummers

19-07-2006, 05:29 PM	#5
zenoka Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Hungary Posts: 67 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice work!..I like the lighting __________________ sorry sorry my english

19-07-2006, 06:40 PM	#6
stas3d I'll be back!!! Join Date: May 2005 Location: Finland,Helsinki Posts: 339 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	its nice but i really think you should add some reflection on it! and better textur, maybe make it look older and add some scratches. this your blue part in violin are often black, but background is fine... __________________ CHECK OUT MY W.I.P CYBORG I'm currently available for freelance work! www.pelko.fi/Stanislav/index.html

19-07-2006, 04:29 PM	#4
Calavera Shenmue III Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Gothenburg, Sweden Posts: 29 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice work man! But I think you should use chamfer and autosmooth on some polys like down on the "bridge" and up on the head 'cause you can se the edges very clearly! But overall, nice work!

21-07-2006, 05:52 PM	#7
chris89 ._O Join Date: May 2004 Location: the netherlands Posts: 423 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i really like it man, the modeling is great the silk effect kage suggested is a pretty good idea, maybe try it

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