Little Basketball Girl

Kanno · 25-08-2006, 10:38 AM

This is a little image I made for a birthday card. The rendering didn't turn out as well as I would have liked, but I'm definitely starting to get a hang of it. Let me know what you think!

Kanno · 25-08-2006, 10:39 AM

And here's a shot of her face...

metabaron · 25-08-2006, 01:35 PM

I think its a bit darkened the whole scene!
It needs more light for the details & colors to show up!

andoy · 25-08-2006, 01:54 PM

Brilliant .. i love it.. maybe it is a little bit dark but it's a superb image none the less..

gfx.KhronoS · 25-08-2006, 01:55 PM

great job... i like the kid... he`s cute :P

baptiste-EFEUNI · 25-08-2006, 02:41 PM

Great job ;I like the style cartoon and the goblet; it would be necessary little to be a work of light moreover, but it is very good work all the same, if not to the fact an adjustment of the levels and saturation will give another aspect to the scene, you can think of that

novoAlias · 25-08-2006, 03:11 PM

Very cool style, nice!

Kanno · 25-08-2006, 06:16 PM

Thanks for the crits guys. It's actually a girl

but I won't hold it against ya!

The scene definitely needs work on the lighting. The whole thing was made out of about 10 different renders (100% illuminationed colours, one skylight pass, one mental ray pass for the SSS, one toon shader for the outlines, etc.) so it was a bunch of compositing that I'm not really used to at all. I'll try playing around with the levels since that's about all I can do since there's no single 'original' render.

25-08-2006, 10:38 AM	#1
Kanno Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 177 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Little Basketball Girl This is a little image I made for a birthday card. The rendering didn't turn out as well as I would have liked, but I'm definitely starting to get a hang of it. Let me know what you think! __________________ My Sketchbook DeLorean DMC-12

25-08-2006, 10:39 AM	#2
Kanno Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 177 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	And here's a shot of her face... __________________ My Sketchbook DeLorean DMC-12

25-08-2006, 01:35 PM	#3
metabaron Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Greece Posts: 128 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think its a bit darkened the whole scene! It needs more light for the details & colors to show up! __________________ My webpage >>> http://www.freewebs.com/metabaron

25-08-2006, 01:54 PM	#4
andoy Registered User Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Dubai, UAE Posts: 1,080 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Brilliant .. i love it.. maybe it is a little bit dark but it's a superb image none the less.. __________________ "We make a living with what we get, but, we make a life with what we give.." Winston Churchill. CG Portfolio: http://andoy.cgsociety.org

25-08-2006, 01:55 PM	#5
gfx.KhronoS ...want some peanuts? Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Romania, Galati Posts: 855 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	great job... i like the kid... he`s cute :P __________________ Follow your dream! Unless it's the one where you're at work in your underwear during a fire drill. Sorry for my bad english, still in the struggle to improve it.

25-08-2006, 02:41 PM	#6
baptiste-EFEUNI Artistic creator__ Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: france Posts: 64 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Great job ;I like the style cartoon and the goblet; it would be necessary little to be a work of light moreover, but it is very good work all the same, if not to the fact an adjustment of the levels and saturation will give another aspect to the scene, you can think of that __________________ __ Efeunis °o°o°o....

25-08-2006, 03:11 PM	#7
novoAlias Found snow. Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Everywhere. Posts: 3,675 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Very cool style, nice! __________________ ¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤ •°o.O[There's too much blood in my caffeine system]O.o°• •°o.O[Home]O.o°• ¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°`°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤

25-08-2006, 06:16 PM	#8
Kanno Registered User Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 177 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for the crits guys. It's actually a girl but I won't hold it against ya! The scene definitely needs work on the lighting. The whole thing was made out of about 10 different renders (100% illuminationed colours, one skylight pass, one mental ray pass for the SSS, one toon shader for the outlines, etc.) so it was a bunch of compositing that I'm not really used to at all. I'll try playing around with the levels since that's about all I can do since there's no single 'original' render. __________________ My Sketchbook DeLorean DMC-12

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