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Old 11-03-2003, 03:58 PM   #1
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i made this car for a tuturial i posted on my forum.





tell me what you think of it
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Old 11-03-2003, 06:16 PM   #2
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The modelling is good, but the shading falls behind; specially the reflections in the roof, look very weird.
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Old 12-03-2003, 12:13 PM   #3
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It would be much better with toned-down reflections, but modeling rocks. Can we have the url for the tut?
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Very smart Good Really good
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Old 12-03-2003, 12:57 PM   #5
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Hi, where i can find the Tutorial.
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tuturial is in dutch and is about texturing the car.

gonna make a video tuturial about making a car but don't think i'm gonna use this one. already working on 2 other cars.
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Old 14-03-2003, 09:04 PM   #7
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retextured it:

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the front light look too plastic, seems to be a bit low quality on certain places, the highlights on the car paint look a litle wierd... nice one otherwise!
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Nice car

zou het wit minder wit maken, zie je meer reflecties
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ziet er goed uit, maar mischien nog een beetje werk aan de zijspiegels
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the model looks perfect but the textures are bringing it down a little. especially those of the windows and headlights. if you fix those it will be perfect.
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Old 17-03-2003, 03:13 PM   #12
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Careful with that undersides, we can see it's not complete
That's the reason i never put a mirrored surface underneath my cars...
Otherwise great little smart choice!
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retry

tnx for the comments.

maybe you guys could send me a texture i could learn from or show some example textures or an howto.
would be very apreciated.

removed the raytraced material surrounding the smart and edited the textures a bit:


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