Kitana is still here ;)

Kitana · 23-10-2006, 12:19 PM

Hi friends!

This lady is water spirit...
I think that there is something wrong in her arms, but want your opinion.

this was just a joke but it looks very interesting

this one too
enjoy them :P

Avatar-3DT · 25-10-2006, 09:03 PM

You need to find a way to better cut your elements into the image. For example, the girl in the first pic almost gets lost into the background. You eather shade her strongly to detach and give her volume so it breaks away from the background or you need to simplyfy and darken the background around her to cut it out of it. Her arms look good as lenght but you need to define a bit her joints.
The second pic is indeed interesting but the perspective of the face is not respected.
Eyes, nose and mouth are too much to the right.
The third image suffers from a common mistake: black sky with white cute on buildings. The truth is that the phenomenon is infact exctly the oposite. Usually the sky is lighter and the buildings darker. That would have been emphasized by the lights of the building.

Kitana · 26-10-2006, 01:52 PM

Very thanks for advice i will try to make the spirit more bright...

Avatar-3DT · 30-10-2006, 02:13 AM

Any updates?

Kitana · 30-10-2006, 12:31 PM

YEs but i forget the pic this day...
Tommorow now see that ( i have a tablet since 2 weeks and i make a try last night)
i think it's more good with colors

Avatar-3DT · 30-10-2006, 07:41 PM

You really need to define better the source of light. Once you'll manage that, things will come to you easier.

Kitana · 01-11-2006, 01:55 PM

Is now more like it?

And the light comes from the angel ....

have somebody seen this boy, no really it's not joke when i draw this i had a strange feel like i have seen this ever... I don't to copy so tell me

Avatar-3DT · 01-11-2006, 07:34 PM

Looking better. Take it slow and you'll find your way.

The last one looks pretty good. I'll wait to see the update on it before commenting farther.

Kitana · 07-11-2006, 07:22 PM

I made this signature in photoshop for my profile in site... What do you think??????

Avatar-3DT · 07-11-2006, 08:09 PM

Looks a bit heavy and crowded, maybe something simpler and more elegant would be better? The "serenity" word written in simple white handwritting. The eyes fading on a black background maybe... I don't know. Looks good now but seems a bit too crowded.

Kitana · 08-11-2006, 03:48 PM

You're right again after i think on it this day i deside that it's crowded too on right...And i will leave just dark and the flowers. And the serenity text will be with glass or ice look

Avatar-3DT · 08-11-2006, 11:24 PM

If you allow me an advise: decide where you will place the banner. If its on the left side, then just make a black box with the side view of a girl holding flowers on the left side of the box. Make so that the flowers "flow" from her arms to her legs and toward the middle of the box ending with vines or something. Towards the middle of the remaining black space, just write "serenity" in handwriting, white characters, with a very faint grey shadow. should be more free and stylish.
Here is a quick example I made. Hope it helps.

Kitana · 20-11-2006, 05:31 PM

That's fresh and shiny - something new for me

Kitana · 26-11-2006, 05:46 PM

This is the last with my new tablet - i make the right preferences for it

Avatar-3DT · 27-11-2006, 08:04 AM

That reminds me a cartoon character i can't pinpoint right now. Too many colors can stress the eye, you should try keeping in a limited color pallete ( like using shades of blue and purple or green and turcois or red, yellow, orange, brown). Look around 3dtotal.com for painting tutorials. There are quite a few.

23-10-2006, 12:19 PM	#1
Kitana Serenity seeker Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 590 Thanks: 10 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	Kitana is still here ;) Hi friends! This lady is water spirit... I think that there is something wrong in her arms, but want your opinion. this was just a joke but it looks very interesting this one too enjoy them :P Attached Images Last edited by Kitana; 03-06-2011 at 10:02 AM..

25-10-2006, 09:03 PM	#2
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,608 Thanks: 4 Thanked 101 Times in 95 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	You need to find a way to better cut your elements into the image. For example, the girl in the first pic almost gets lost into the background. You eather shade her strongly to detach and give her volume so it breaks away from the background or you need to simplyfy and darken the background around her to cut it out of it. Her arms look good as lenght but you need to define a bit her joints. The second pic is indeed interesting but the perspective of the face is not respected. Eyes, nose and mouth are too much to the right. The third image suffers from a common mistake: black sky with white cute on buildings. The truth is that the phenomenon is infact exctly the oposite. Usually the sky is lighter and the buildings darker. That would have been emphasized by the lights of the building. __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

30-10-2006, 02:13 AM	#4
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,608 Thanks: 4 Thanked 101 Times in 95 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Any updates? __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

30-10-2006, 12:31 PM	#5
Kitana Serenity seeker Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 590 Thanks: 10 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	YEs but i forget the pic this day... Tommorow now see that ( i have a tablet since 2 weeks and i make a try last night) i think it's more good with colors Last edited by Kitana; 01-11-2006 at 02:45 PM..

30-10-2006, 07:41 PM	#6
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,608 Thanks: 4 Thanked 101 Times in 95 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	You really need to define better the source of light. Once you'll manage that, things will come to you easier. __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

26-10-2006, 01:52 PM	#3
Kitana Serenity seeker Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 590 Thanks: 10 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	Very thanks for advice i will try to make the spirit more bright...

01-11-2006, 01:55 PM	#7
Kitana Serenity seeker Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 590 Thanks: 10 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	Is now more like it? And the light comes from the angel .... have somebody seen this boy, no really it's not joke when i draw this i had a strange feel like i have seen this ever... I don't to copy so tell me Last edited by Kitana; 01-11-2006 at 02:15 PM..

01-11-2006, 07:34 PM	#8
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,608 Thanks: 4 Thanked 101 Times in 95 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Looking better. Take it slow and you'll find your way. The last one looks pretty good. I'll wait to see the update on it before commenting farther. __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

07-11-2006, 07:22 PM	#9
Kitana Serenity seeker Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 590 Thanks: 10 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	I made this signature in photoshop for my profile in site... What do you think??????

07-11-2006, 08:09 PM	#10
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,608 Thanks: 4 Thanked 101 Times in 95 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Looks a bit heavy and crowded, maybe something simpler and more elegant would be better? The "serenity" word written in simple white handwritting. The eyes fading on a black background maybe... I don't know. Looks good now but seems a bit too crowded. __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

08-11-2006, 03:48 PM	#11
Kitana Serenity seeker Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 590 Thanks: 10 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	You're right again after i think on it this day i deside that it's crowded too on right...And i will leave just dark and the flowers. And the serenity text will be with glass or ice look

08-11-2006, 11:24 PM	#12
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,608 Thanks: 4 Thanked 101 Times in 95 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	If you allow me an advise: decide where you will place the banner. If its on the left side, then just make a black box with the side view of a girl holding flowers on the left side of the box. Make so that the flowers "flow" from her arms to her legs and toward the middle of the box ending with vines or something. Towards the middle of the remaining black space, just write "serenity" in handwriting, white characters, with a very faint grey shadow. should be more free and stylish. Here is a quick example I made. Hope it helps. __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

20-11-2006, 05:31 PM	#13
Kitana Serenity seeker Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 590 Thanks: 10 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	That's fresh and shiny - something new for me

26-11-2006, 05:46 PM	#14
Kitana Serenity seeker Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 590 Thanks: 10 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts	This is the last with my new tablet - i make the right preferences for it

27-11-2006, 08:04 AM	#15
Avatar-3DT Paper scratcher Join Date: May 2003 Location: Romania - Ramnicu Sarat Posts: 5,608 Thanks: 4 Thanked 101 Times in 95 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	That reminds me a cartoon character i can't pinpoint right now. Too many colors can stress the eye, you should try keeping in a limited color pallete ( like using shades of blue and purple or green and turcois or red, yellow, orange, brown). Look around 3dtotal.com for painting tutorials. There are quite a few. __________________ "There will be a time when heroes will be diminished and the great glory of Man shall be just a dim star reflected in fading waters of time, when no life nor sacrifice shall be required for the honor of such title, but just the empty banner of a victory." Locarn D'Arcy, Master Paladin, last Avatar "Of Heroes and their passing" www.avatarart.com http://www.avatarart.com/shards/

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