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seraph135 · 29-10-2006, 08:12 PM

Nice work! I think your modeling and texture work looks pretty good. I would agree with some of the previous comments though about your sky not fitting with the lighting, your textures seem too low res in some places and the tiling on the back wall should go...I think I see what your talking about with that in the original photo...But I would make it less obvious or remove the tiling all together. Thats one of the first things a CG artist will spot that screams what they are looking at is CG and not a photo.

Impressive work none the less!

Tim J

s0nkitE · 30-10-2006, 03:59 AM

simply awsome

luisaum_gma · 30-10-2006, 04:38 PM

Thanks Real 3D, djmj, s0nkitE and Tim (I'm a big fan yours, I actually wacthed your DVDs, and I use some of your techniques on this image).
I made some changes on the wall, the sky, some color correction and decrease the DOF intensity (I was thinkng about thake the DOF completely, but he actually is hiding some thinks that I missed on the ground hehe):

High Resolution

Wireframe:

High Resolution

Thnaks!

Kage · 30-10-2006, 04:50 PM

Wow

Thats alot better

luisaum_gma · 01-11-2006, 07:09 PM

Thanks!
I just made a new side by side:

Thanks.

29-10-2006, 08:12 PM	#16
seraph135 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Playa Del Rey, CA Posts: 107 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Nice work! I think your modeling and texture work looks pretty good. I would agree with some of the previous comments though about your sky not fitting with the lighting, your textures seem too low res in some places and the tiling on the back wall should go...I think I see what your talking about with that in the original photo...But I would make it less obvious or remove the tiling all together. Thats one of the first things a CG artist will spot that screams what they are looking at is CG and not a photo. Impressive work none the less! Tim J __________________ www.seraph3d.com CG Supervisor Digital Domain Multi-Pass Compositing Tutorial Environment Creation Tutorial Environment Lighting Tutorial

30-10-2006, 04:38 PM	#18
luisaum_gma CG Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: brazil Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Thanks Real 3D, djmj, s0nkitE and Tim (I'm a big fan yours, I actually wacthed your DVDs, and I use some of your techniques on this image). I made some changes on the wall, the sky, some color correction and decrease the DOF intensity (I was thinkng about thake the DOF completely, but he actually is hiding some thinks that I missed on the ground hehe): High Resolution Wireframe: High Resolution Thnaks! __________________ luis ramos Site · Blog

30-10-2006, 04:50 PM	#19
Kage Perfectionist... Join Date: May 2006 Location: UK Posts: 3,650 Thanks: 36 Thanked 66 Times in 61 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Wow Thats alot better __________________ First Finished Project: Z-5500 Speaker Set Current WIP Projects: Korg Krome from PMC Xbox 360 set Older WIP Projects (Some dead for now): Z-5500 Speaker Set WIP (Now Finished) Dance Pad Model (DDR/DS) WIP

01-11-2006, 07:09 PM	#20
luisaum_gma CG Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: brazil Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Thanks! I just made a new side by side: Thanks. __________________ luis ramos Site · Blog

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30-10-2006, 03:59 AM	#17
s0nkitE Veteran Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Losted in space,Athens-Greece Posts: 380 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	simply awsome

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