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Old 31-10-2006, 03:15 AM   #1
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Silvia S14a

Tyre sucks bad, real bumpy. Should redo it but lazy.

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Old 31-10-2006, 03:18 AM   #2
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looking really good so far...I love that car...sold mine a few months ago. I miss it.
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Old 31-10-2006, 07:50 AM   #3
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looks nice, but the doesnt look entirely correct. this might help.
its mostly the fenders that seem to throw it off, and its overall
shape on the sides.

http://www47.homepage.villanova.edu/...19dsc02588.jpg

looks like the same skirts as yours, so that might help.
but overall it looks really nice.
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Old 31-10-2006, 04:06 PM   #4
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are u sure that not an S14 series II front ? i really like it.

The metal bracket on the cooler piping should be facing the opposite side. I really like the detail on the inter cooler, real poly rather then textured, looks cool.

awsome modeling though! keep it up
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Old 31-10-2006, 05:03 PM   #5
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kingcobra: Thanks man

evil-98: can you be more specific about whats off on the fenders and sides?
Thanks for the pic. Its going to be a GP Sports FRP front bumper with Yashio Factory skirts. Gonna be sitting on some Gold Work VS-XX.
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evilSMILE™: Thanks. Why model that detail and not show it?
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Old 01-11-2006, 10:59 AM   #6
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haha, yeh i know what ur saying, and i thought that why you would have done it.

i just realised that the a in S14a means its the series 2 with the S15 front.

i love the car! cant wait till its finished!
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Old 01-11-2006, 12:34 PM   #7
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Very nice work there Teddy, High level of detail and accuracy. Look forward to some more soon.
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Old 01-11-2006, 04:33 PM   #8
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I'm suprised no one said anything about how low profile your tires are yet lol(they are kinda narrow minded sometimes)... it's looking really good to me. and I love the wheels!!!
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for christs sake..


Your tyres curve off way too steeply, in the picture they go up vertically first for a good 3 inches then curve around.
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Old 01-11-2006, 05:02 PM   #11
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thats how drifters mount their tires... they like the sidewall layed over to keep them from snaggin the ground when slidin...
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^^ very true... had a set of toyos and ripped the crap out of the walls...
evilSMILE, thats a s14 kouki front end.

Teddy: i just feel that the sides of the body arent round enough, looks like it
it flatens out and then rounds again, were your ref keeps a smooth shape all
the way through. just look at your door panels, and compare it to the your ref.
but it looks great either way.
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Old 02-11-2006, 01:22 PM   #13
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ok, great. I see what you mean evil-98. I'll be sure to take a look at it when I fire it up next.
Keep the crits coming please =)
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