just a piano

ronrn · 15-03-2003, 02:48 PM

crits very welcome

Gl2eEn · 15-03-2003, 03:20 PM

good modelling..

but lighting, there is alittle problemm, just shadows are everywhere, its looks a little bit wierd

Brin · 16-03-2003, 04:26 PM

I agree with Gl2eEn

The modeling is very good.

I think that some of the lights in the scene need to have shadows switched off, It is hard to picture what light source would cause the shadows to be cast in this way.

Mariska3d · 16-03-2003, 07:14 PM

The piano looks very good, but there are so many shadows.
Maybe some of the lights should have softer en lesse shadow(or none) and keep the shadow for one light hard.

Camilus · 16-03-2003, 07:57 PM

I Think The Piano is done very well.
But You made to much shadows.
What kind of render did you use ?

ronrn · 16-03-2003, 11:55 PM

Sorry,guess I posted in the finished work a little soon. I toned down shadows in this one.

Brin · 17-03-2003, 08:28 PM

Looks a lot better.

Well done

ronrn · 19-03-2003, 10:47 PM

One room done, 5 more to go.

Bischofftep · 19-03-2003, 10:55 PM

There ya go!

the lighting is much improved, though some fill lighting or backlighting might help soften the shadows a bit, unless you want that harsh edged look.

Quick note: the strings inside the piano appear to be a flat texture picmap, and it's blurry to boot. Model some strings, or put on a good map with strings intact!

-Bischofftep

ronrn · 19-03-2003, 11:06 PM

I modeled the strings, but each string has only 4 long faces. I should have given them at least 6 or 8 so they wouldn't appear flat.

15-03-2003, 02:48 PM	#1
ronrn zzzzzzz..... Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: southeastern US Posts: 414 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	just a piano crits very welcome Attached Images

15-03-2003, 03:20 PM	#2
Gl2eEn KDI Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Finland Posts: 231 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	good modelling.. but lighting, there is alittle problemm, just shadows are everywhere, its looks a little bit wierd __________________ -K.D.I.-

16-03-2003, 07:57 PM	#5
Camilus Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Poland Posts: 7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Think The Piano is done very well. But You made to much shadows. What kind of render did you use ? __________________ I've seen thinks you people woudn't belive... All those moment will be lost in time like tears in rain..

16-03-2003, 11:55 PM	#6
ronrn zzzzzzz..... Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: southeastern US Posts: 414 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Sorry,guess I posted in the finished work a little soon. I toned down shadows in this one. Attached Images

19-03-2003, 10:47 PM	#8
ronrn zzzzzzz..... Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: southeastern US Posts: 414 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	One room done, 5 more to go. Attached Images

16-03-2003, 04:26 PM	#3
Brin Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Liverpool, England Posts: 124 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I agree with Gl2eEn The modeling is very good. I think that some of the lights in the scene need to have shadows switched off, It is hard to picture what light source would cause the shadows to be cast in this way.

16-03-2003, 07:14 PM	#4
Mariska3d Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Netherlands Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The piano looks very good, but there are so many shadows. Maybe some of the lights should have softer en lesse shadow(or none) and keep the shadow for one light hard.

17-03-2003, 08:28 PM	#7
Brin Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Liverpool, England Posts: 124 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks a lot better. Well done

19-03-2003, 10:55 PM	#9
Bischofftep Blender Artist Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Providence Forge, VA Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Much Better! There ya go! the lighting is much improved, though some fill lighting or backlighting might help soften the shadows a bit, unless you want that harsh edged look. Quick note: the strings inside the piano appear to be a flat texture picmap, and it's blurry to boot. Model some strings, or put on a good map with strings intact! -Bischofftep

19-03-2003, 11:06 PM	#10
ronrn zzzzzzz..... Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: southeastern US Posts: 414 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks I modeled the strings, but each string has only 4 long faces. I should have given them at least 6 or 8 so they wouldn't appear flat.

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