UZI (Textured)

lashy · 30-11-2006, 08:35 PM

Hello people
I have Textures and modelled this gun. Its my first time on Texturing Hard stuff.
How is it, please tell any mistakes..

Bubbaloo · 30-11-2006, 10:36 PM

I think it needs more detail in the model.

lashy · 01-12-2006, 11:42 AM

only 1 line by only 1 user, aah

lashy · 02-12-2006, 02:53 PM

just keepin this thread up !!

Nippur · 02-12-2006, 03:39 PM

First, I didn't want to reply since I know nothing about modelling guns. But hey, I'll try

If you'r going for a realistic render, you should really add some detail to the model. I compared your model to this reference I googled and even if the ref pic doesn't show all, I can see you missed a lot of details. As for the texturing, I would make the gun darker. I think the scratches will then look better too.

If you'r going for a low poly model, then you should add those details to textures.

lashy · 02-12-2006, 10:59 PM

thanks for even replying, i see nowadays posting work to forums.3dtotal.com doesnt attract much replies, that sad.
i definately do what u said.
thanks

Nippur · 03-12-2006, 12:03 AM

Yeah, I remember days when people here were replying more

So what will you do ? Add more details by modelling them ?

lashy · 03-12-2006, 12:06 AM

there are 2 obvious things i will do.
model more details
make the texture darker

vectorealms · 03-12-2006, 01:00 AM

Looks pretty nice.
Like mentioned before more detail would be nice and also the texture needs work. You should probably try putting more details in the texture, eg. the foregrip has extruding lines and screws, try adding that in to your texture.

lashy · 03-12-2006, 01:33 AM

hey assasin, thanks for replyin
could be more specific with what kind of more work is required in the texture.

McFly · 03-12-2006, 01:48 AM

You definitely need to add a bump map so the worn out areas stand out more.
For a 1st attempt, it's decent work IMHO.

lashy · 06-12-2006, 09:16 PM

Hows now

please tell

TerranCmdr · 07-12-2006, 02:51 AM

Just from memory, the handle is a hair too thin and should be more rounded on the front. The sling loop is too small. The front site is too far down, and the front grip is completely wrong, I suggest you look at more references. Other than that, I can see many things wrong with the way it's modeled - it's too simple. I would suggest starting over.

The texture looks okay though.

lashy · 07-12-2006, 06:57 PM

thanks for commenting terran., u know im in the learning stage right now.

Nippur · 08-12-2006, 12:03 AM

I can see you improved it. But for such a closeups, you'll need even more detailing. Or try to render it as it is but from longer distance, will look better I think.

30-11-2006, 08:35 PM	#1
lashy I'm here to Learn !! Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: New Delhi,India Posts: 448 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	UZI (Textured) Hello people I have Textures and modelled this gun. Its my first time on Texturing Hard stuff. How is it, please tell any mistakes.. __________________ God is in the detail

30-11-2006, 10:36 PM	#2
Bubbaloo I be learnin me some 3d. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma U.S.A. Posts: 1,938 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I think it needs more detail in the model. __________________ Brian Looney Tulsa, Oklahoma My Wesite: http://lunatic-studio.com/

01-12-2006, 11:42 AM	#3
lashy I'm here to Learn !! Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: New Delhi,India Posts: 448 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	only 1 line by only 1 user, aah __________________ God is in the detail

02-12-2006, 02:53 PM	#4
lashy I'm here to Learn !! Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: New Delhi,India Posts: 448 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	just keepin this thread up !! __________________ God is in the detail

02-12-2006, 03:39 PM	#5
Nippur Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Prague Posts: 1,632 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	First, I didn't want to reply since I know nothing about modelling guns. But hey, I'll try If you'r going for a realistic render, you should really add some detail to the model. I compared your model to this reference I googled and even if the ref pic doesn't show all, I can see you missed a lot of details. As for the texturing, I would make the gun darker. I think the scratches will then look better too. If you'r going for a low poly model, then you should add those details to textures. __________________ Visit my MiniCity here and make it grow

02-12-2006, 10:59 PM	#6
lashy I'm here to Learn !! Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: New Delhi,India Posts: 448 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for even replying, i see nowadays posting work to forums.3dtotal.com doesnt attract much replies, that sad. i definately do what u said. thanks __________________ God is in the detail

03-12-2006, 12:03 AM	#7
Nippur Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Prague Posts: 1,632 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Yeah, I remember days when people here were replying more So what will you do ? Add more details by modelling them ? __________________ Visit my MiniCity here and make it grow

03-12-2006, 12:06 AM	#8
lashy I'm here to Learn !! Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: New Delhi,India Posts: 448 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	there are 2 obvious things i will do. model more details make the texture darker __________________ God is in the detail

03-12-2006, 01:00 AM	#9
vectorealms Registered User Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 725 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Looks pretty nice. Like mentioned before more detail would be nice and also the texture needs work. You should probably try putting more details in the texture, eg. the foregrip has extruding lines and screws, try adding that in to your texture.

03-12-2006, 01:33 AM	#10
lashy I'm here to Learn !! Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: New Delhi,India Posts: 448 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey assasin, thanks for replyin could be more specific with what kind of more work is required in the texture. __________________ God is in the detail

03-12-2006, 01:48 AM	#11
McFly Monogon Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Lyon Posts: 3,131 Thanks: 8 Thanked 234 Times in 221 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	You definitely need to add a bump map so the worn out areas stand out more. For a 1st attempt, it's decent work IMHO. __________________ You see what happens Larry? You see what happens when you meet a stranger in the Alps? - Walter Sobchak My WIP dump

06-12-2006, 09:16 PM	#12
lashy I'm here to Learn !! Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: New Delhi,India Posts: 448 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hows now please tell __________________ God is in the detail

07-12-2006, 02:51 AM	#13
TerranCmdr Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Sunnyvale, CA Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Just from memory, the handle is a hair too thin and should be more rounded on the front. The sling loop is too small. The front site is too far down, and the front grip is completely wrong, I suggest you look at more references. Other than that, I can see many things wrong with the way it's modeled - it's too simple. I would suggest starting over. The texture looks okay though.

07-12-2006, 06:57 PM	#14
lashy I'm here to Learn !! Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: New Delhi,India Posts: 448 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for commenting terran., u know im in the learning stage right now. __________________ God is in the detail

08-12-2006, 12:03 AM	#15
Nippur Registered User Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Prague Posts: 1,632 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I can see you improved it. But for such a closeups, you'll need even more detailing. Or try to render it as it is but from longer distance, will look better I think. __________________ Visit my MiniCity here and make it grow

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