Animation test needs a critique please.

peng jie · 23-01-2007, 07:51 PM

Here is a little animation of my practices by Macromedia Flash MX. It's just a test before doing 3d animation by Maya. Give me some suggestions please.thx.

Download: test_2d.swf (58 KB)

Download: test_2d_v2.swf (65 KB)

RipeX · 24-01-2007, 03:01 AM

can't donwload it, it asks for password and username

penge · 24-01-2007, 11:36 AM

Download mov (133 KB)

test_2d.rar[test_2d.mov]

peng jie · 30-01-2007, 06:50 AM

3d mov link to page:

http://jiepeng.blogspot.com/2007/01/test-posekeys.html

kuriouz · 30-01-2007, 07:58 AM

its quite good peng-jie. nice and bouncy.
Though when he realises that the trap door opened below his feet, his reaction doesn't seem quite right. It looked like he was going to make a leap. You'll probably need to work on the transition between when he realises the floor is not there and the part when he streches out to stop himself from falling.

Anyway besides that, its quite good! well done

peng jie · 01-02-2007, 04:31 AM

Hey kuriouz;

Thank you.

Download mov:1leg_posekeys_V2

kuriouz · 01-02-2007, 05:03 AM

This turned out alot better peng-jie! The transition with the rapid leg movements, now fits nicely with the whole movie.
Good job!

peng jie · 02-02-2007, 08:53 PM

1Leg_posekeys_V3.mov(H264)

LostSoul · 02-02-2007, 11:24 PM

I would reduce the amount of hop done after the door opens. It has a very unnatural feel to it. It should be there, but not quite so much emphasis.

peng jie · 15-02-2007, 10:09 AM

1Leg_posekeys_V4.mov(H264)

peng jie · 23-02-2007, 06:59 PM

1Leg_Final.mov(H264)

23-01-2007, 07:51 PM	#1
peng jie Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Bei Jing China Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Animation test needs a critique please. Here is a little animation of my practices by Macromedia Flash MX. It's just a test before doing 3d animation by Maya. Give me some suggestions please.thx. Download: test_2d.swf (58 KB) Download: test_2d_v2.swf (65 KB) Last edited by peng jie; 25-01-2007 at 07:59 PM..

30-01-2007, 06:50 AM	#4
peng jie Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Bei Jing China Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	3d mov 3d mov link to page: http://jiepeng.blogspot.com/2007/01/test-posekeys.html __________________ Peng Jie Animator pengjie.org

30-01-2007, 07:58 AM	#5
kuriouz P-Plater! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Australia Posts: 146 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	its quite good peng-jie. nice and bouncy. Though when he realises that the trap door opened below his feet, his reaction doesn't seem quite right. It looked like he was going to make a leap. You'll probably need to work on the transition between when he realises the floor is not there and the part when he streches out to stop himself from falling. Anyway besides that, its quite good! well done __________________ Highland Cow Entry Sketchbook Animations: Speed Challenge - Robot Dancing - WIP , Purple monster mischief

01-02-2007, 04:31 AM	#6
peng jie Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Bei Jing China Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey kuriouz; Thank you. Download mov:1leg_posekeys_V2 __________________ Peng Jie Animator pengjie.org

01-02-2007, 05:03 AM	#7
kuriouz P-Plater! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Australia Posts: 146 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	This turned out alot better peng-jie! The transition with the rapid leg movements, now fits nicely with the whole movie. Good job! __________________ Highland Cow Entry Sketchbook Animations: Speed Challenge - Robot Dancing - WIP , Purple monster mischief

24-01-2007, 03:01 AM	#2
RipeX Registered User Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Norway Posts: 8 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	can't donwload it, it asks for password and username

24-01-2007, 11:36 AM	#3
penge Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Bei Jing China Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Download mov (133 KB) test_2d.rar[test_2d.mov]

02-02-2007, 08:53 PM	#8
peng jie Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Bei Jing China Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	1Leg_posekeys_V3.mov 1Leg_posekeys_V3.mov(H264) __________________ Peng Jie Animator pengjie.org

02-02-2007, 11:24 PM	#9
LostSoul Registered User Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 430 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	I would reduce the amount of hop done after the door opens. It has a very unnatural feel to it. It should be there, but not quite so much emphasis. __________________ Everywhere I go, there I'm not.

15-02-2007, 10:09 AM	#10
peng jie Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Bei Jing China Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	1leg_posekeys_V4.mov 1Leg_posekeys_V4.mov(H264) __________________ Peng Jie Animator pengjie.org

23-02-2007, 06:59 PM	#11
peng jie Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Bei Jing China Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	1Leg_Final.mov 1Leg_Final.mov(H264) __________________ Peng Jie Animator pengjie.org

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