Random_NPC - Dominance War II

Random_NPC · 05-02-2007, 10:28 AM

So far i only have vague ideas but once i get one on paper i'll post it asap. I'm thinking of trying to make the form of my character quite inhuman rather than one of the typical bypedal mechs etc. i believe that if a race of mechanical beings hated the existance of humans and other biological entities it would try to distance itself from them visually.

Random_NPC · 08-02-2007, 04:19 PM

Okay so I know I said I was going to stear clear of bipeds but once I started this guy I couldn't think of an better way to structure him than bipedal

but thems the breaks. Bipedal robots still look cool anyway. I was thinking of giving him a cockpit, that was all torn up and have a dead/mutilated pilot inside, like it was a mech that once it became self-concious the first thing it did was rip open the cockpit and kill the human desecrating its insides.... so anyway I don't think I'll use that idea so someone else can use it if they wish. This guy is still a long way from where I want him to be (need to add lots of detail) but I thought I should get you guys to give me some feedback before I get too attached.

Random_NPC · 08-02-2007, 05:56 PM

I call this guy abaddon. and if anyone has any ideas for the head or legs please feel free to make a suggestion because those parts are evading my grasp. I normally work with organic subject matter so this is a bit out of my realm.

OnyxIdol · 08-02-2007, 06:56 PM

So, if it's an artillery mech(thats at least what it looks like) You could also go with treads.

Random_NPC · 08-02-2007, 08:02 PM

I'm going for artillery and close combat (haven't thought of a hth weapon yet though) basically he can bombard a place then run in and clean up the leftovers. I felt that treads would be too imobile for close quarters.

obibok · 08-02-2007, 08:16 PM

i found this one some time ago... maybe this will inspire u...

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/...e+-in%3Ascraps

hea would look nice with 2 miniguns attached to his forearms

Kalango · 08-02-2007, 08:23 PM

looking cool, the wings are very nice, keep ti up.

Random_NPC · 09-02-2007, 10:11 AM

ok so this is the latest version. Some colour a head and some skulls n stuff.

Lord Rancid · 09-02-2007, 12:06 PM

Nice.... Liking the simple head shapes....What's the plan for the legs then?

plasma3d · 09-02-2007, 12:11 PM

perfect!!!

mim · 09-02-2007, 12:42 PM

ya, perfect sofar! keep up it!

Diabolos · 09-02-2007, 06:23 PM

whhoooaaa - cool - reminds me of the reavers from serenity - this is cool, nice idea.

D,

ryvick · 10-02-2007, 12:23 AM

Looks brilliant, why dont you go with what you said before and that part where you see a bashed part of its hull, where it hit its own cockpit pilot to kill the human inside it.Oh man, i read that and i could just see it. the pilot mutilated and his/her flesh dangling down. that was really something cool that you said. other than that so far it looks really good.

Diabolos · 10-02-2007, 12:50 AM

oh, and I like the insignia/logo on the cylinder

D,

05-02-2007, 10:28 AM	#1
Random_NPC Heavy Weapons Recruit Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Brisbane Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Random_NPC - Dominance War II So far i only have vague ideas but once i get one on paper i'll post it asap. I'm thinking of trying to make the form of my character quite inhuman rather than one of the typical bypedal mechs etc. i believe that if a race of mechanical beings hated the existance of humans and other biological entities it would try to distance itself from them visually.

08-02-2007, 06:56 PM	#4
OnyxIdol Geek and proud of it Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Germany Posts: 226 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	So, if it's an artillery mech(thats at least what it looks like) You could also go with treads. __________________ always searching

08-02-2007, 08:23 PM	#7
Kalango Freelacer berseker >_> Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Fortaleza- Brazil! Posts: 390 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	looking cool, the wings are very nice, keep ti up. __________________ Nah

09-02-2007, 12:11 PM	#10
plasma3d Fighter Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Greece Posts: 62 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	perfect!!! __________________ {Only the Dead have seen the end of War}-Plato

09-02-2007, 12:42 PM	#11
mim Arm&amp;amp;amp;amp;amp; you ! Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: France Posts: 995 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	ya, perfect sofar! keep up it! __________________ Draw a crazy picture! Write a nutty poem! Sign a mumble-gumble song! Whistle through your comb! Do a loony-goony dance ‘Cross the kitchen floor! Put something silly in the world! That ain’t been there before! "Sell Silverstain"

08-02-2007, 04:19 PM	#2
Random_NPC Heavy Weapons Recruit Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Brisbane Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Okay so I know I said I was going to stear clear of bipeds but once I started this guy I couldn't think of an better way to structure him than bipedal but thems the breaks. Bipedal robots still look cool anyway. I was thinking of giving him a cockpit, that was all torn up and have a dead/mutilated pilot inside, like it was a mech that once it became self-concious the first thing it did was rip open the cockpit and kill the human desecrating its insides.... so anyway I don't think I'll use that idea so someone else can use it if they wish. This guy is still a long way from where I want him to be (need to add lots of detail) but I thought I should get you guys to give me some feedback before I get too attached.

08-02-2007, 05:56 PM	#3
Random_NPC Heavy Weapons Recruit Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Brisbane Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I call this guy abaddon. and if anyone has any ideas for the head or legs please feel free to make a suggestion because those parts are evading my grasp. I normally work with organic subject matter so this is a bit out of my realm.

08-02-2007, 08:02 PM	#5
Random_NPC Heavy Weapons Recruit Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Brisbane Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'm going for artillery and close combat (haven't thought of a hth weapon yet though) basically he can bombard a place then run in and clean up the leftovers. I felt that treads would be too imobile for close quarters.

08-02-2007, 08:16 PM	#6
obibok Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Szczecin Poland Posts: 107 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	i found this one some time ago... maybe this will inspire u... http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/...e+-in%3Ascraps hea would look nice with 2 miniguns attached to his forearms

09-02-2007, 10:11 AM	#8
Random_NPC Heavy Weapons Recruit Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Brisbane Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok so this is the latest version. Some colour a head and some skulls n stuff.

09-02-2007, 12:06 PM	#9
Lord Rancid Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Oxford UK Posts: 61 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice.... Liking the simple head shapes....What's the plan for the legs then?

09-02-2007, 06:23 PM	#12
Diabolos Evil MAYA useR Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Berlin Posts: 812 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	whhoooaaa - cool - reminds me of the reavers from serenity - this is cool, nice idea. D, __________________ "But then I sigh, and with a piece of scripture, Tell them that God bids us do good for evil. And thus I clothe my naked villainy With odd old ends stolen forth of holy writ, And seem I a saint, when most I play the Devil." - William Shakespeare Diabolos' Windows Live Space [My Online Gallery] UPDATED: May 05, 2007

10-02-2007, 12:23 AM	#13
ryvick Lucid Dreamer Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 709 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Looks brilliant, why dont you go with what you said before and that part where you see a bashed part of its hull, where it hit its own cockpit pilot to kill the human inside it.Oh man, i read that and i could just see it. the pilot mutilated and his/her flesh dangling down. that was really something cool that you said. other than that so far it looks really good. __________________ DWIV My Portfolio GA Gallery DWIII Old Website

10-02-2007, 12:50 AM	#14
Diabolos Evil MAYA useR Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Berlin Posts: 812 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	oh, and I like the insignia/logo on the cylinder D, __________________ "But then I sigh, and with a piece of scripture, Tell them that God bids us do good for evil. And thus I clothe my naked villainy With odd old ends stolen forth of holy writ, And seem I a saint, when most I play the Devil." - William Shakespeare Diabolos' Windows Live Space [My Online Gallery] UPDATED: May 05, 2007

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