V3N0M - Dominance War 2

V3N0M · 07-02-2007, 12:20 AM

I was on the battlefield, a medic healing the wounded, and dreading the stupid war that brought all this suffering... then the fools unleashed theyr weapons, a blinding light rushed toward us, incinerating everything - trees, buildings, animals, people, the very ground. As I awaited an inescapable doom I just kept screaming "You fools! What have you done? YOU FOOLS". Noone could have survived, we were standing on Armageddon... and then the flash came, my comrades, my pacients, my wife, my children... al gone in an instant... I felt my body being turned to dust, my very soul burning... not from the heat, but from rage and thirst for vengence on those blind idiots that condemned us all with theyr stupid wars...
But then I awoke, reborn, no longer a weak peace of meat but a creature of metal, pure and strong... time has come to punish my executors, to make them see the light... and then perish from it just as I did.
V3N0M is here! PH33R ME INFIDELS!

V3N0M · 07-02-2007, 12:46 AM

First basic concept:

It's a Switchblade assassin, normally looking innocent and harmless it can transform into a killing machine with double switchblade wings and flying killer drones and with energyweapons. With her right arm she can do anything from erase ur memory to shortcircuit ur motherboard and with her left one she can just blow you apart.. so she is well suited for assassination, espionage, infiltration, or just mass homicide or even demolition jobs... nuff said, need a better concept now

OnyxIdol · 07-02-2007, 12:48 AM

Interesting. You should keep the additional-eyes-poppin-out-of-head thing.

V3N0M · 07-02-2007, 01:05 AM

I will, I'm also thinking of a couple of eyes poping up on the back of her head

gridlinked · 07-02-2007, 03:50 AM

Ah, a paranoid machine

j/k

I like the four eyes aspect, dunno about the teeth - it suits your avatar hehe i'd try those pointy sharp things turned to the front, and made a bit smaller, it would make it more agressive looking, menacing, imo.

keep up the good work!

funkdelic · 07-02-2007, 04:04 AM

LOL
uncle venom wants you dead, very creative! hope to see some creative ideas too hehehe

good luck!

plasma3d · 07-02-2007, 04:51 AM

nice concept venom and it looks like venom

V3N0M · 07-02-2007, 09:07 PM

Did some head versions, I want the default face to look inocent and the killer one to look... erm... killer XD
And her/his? arm weapons have different functions, the right one is for defense and infiltration, with it she/he? can change memoryes, change information both on hardrives and neurons; the right hand is for destructive purposes, firing various energy weapons and even creating a sword. The detachable drones can be used to amlify his energy weapons. For example with the he can create an energy sword powerfull enough to cut a planet in half XD

V3N0M · 08-02-2007, 10:06 AM

Another small update, geting used to my shadow, and also trying some ideas, like different teeth styles and the idea of a longue razor tip tongue to pull a few arems or heads towards those pointy teeth of hers.

I need a little moar feedback on the teeth and tongue thing :P

TheWinterLord · 08-02-2007, 12:50 PM

Keep pushing your concept I think it will kick some serious behind when you are done with it! Register a thumbnail at the dominance war site, yes now!

V3N0M · 08-02-2007, 01:04 PM

Hmmm... I need a name first :/ ...
I was thinking A.N.G.E.L. - Apocaliptic Neo Generation Electronic Liberator... or whatever :P that was just kinda off the top of my tiny brain... sugestions?

gridlinked · 08-02-2007, 07:54 PM

Love that name V3N0M! You should keep it.

Regarding the mouth area, the tongue is always a classic, it could be electrified so when it touches or tries to wrap itself around an enemies' neck, it would shock him into submission

The teeth version i like the most is the one on the bottom left corner.

V3N0M · 08-02-2007, 08:33 PM

Hmm I was also thinking of other acronyms... like DVL (devil) but I think I'll stay with A.N.G.E.L. even if it is a bit corny, I only need a cooler acronym for it :/

V3N0M · 11-02-2007, 01:52 AM

Another update, pushing my concept a bit further, more blades, although the one on the head makes it look a bit bad, maybe I won't use it...
Feedback pls!

V3N0M · 13-02-2007, 11:30 PM

Long time no update, I am geting closer to my final concept... kept what I liked from my previous ones and it seemed to have too much of a plain armor so I added a few details...
Two more details to settle:
how the mouth opens up

and the name
I might still go with A.N.G.E.L. but I also like K.A.I.T.O.U. (japanese he he XD) Killing, Anihilation, Infiltration, Terror(or Termination), Obliteration Unit XD

PLEEEAZE CRIT AND FEEDBACK!

07-02-2007, 12:20 AM	#1
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	V3N0M - Dominance War 2 I was on the battlefield, a medic healing the wounded, and dreading the stupid war that brought all this suffering... then the fools unleashed theyr weapons, a blinding light rushed toward us, incinerating everything - trees, buildings, animals, people, the very ground. As I awaited an inescapable doom I just kept screaming "You fools! What have you done? YOU FOOLS". Noone could have survived, we were standing on Armageddon... and then the flash came, my comrades, my pacients, my wife, my children... al gone in an instant... I felt my body being turned to dust, my very soul burning... not from the heat, but from rage and thirst for vengence on those blind idiots that condemned us all with theyr stupid wars... But then I awoke, reborn, no longer a weak peace of meat but a creature of metal, pure and strong... time has come to punish my executors, to make them see the light... and then perish from it just as I did. V3N0M is here! PH33R ME INFIDELS! __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

07-02-2007, 12:46 AM	#2
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	First basic concept: It's a Switchblade assassin, normally looking innocent and harmless it can transform into a killing machine with double switchblade wings and flying killer drones and with energyweapons. With her right arm she can do anything from erase ur memory to shortcircuit ur motherboard and with her left one she can just blow you apart.. so she is well suited for assassination, espionage, infiltration, or just mass homicide or even demolition jobs... nuff said, need a better concept now __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/ Last edited by V3N0M; 07-02-2007 at 12:57 AM..

07-02-2007, 12:48 AM	#3
OnyxIdol Geek and proud of it Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Germany Posts: 226 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Interesting. You should keep the additional-eyes-poppin-out-of-head thing. __________________ always searching

07-02-2007, 01:05 AM	#4
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I will, I'm also thinking of a couple of eyes poping up on the back of her head __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

07-02-2007, 03:50 AM	#5
gridlinked Unknown Robot Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Portugal Posts: 177 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ah, a paranoid machine j/k I like the four eyes aspect, dunno about the teeth - it suits your avatar hehe i'd try those pointy sharp things turned to the front, and made a bit smaller, it would make it more agressive looking, menacing, imo. keep up the good work! __________________ My Portfolio :: artbymasa My art thread: Grid's Game Art HQ

07-02-2007, 04:04 AM	#6
funkdelic 3D Dude! Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 377 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	LOL uncle venom wants you dead, very creative! hope to see some creative ideas too hehehe good luck! __________________ Portfolio

07-02-2007, 04:51 AM	#7
plasma3d Fighter Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Greece Posts: 62 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice concept venom and it looks like venom __________________ {Only the Dead have seen the end of War}-Plato

07-02-2007, 09:07 PM	#8
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Did some head versions, I want the default face to look inocent and the killer one to look... erm... killer XD And her/his? arm weapons have different functions, the right one is for defense and infiltration, with it she/he? can change memoryes, change information both on hardrives and neurons; the right hand is for destructive purposes, firing various energy weapons and even creating a sword. The detachable drones can be used to amlify his energy weapons. For example with the he can create an energy sword powerfull enough to cut a planet in half XD __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

08-02-2007, 10:06 AM	#9
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Another small update, geting used to my shadow, and also trying some ideas, like different teeth styles and the idea of a longue razor tip tongue to pull a few arems or heads towards those pointy teeth of hers. I need a little moar feedback on the teeth and tongue thing :P __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

08-02-2007, 12:50 PM	#10
TheWinterLord Reretsiged Uesr Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Sweden, Malmö Posts: 722 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Keep pushing your concept I think it will kick some serious behind when you are done with it! Register a thumbnail at the dominance war site, yes now! __________________ Pontus, The Winter Lord @ Massive Entertainment Honorable Mentions: W64 Steam Power, W78-79 Free from the Year TWL´s SketchBook

08-02-2007, 01:04 PM	#11
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hmmm... I need a name first :/ ... I was thinking A.N.G.E.L. - Apocaliptic Neo Generation Electronic Liberator... or whatever :P that was just kinda off the top of my tiny brain... sugestions? __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

08-02-2007, 07:54 PM	#12
gridlinked Unknown Robot Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Portugal Posts: 177 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Love that name V3N0M! You should keep it. Regarding the mouth area, the tongue is always a classic, it could be electrified so when it touches or tries to wrap itself around an enemies' neck, it would shock him into submission The teeth version i like the most is the one on the bottom left corner. __________________ My Portfolio :: artbymasa My art thread: Grid's Game Art HQ

08-02-2007, 08:33 PM	#13
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hmm I was also thinking of other acronyms... like DVL (devil) but I think I'll stay with A.N.G.E.L. even if it is a bit corny, I only need a cooler acronym for it :/ __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

11-02-2007, 01:52 AM	#14
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Another update, pushing my concept a bit further, more blades, although the one on the head makes it look a bit bad, maybe I won't use it... Feedback pls! __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

13-02-2007, 11:30 PM	#15
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Long time no update, I am geting closer to my final concept... kept what I liked from my previous ones and it seemed to have too much of a plain armor so I added a few details... Two more details to settle: how the mouth opens up and the name I might still go with A.N.G.E.L. but I also like K.A.I.T.O.U. (japanese he he XD) Killing, Anihilation, Infiltration, Terror(or Termination), Obliteration Unit XD PLEEEAZE CRIT AND FEEDBACK! __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

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