V3N0M - Dominance War 2 - Page 2

gridlinked · 15-02-2007, 04:29 AM

Hum... i don't think you have to simulate those human features... i mean, hiding the real mouth behind a fake mouth. Those boobies (is that what they are) look weird

What do you think of having six of those things from the back, instead of just two?

squirl · 15-02-2007, 06:15 AM

i like the eyes and the teeth. maby have em so when the mouths closed the face looks relitly smooth so theres more of a supprise and shock aspect when the face opens to revil the tooth maw like what gridlinked said.
i can already see it hanging upside down from a celing in the dark then grabbing a non-machine with the tounge and drawing their head into 'the toothy maw' XD

p.s. i like the name A.N.G.E.L. but im a sucker for a good japanese name.
pp.ss. you should number the heads and versions of teeth so we can tell you which ones we think might work.

shadowbreeze · 15-02-2007, 07:07 AM

looking really cool and i agree with what squirl has stated, rip them apart.

V3N0M · 16-02-2007, 02:23 AM

Ok so I already decide on a design for the head, and it will be without the blade on top and with the teeth being like Grid said in his last post, and yes I want her(him?) to look unmenacing or even innocent and gainign your trust and making you come closer, and closer and then in the blink of an eye just viciously tare you to shreads.
Ohh and I tryed the six blade look but I didn't like it too much, and the thing is she can open those things THROUGH her body! so if you somehow end up huging her wham!!!! XD

Maybe I could loose the lips alltogether :P but then she wouldn't be so appealing, oh and just to bring some sense into this, one of the worldn's most powerfull computers gave me an idea, her cooling system will run on plasma(a.k.a. blood XD) which is why she needs to "feed" XD

squirl · 16-02-2007, 04:39 AM

i like the innocent/non thretining (wow i wish i could spell) idea, luring the enemy into a false sence of security. bdw, thanks for the refrence pics, mutch app.

gridlinked · 16-02-2007, 04:42 AM

The plasma thing is a great idea, fits right in with the concept.

mim · 16-02-2007, 10:18 AM

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look unmenacing or even innocent and gainign your trust and making you come closer, and closer and then in the blink of an eye just viciously tare you to shreads.

Wooooo! great venom! I like the idea!

keep updated here!

goodluck, mim,

V3N0M · 16-02-2007, 07:42 PM

@Squirl: no prob, we're all here to help each other right? it's a comunity competition XD
And I still can't decide on how the mouth is going to open but I can work that out when modeling

And all I need is a good idea for protection, I already illustrated her(his) energy based defense and offense and manipulation thigamabobs, but I need something more original than just a forcefield if I can find it...
Oh and yes I am worryed about the boobs(which are actually a pair of his faithfull hiller drones) I think Ineed to redesign that area :P
Thanks for comments guys! Please keep em up

FistOfGod · 18-02-2007, 11:28 PM

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And I still can't decide on how the mouth is going to open but I can work that out when modeling.

Sometimes if I have a basic idea of what I want to do (and I want to start on modeling and don't have time to draw out every angle) I will model the VERY basic forms and then take a screenshot. I will then just do some very basic/fast sketches of some different ideas of the particular area I am concerned about. When are you planning to show us some more screenshots/concepts? Also, you should check out Ghost in the Shell. The series has some cool shots of body parts being exposed, etc, etc. It might help you with deciding on what you want to do with the head. Keep us posted!

Waylon

V3N0M · 20-02-2007, 01:29 AM

I'm sorry I couldn't update sooner, been having some personal problems, hope you understand.

Ok... my final concept, and it's not the greatest but it shows exactly how it transforms, allthough whyle I model I might change a thing or two, I may still make a few sketches with her(him) as I go along just to get to know my character better and think of a wining shot XD Wish me luck, I'm going in...

V3N0M · 24-02-2007, 11:49 AM

Ok, here are some random doodles, playing around with poses and scenes and the idea of making my shadow fly...
Anyway, sorry I can't post any more now, but I'll be back with more updates shortly... cheers!

defaultalias · 24-02-2007, 12:37 PM

venom, who hugs a robot? i wouldn't, nope...
i do like the angry face though, looking like evangelion(over used example btw, just like mr. grievous) keep it up, and refine those poses. then get to modeling. i want to see you finish this.

Tank[NL] · 24-02-2007, 01:12 PM

i actually really like the hug. the left one is best. kind of femanine, but evil...

i mean. how freaky is it to be in a base or even on a battlefield and suddenly feel the sweet and gentle touch of a loved one, only to find something hell-bend on your destruction, most likely painfull at that.

great idea for a winning pose man. almost something out of a horror movie

keep at it dude !

V3N0M · 24-02-2007, 01:32 PM

Yeh well the idea si that she gains ur trust and then when you hug her like in the first pose and then she goes all switchblade through YOU! and it's a hug of death XD One more concept to come and backstory and modeling wip of course... but a bit later

squirl · 24-02-2007, 04:27 PM

hey v3nom, good to see u posting again. i like the hug idea, even if you dont have the patience to wait for there trust you could just jump on their back and hang on to em as the wings/blades rip em to shreads.

15-02-2007, 04:29 AM	#16
gridlinked Unknown Robot Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Portugal Posts: 177 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hum... i don't think you have to simulate those human features... i mean, hiding the real mouth behind a fake mouth. Those boobies (is that what they are) look weird What do you think of having six of those things from the back, instead of just two? __________________ My Portfolio :: artbymasa My art thread: Grid's Game Art HQ

15-02-2007, 06:15 AM	#17
squirl Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like the eyes and the teeth. maby have em so when the mouths closed the face looks relitly smooth so theres more of a supprise and shock aspect when the face opens to revil the tooth maw like what gridlinked said. i can already see it hanging upside down from a celing in the dark then grabbing a non-machine with the tounge and drawing their head into 'the toothy maw' XD p.s. i like the name A.N.G.E.L. but im a sucker for a good japanese name. pp.ss. you should number the heads and versions of teeth so we can tell you which ones we think might work. __________________ 'FIRE A MISSILE! DO SOME DAMMAGE' This T-800 Terminator has encountered a problem and will now close. would you like to send a report?

16-02-2007, 02:23 AM	#19
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ok so I already decide on a design for the head, and it will be without the blade on top and with the teeth being like Grid said in his last post, and yes I want her(him?) to look unmenacing or even innocent and gainign your trust and making you come closer, and closer and then in the blink of an eye just viciously tare you to shreads. Ohh and I tryed the six blade look but I didn't like it too much, and the thing is she can open those things THROUGH her body! so if you somehow end up huging her wham!!!! XD Maybe I could loose the lips alltogether :P but then she wouldn't be so appealing, oh and just to bring some sense into this, one of the worldn's most powerfull computers gave me an idea, her cooling system will run on plasma(a.k.a. blood XD) which is why she needs to "feed" XD __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/ Last edited by V3N0M; 16-02-2007 at 02:26 AM..

16-02-2007, 04:39 AM	#20
squirl Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like the innocent/non thretining (wow i wish i could spell) idea, luring the enemy into a false sence of security. bdw, thanks for the refrence pics, mutch app. __________________ 'FIRE A MISSILE! DO SOME DAMMAGE' This T-800 Terminator has encountered a problem and will now close. would you like to send a report?

16-02-2007, 04:42 AM	#21
gridlinked Unknown Robot Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Portugal Posts: 177 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The plasma thing is a great idea, fits right in with the concept. __________________ My Portfolio :: artbymasa My art thread: Grid's Game Art HQ

15-02-2007, 07:07 AM	#18
shadowbreeze who me? Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Australia Posts: 213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	looking really cool and i agree with what squirl has stated, rip them apart.

16-02-2007, 07:42 PM	#23
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	@Squirl: no prob, we're all here to help each other right? it's a comunity competition XD And I still can't decide on how the mouth is going to open but I can work that out when modeling And all I need is a good idea for protection, I already illustrated her(his) energy based defense and offense and manipulation thigamabobs, but I need something more original than just a forcefield if I can find it... Oh and yes I am worryed about the boobs(which are actually a pair of his faithfull hiller drones) I think Ineed to redesign that area :P Thanks for comments guys! Please keep em up __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

20-02-2007, 01:29 AM	#25
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'm sorry I couldn't update sooner, been having some personal problems, hope you understand. Ok... my final concept, and it's not the greatest but it shows exactly how it transforms, allthough whyle I model I might change a thing or two, I may still make a few sketches with her(him) as I go along just to get to know my character better and think of a wining shot XD Wish me luck, I'm going in... __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

24-02-2007, 11:49 AM	#26
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ok, here are some random doodles, playing around with poses and scenes and the idea of making my shadow fly... Anyway, sorry I can't post any more now, but I'll be back with more updates shortly... cheers! __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

24-02-2007, 12:37 PM	#27
defaultalias Meh... Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: United States Posts: 892 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	venom, who hugs a robot? i wouldn't, nope... i do like the angry face though, looking like evangelion(over used example btw, just like mr. grievous) keep it up, and refine those poses. then get to modeling. i want to see you finish this. __________________ Webpage: [defaultalias.wordpress.com] updated: 4-21-07

24-02-2007, 01:12 PM	#28
Tank[NL] New goal: Platinum spam Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Your happyplace. I stole it... Posts: 3,423 Thanks: 3 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	i actually really like the hug. the left one is best. kind of femanine, but evil... i mean. how freaky is it to be in a base or even on a battlefield and suddenly feel the sweet and gentle touch of a loved one, only to find something hell-bend on your destruction, most likely painfull at that. great idea for a winning pose man. almost something out of a horror movie keep at it dude ! __________________ NEW SIGNATURE! aint it pretty?

24-02-2007, 01:32 PM	#29
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yeh well the idea si that she gains ur trust and then when you hug her like in the first pose and then she goes all switchblade through YOU! and it's a hug of death XD One more concept to come and backstory and modeling wip of course... but a bit later __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

24-02-2007, 04:27 PM	#30
squirl Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey v3nom, good to see u posting again. i like the hug idea, even if you dont have the patience to wait for there trust you could just jump on their back and hang on to em as the wings/blades rip em to shreads. __________________ 'FIRE A MISSILE! DO SOME DAMMAGE' This T-800 Terminator has encountered a problem and will now close. would you like to send a report?

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