Nokia 6510

Pablo! · 22-03-2003, 10:43 AM

Hi,
Please comment this 1 hour work

Gl2eEn · 22-03-2003, 11:41 AM

hehe...

good work man

Pablo! · 22-03-2003, 12:51 PM

Pablo! · 22-03-2003, 05:31 PM

hi,
please write who image is better, first or this one?

wijngaert · 22-03-2003, 05:41 PM

Hi Pablo,

Nice work. The wood on wich it is lying has verry much texture.
The buttons are verry nice but the display is to flat.

Collars are nice. I am not a fan of "out of focus" on single objects. But that is my oppinion. Keep up the nice work.
Coen

Gypsyhunter · 22-03-2003, 09:44 PM

i think the white one looks more realistic. But the blue one looks cool too. great work.

synkronizer · 23-03-2003, 12:59 AM

can you make a render of the first one with the adjustments you made for the second one? cause the white one looks like throw-away plastic

Cyclone · 23-03-2003, 05:06 AM

yea i like the second one better too. I like the model but the texturing needs a little work and I don't like the blurryness that much either. for 1 h thats pretty good though.

Pablo! · 23-03-2003, 08:45 AM

hi,
thx for buldings comments

...
What like this? I render with diferent HDRI map...and also wood ist to small right?

Raden · 23-03-2003, 09:34 AM

yes the wood is way to small, and the textures for like #9 is a bit messed up

Pablo! · 23-03-2003, 09:58 AM

hi,
I'll try to make it, but I am not sure will it work, cause i am a biginner.Is it better to add DOF, or maybe better witouth ?

Pablo! · 23-03-2003, 02:46 PM

hi,
two renders....

Pablo! · 23-03-2003, 02:48 PM

first

Pablo! · 23-03-2003, 02:49 PM

second

22-03-2003, 10:43 AM	#1
Pablo! Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Poland Posts: 58 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nokia 6510 Hi, Please comment this 1 hour work Attached Images __________________ Im looking freelance jobs... ----------------------------

22-03-2003, 11:41 AM	#2
Gl2eEn KDI Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Finland Posts: 231 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hehe... good work man __________________ -K.D.I.-

22-03-2003, 12:51 PM	#3
Pablo! Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Poland Posts: 58 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thx __________________ Im looking freelance jobs... ----------------------------

22-03-2003, 05:31 PM	#4
Pablo! Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Poland Posts: 58 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hi, please write who image is better, first or this one? Attached Images __________________ Im looking freelance jobs... ----------------------------

22-03-2003, 09:44 PM	#6
Gypsyhunter Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: america Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i think the white one looks more realistic. But the blue one looks cool too. great work. __________________ i will rule the world someday...

22-03-2003, 05:41 PM	#5
wijngaert Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Zwolle, Netherlands Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi Pablo, Nice work. The wood on wich it is lying has verry much texture. The buttons are verry nice but the display is to flat. Collars are nice. I am not a fan of "out of focus" on single objects. But that is my oppinion. Keep up the nice work. Coen

23-03-2003, 12:59 AM	#7
synkronizer Registered User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Glued to my pc 24/7 Posts: 103 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	can you make a render of the first one with the adjustments you made for the second one? cause the white one looks like throw-away plastic __________________ Watch the screen. Yes, go on... you're doing good... don't stop watching the screeen...

23-03-2003, 05:06 AM	#8
Cyclone Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 36 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yea i like the second one better too. I like the model but the texturing needs a little work and I don't like the blurryness that much either. for 1 h thats pretty good though.

23-03-2003, 08:45 AM	#9
Pablo! Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Poland Posts: 58 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hi, thx for buldings comments ... What like this? I render with diferent HDRI map...and also wood ist to small right? Attached Images __________________ Im looking freelance jobs... ----------------------------

23-03-2003, 09:34 AM	#10
Raden Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Sweden, Stockholm Posts: 90 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yes the wood is way to small, and the textures for like #9 is a bit messed up __________________ Daniel Rådén - www.radenart.com - www.eeye.us (cg community, feel free to join our forum)

23-03-2003, 09:58 AM	#11
Pablo! Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Poland Posts: 58 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hi, I'll try to make it, but I am not sure will it work, cause i am a biginner.Is it better to add DOF, or maybe better witouth ? __________________ Im looking freelance jobs... ----------------------------

23-03-2003, 02:46 PM	#12
Pablo! Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Poland Posts: 58 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hi, two renders.... __________________ Im looking freelance jobs... ----------------------------

23-03-2003, 02:48 PM	#13
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23-03-2003, 02:49 PM	#14
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