poopinmymouth - Dominance War II - Page 3

poopinmymouth · 12-02-2007, 02:40 AM

Updated the first post, took care of the areas I thought were weakest.

obibok · 12-02-2007, 02:56 AM

is he some sort of scout ... couz he don't look like he would do any damage?

MonteCristo · 12-02-2007, 01:04 PM

Definitely diggin' the new feet. That's a nice design. Out of interest, what discipline are you thinking of assigning this guy?

poopinmymouth · 12-02-2007, 01:07 PM

Sniper/stealth. I want him to be able to sprint in undetected to a good position, snipe his target, then sprint back out. He's not really one for hand to hand combat, though being a machine, it's a fair bit stronger than an average man.

I'm working on a sniper rifle design that will collapse down and fit in his back. The barrel itself will be made of an energy field, that only appears when the rifle is powered on. I was looking at Biathlon athletes (those are the guys who ski, then shoot), but I didn't like the silhouette break of having the barrel show from the front poking up over the head, hence having to come up with a less conventional weapon.

arshlevon · 12-02-2007, 04:32 PM

yo man i am really digging the resolve on the feet. i think i am going to have to echo mr kite ..from a design standpoint i am not feeling the orange hair.. i think making it red like the feet would work and not impose very much on original design, black would also work, me personally i would experiment with white or sliver looking hair, i think it would really make this dude pop casue he is fairly dark overall..also a stripe of white with another color hair like rouge or something could also be neat, but i feel like his hair is clashing with the design of the character currently.

i really love this little dude.

Kalango · 12-02-2007, 08:49 PM

robots are tought toi be stealth...like all those "bzzt...pszzzzt and crrezzzzzzk" hehe, i would like a brunnete variation...keep it up

V3N0M · 12-02-2007, 10:20 PM

I say he also have something done with his eyes, since he IS a sniper, how about one of the eyes somehow termminator style poping out

Pedro Toledo · 12-02-2007, 10:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by V3N0M

I say he also have something done with his eyes, since he IS a sniper, how about one of the eyes somehow termminator style poping out

Well, actually he could have only one eye... and maybe his right arm could be really short, just enough to reach the trigger... And also he could have a third leg to be more steady, like a tripod!!

Hehe, kidding, keep up the good work

bb0x · 13-02-2007, 04:53 PM

Likeing the design more and more

I deff. like how you have done the new legs...Are those cushion under his "feet"? :P
The arms looks a little bit stronger as they are right now so thats all good I guess.

About the hair color, deff. not white. Because it is a stealthy char. and white pops out too much imo...No blacks either since the whole char is black and whill make it unintresting imo.
So a little darker of what you have got now would be better.

Some more colors would make it a little more intrestig since it looks like it is still lacking something for me.

Btw, does this guy have any fingers?...I mean this screen shows everything extra dark so I can't see much. If he doesnt have any fingers, how will he operate his rifle? If he does have fingers I guess itt'l be kind of hard using the rifle with his arms right now. I mean the tips of his arm are kind of big to hold a gun with comfort. Unless it is some kind of custom rifle and it looks lke that is going to be the case

Thats about all I have to say right now, keep it up

Por@szek · 13-02-2007, 11:21 PM

Man U betray PC? How could U?
And matey, August was your inspiration to do the concept

Looks so familiar.
Take care and hope to see U soon ... online hehe.

josuah · 14-02-2007, 02:05 AM

You 're also my Mentor in some way, Ben. Very happy read you here. Something seems weird on the neck and the feets of the robot (look rigid).

stimpack · 14-02-2007, 02:15 AM

I like this guy! hes fun. he deffinately doesnt come off as menacing, i think its all your smooth curves and shapes that make him feel nice. But the fact that your taking a completely different approach to this makes me smile. I will watch intensely =)

best of luck, and see you on the battle field son!!!!!!!!

Cracadoo · 14-02-2007, 04:33 AM

Maybe longer lower legs so he could run faster.

poopinmymouth · 19-02-2007, 10:55 PM

Updated first post with LASERS

mim · 19-02-2007, 11:39 PM

Hi ben n well come

your concepts is awsome sofar for me cause thought I know how you work, I like all of that laser weapons n more one on the upper right,
mim,

PS: Edited! sorry about compliments, just I can't kept patient myself, when I see you her buddy!

12-02-2007, 01:04 PM	#33
MonteCristo Can't stay away. Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: UK Posts: 2,664 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	Definitely diggin' the new feet. That's a nice design. Out of interest, what discipline are you thinking of assigning this guy? __________________ www.jackoakman.com

12-02-2007, 04:32 PM	#35
arshlevon Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 142 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yo man i am really digging the resolve on the feet. i think i am going to have to echo mr kite ..from a design standpoint i am not feeling the orange hair.. i think making it red like the feet would work and not impose very much on original design, black would also work, me personally i would experiment with white or sliver looking hair, i think it would really make this dude pop casue he is fairly dark overall..also a stripe of white with another color hair like rouge or something could also be neat, but i feel like his hair is clashing with the design of the character currently. i really love this little dude. __________________ http://www.arshlevon.com

12-02-2007, 08:49 PM	#36
Kalango Freelacer berseker >_> Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Fortaleza- Brazil! Posts: 390 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	robots are tought toi be stealth...like all those "bzzt...pszzzzt and crrezzzzzzk" hehe, i would like a brunnete variation...keep it up __________________ Nah

12-02-2007, 10:20 PM	#37
V3N0M Dawg of War Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: in the mouth of the mutated giant whale Posts: 323 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I say he also have something done with his eyes, since he IS a sniper, how about one of the eyes somehow termminator style poping out __________________ We shall defend our forum, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the polys, we shall fight on the vertex channel, we shall fight in the riging and in the skining, we shall fight in the texture; we shall never surrender. A.N.G.E.L. "<NyseriA> Things I've learned about war from videogames: If you find yourself mortally wounded by an enemy sniper be sure to let him know that he is a faggot."http://www.bash.org/

13-02-2007, 04:53 PM	#39
bb0x Artificial Soundwave Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: the Netherrealms Posts: 813 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Likeing the design more and more I deff. like how you have done the new legs...Are those cushion under his "feet"? :P The arms looks a little bit stronger as they are right now so thats all good I guess. About the hair color, deff. not white. Because it is a stealthy char. and white pops out too much imo...No blacks either since the whole char is black and whill make it unintresting imo. So a little darker of what you have got now would be better. Some more colors would make it a little more intrestig since it looks like it is still lacking something for me. Btw, does this guy have any fingers?...I mean this screen shows everything extra dark so I can't see much. If he doesnt have any fingers, how will he operate his rifle? If he does have fingers I guess itt'l be kind of hard using the rifle with his arms right now. I mean the tips of his arm are kind of big to hold a gun with comfort. Unless it is some kind of custom rifle and it looks lke that is going to be the case Thats about all I have to say right now, keep it up __________________ http://www.bb0x.com new portfolio I'm working on. http://bb0x.wordpress.com/

12-02-2007, 02:40 AM	#31
poopinmymouth Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 15 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Updated the first post, took care of the areas I thought were weakest.

12-02-2007, 02:56 AM	#32
obibok Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Szczecin Poland Posts: 107 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	is he some sort of scout ... couz he don't look like he would do any damage?

12-02-2007, 01:07 PM	#34
poopinmymouth Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 15 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Sniper/stealth. I want him to be able to sprint in undetected to a good position, snipe his target, then sprint back out. He's not really one for hand to hand combat, though being a machine, it's a fair bit stronger than an average man. I'm working on a sniper rifle design that will collapse down and fit in his back. The barrel itself will be made of an energy field, that only appears when the rifle is powered on. I was looking at Biathlon athletes (those are the guys who ski, then shoot), but I didn't like the silhouette break of having the barrel show from the front poking up over the head, hence having to come up with a less conventional weapon.

13-02-2007, 11:21 PM	#40
Por@szek Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Man U betray PC? How could U? And matey, August was your inspiration to do the concept Looks so familiar. Take care and hope to see U soon ... online hehe.

14-02-2007, 02:05 AM	#41
josuah Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	You 're also my Mentor in some way, Ben. Very happy read you here. Something seems weird on the neck and the feets of the robot (look rigid). Last edited by josuah; 14-02-2007 at 02:07 AM..

14-02-2007, 02:15 AM	#42
stimpack Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like this guy! hes fun. he deffinately doesnt come off as menacing, i think its all your smooth curves and shapes that make him feel nice. But the fact that your taking a completely different approach to this makes me smile. I will watch intensely =) best of luck, and see you on the battle field son!!!!!!!!

14-02-2007, 04:33 AM	#43
Cracadoo Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Belgrade, Serbia Posts: 436 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Maybe longer lower legs so he could run faster. __________________ My Dominance War Entry

19-02-2007, 10:55 PM	#44
poopinmymouth Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 15 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Updated first post with LASERS

19-02-2007, 11:39 PM	#45
mim Arm&amp;amp;amp;amp;amp; you ! Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: France Posts: 995 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Hi ben n well come your concepts is awsome sofar for me cause thought I know how you work, I like all of that laser weapons n more one on the upper right, mim, PS: Edited! sorry about compliments, just I can't kept patient myself, when I see you her buddy! __________________ Draw a crazy picture! Write a nutty poem! Sign a mumble-gumble song! Whistle through your comb! Do a loony-goony dance ‘Cross the kitchen floor! Put something silly in the world! That ain’t been there before! "Sell Silverstain" Last edited by mim; 20-02-2007 at 12:12 AM.. Reason: removin compliments!

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