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turb · 25-03-2003, 04:54 PM

Hello everyone,

This is a illustration or a design for my future school demoreel in 3d. Can you give me a critic please.

Scuse me for my really bad English!

Thanks

EvEr666 · 25-03-2003, 07:43 PM

i like it...it's cool in my opinion...

David Ciprian · 25-03-2003, 08:15 PM

It is cool!Nice use of imagination and colours!Great job!
I don't know english either but you really need to study more.I wanted to correct you but i don't want to look like a smarty that doesn't knows a thing

Great work (again)!

darnel25 · 26-03-2003, 12:20 AM

looks beautiful. Nice work.

Michael · 27-03-2003, 08:25 PM

It looks good. The only things I would crit is the roof - the shingles don't reflect like this...
I would add some branch here and there on the tree trunks, some bush... To add some details.

Keep it up.

turb · 28-03-2003, 06:23 PM

thanks for critic, i'm work on...if i can say that..

David Ciprian · 28-03-2003, 08:21 PM

I tought that those were the light going trough the trees (excuse my englidsh but i'm not going to think grammar now)

25-03-2003, 04:54 PM	#1
turb Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Canada/Québec Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	landscape Hello everyone, This is a illustration or a design for my future school demoreel in 3d. Can you give me a critic please. Scuse me for my really bad English! Thanks Attached Images

25-03-2003, 07:43 PM	#2
EvEr666 Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: romania Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like it...it's cool in my opinion... __________________ I'm Not Evil...I Just Act That Way!

25-03-2003, 08:15 PM	#3
David Ciprian Blacklow Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: in one's heart Posts: 1,029 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	It is cool!Nice use of imagination and colours!Great job! I don't know english either but you really need to study more.I wanted to correct you but i don't want to look like a smarty that doesn't knows a thing Great work (again)! __________________ You can never be too good, but you can always try!

27-03-2003, 08:25 PM	#5
Michael Lone Brushboy Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Poland Posts: 711 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	It looks good. The only things I would crit is the roof - the shingles don't reflect like this... I would add some branch here and there on the tree trunks, some bush... To add some details. Keep it up. __________________ My CG Portfolio

28-03-2003, 08:21 PM	#7
David Ciprian Blacklow Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: in one's heart Posts: 1,029 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I tought that those were the light going trough the trees (excuse my englidsh but i'm not going to think grammar now) __________________ You can never be too good, but you can always try!

26-03-2003, 12:20 AM	#4
darnel25 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Jamaica, New York Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	looks beautiful. Nice work.

28-03-2003, 06:23 PM	#6
turb Registered User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Canada/Québec Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for critic, i'm work on...if i can say that..

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