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Old 19-04-2007, 09:30 PM   #106
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Thank you guys...
@Rooky: Good composition, I like your character, and I think it should be lazy....
@V3blitz: The pose look great, and your is different from another.
@Shahin_fj:Your character is funny, it looks like a fat aneater...
@Sacek: Good modelling, I like The hand model style. Can't wait for the mapping.
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Old 19-04-2007, 10:15 PM   #107
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I make it small and short. Now I am working on some small detail....
Please give me some comment and critics for my work. Thanks


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Old 20-04-2007, 04:51 PM   #108
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Ok! Let`s think that he`s just lazy

And finally here he is in color! Not really sure if these are the final colors yet, so feel free to say what do you think, and if theres something I could change!

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Old 20-04-2007, 05:42 PM   #109
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looking great rooky! maybe make those plants near the rock a little smaller, so the powerlineposts looks bigger
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Old 20-04-2007, 05:43 PM   #110
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Very nice materials, Rooky, but I'd like to see the aneater in a more... ehrm... funky color That brown makes him look like chocolate imo^^
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hi!
great work! i absolutely love it. there is only one small thing iŽd change and thats the clouds. i would make them more cartoonish (just a bunch of circles/spheres intersecting). if you change it or not, you will get my "12 points".
keep it up.
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Old 20-04-2007, 09:55 PM   #112
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Ties thanks m8! You`re right about that, and I`ll try to make the powerlineposts a bit bigger and the plants smaller
.KaisoR hehe I was sure that there will be at least one saying that the anteaters color s*cks Actually at first he was with a blue skin, but it felt like there are too many colors in the scene, so I changed it to brown Will see what I can do with this problem. :]
justus_jonas Thanks! I got the point what are you aiming me to do. Of course I`ll give it a try but I`m doubting if I can do that as good as most of you would like it. The present clouds are made using the fire effect in max, so maybe I can still use it, just redone some settings.
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Old 21-04-2007, 12:24 AM   #113
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Rooky : liked ur work a lot, really appreciable effort

Its 1 day work, but I think I'll go along with this type, don't have much time this month
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I give it a short body, to make it look cute. But there is something I dont feel rigth, but I dont know what it is....


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I give it a short body, to make it look cute. But there is something I dont feel rigth, but I dont know what it is....
I feel its all OK, maybe you get satisfied giving it more features of Anteater at nose or tail
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Old 21-04-2007, 08:36 AM   #116
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@weitastudio: I think it is cute now, but if you want it to be more cute, I suggest to focus on the eyes! & if you can make the hands (just hands & not arms) a bit smaller. But as I said it is cute already!
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great work guys

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: really funny character. keep it simple.

AbhishekKr : cool one too. MAybe some clean up on textures and mesjh to do anyway.


rooky: you know I like your entry but got some crits on last update. First the green grass and blue sky are maybe alittle to saturated and does not merge well. Moreover your horizon is just at the middle of the picture. At the 1/3 that would be a better composition. So maybe add a fog to fade the colors in depth and maybe work more your sky (more gradient, better clouds...)
One thing a friend of mine tell me is that your rocks on the left break the distance impression you wanted to gave with your electrik post. Maybe reduce the rocks.
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Old 22-04-2007, 02:21 AM   #118
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Thank you for yours suggestion guys. I am now working in the texture.....and some more details.
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AbhishekKr : cool one too. MAybe some clean up on textures and mesjh to do anyway.


rooky: you know I like your entry but got some crits on last update. First the green grass and blue sky are maybe alittle to saturated and does not ...
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I'll sure try that as soon as I get some free time
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Here's my go at the anteater, just a sketch so far.
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