First markerrendering

bjotto · 29-03-2003, 07:31 PM

Made in something like 40 min

please crit

Michael · 29-03-2003, 07:55 PM

Nice. there could be some tiny black spots to make it look even more like the stone.
The perspective is a bit distorted... The stairs and what follows... it looks like it's getting wider when going to the door... And overall - some windows are not paralell to the roof, some are. I understand that it's a stone, but it would look better if they were in general paralell to the roof and only here and there a bit is chipped or something...

I love the blend shade-light...

Want some more!

bjotto · 29-03-2003, 08:02 PM

well, I did the inking in less than 5 min while watching tv...

Next time i'll think before drawing, atleast alittle

bjotto · 30-03-2003, 09:13 AM

Quote:

there could be some tiny black spots to make it look even more like the stone

I'll do that on my next image with stones

evil_radish · 01-04-2003, 09:19 AM

other than the things already pointed out by micheal, this "piece" is great, i really like it

morgoth · 04-04-2003, 12:41 PM

I love markers.. I always use them.. you did a pretty good job.. I've been using the markers for about a year now..wow... I learn most of my stuff from feng zhu.. artbyfeng.com he is a good man and a good teacher.. wee I go now.. oh and I'm weird right now because it's 4:30 in the morning and I've had about 3 hours of sleep in the past 3 days.. night..

29-03-2003, 07:31 PM	#1
bjotto Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Sweden Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	First markerrendering Made in something like 40 min please crit

29-03-2003, 07:55 PM	#2
Michael Lone Brushboy Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Poland Posts: 711 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Nice. there could be some tiny black spots to make it look even more like the stone. The perspective is a bit distorted... The stairs and what follows... it looks like it's getting wider when going to the door... And overall - some windows are not paralell to the roof, some are. I understand that it's a stone, but it would look better if they were in general paralell to the roof and only here and there a bit is chipped or something... I love the blend shade-light... Want some more! __________________ My CG Portfolio

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29-03-2003, 08:02 PM	#3
bjotto Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Sweden Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	well, I did the inking in less than 5 min while watching tv... Next time i'll think before drawing, atleast alittle

01-04-2003, 09:19 AM	#5
evil_radish Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Sweden Posts: 89 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	other than the things already pointed out by micheal, this "piece" is great, i really like it

04-04-2003, 12:41 PM	#6
morgoth Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: fountian valley, ca Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I love markers.. I always use them.. you did a pretty good job.. I've been using the markers for about a year now..wow... I learn most of my stuff from feng zhu.. artbyfeng.com he is a good man and a good teacher.. wee I go now.. oh and I'm weird right now because it's 4:30 in the morning and I've had about 3 hours of sleep in the past 3 days.. night..

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