Angel of Love n Peace

jaykar · 31-03-2003, 02:03 PM

Hi Friends
This is my first post in this forum. This image has been previously selected to be part of Max 5.0 tutorials. But then later, i felt that she needed a lot more improvement. This is the latest version of "Venella" as i call her. Venella in Telugu language means moon light.
I would like to hear any comments on this work of mine.
Thanks
Jaykar

zoo-prod · 31-03-2003, 02:06 PM

Very nice. But too much light effects on jewellery.

Very Good work !

Supervlieg · 31-03-2003, 03:07 PM

Nice model, I agree on the over-use of highlights on the jewelry.

Otherwise great. How bout a wire then?

blesson2k · 31-03-2003, 04:29 PM

Hi Jayakar,

Nice to see u aboard. I am not repeating what Zoo-prod and supervlieg have said and its quite obvious, too much highlights!!! Btw, still at Delhi? or Hyderabad?

lockdown2000 · 31-03-2003, 09:11 PM

welcome...

looks very cool. I dont think you used too much jewlery, its fine, leave it alone

very nice model. a wire would be nice.

Zytrex · 31-03-2003, 09:44 PM

Okay... some feedback you were probably looking for.

It looks like her face is all oily, she could use some powder. In other words, lessen the highlight. Maybe use a different shader, like switch from phong to blinn, or the other way around (I get them mixed up). Maybe make it a little easier to make out the hair and its color. The green cloth looks pretty good.

As for post effects, it looks like you're using Digital Fusion or something similar. If so, lessen the highlights a little bit and maybe add a little glow with the filter set to highlight.

Good work!

lockdown2000 · 01-04-2003, 01:59 AM

her lips need some attending to as well..they look very odd.

jaykar · 01-04-2003, 04:40 AM

Hi Friends
Thanks a lot for all ur valuable comments..... I have reduced the hilites.. now. and as for the oilyness of the skin, i had some ref where the model was just looking like wax model and she was pretty much real life person... So only i took the liberty to keep that kind of look n feel for her skin... I shall shortly post the wireframe also.........Thanks once again.
I am in Hyd

Jaykar

loboloco · 01-04-2003, 05:02 AM

Great model

I agree with Zytrex about the skin though. But you already said you made it that way on purpose so nevermind.

She seems a little stiff or artificial somehow...maybe it's the pose? or maybe the lighting?

anyway, good job.

jaykar · 01-04-2003, 05:06 AM

HI Guys
This is the wireframe of the model.. With lots of polys for jewellery and stuff. I guess it was worth, even while my system was screamminnng.
Cheers
Jaykar

mcrazer · 01-04-2003, 09:03 AM

UMMMUMMM
sorry lady but are you free for tho nieght

Can i date you " HI HOW ARE YOU DOING"

I like it alot keep it up pall

Ps "is she free tho night"

jaykar · 01-04-2003, 10:31 AM

Hi Guys
U can certainly date with her.... but she is modelled only till her waist..... OHHHH..... LOL
anyways thanks for all ur comments

31-03-2003, 02:03 PM	#1
jaykar Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: India Posts: 8 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Angel of Love n Peace Hi Friends This is my first post in this forum. This image has been previously selected to be part of Max 5.0 tutorials. But then later, i felt that she needed a lot more improvement. This is the latest version of "Venella" as i call her. Venella in Telugu language means moon light. I would like to hear any comments on this work of mine. Thanks Jaykar Attached Images __________________ jaykar www.jayring.com

31-03-2003, 02:06 PM	#2
zoo-prod Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Paris Posts: 132 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Very nice. But too much light effects on jewellery. Very Good work ! __________________ ZoO-PrOd ============== www.zoo-prod.fr.st ==============

31-03-2003, 03:07 PM	#3
Supervlieg Legend Edgemaster Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 57 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice model, I agree on the over-use of highlights on the jewelry. Otherwise great. How bout a wire then? __________________ "Although all of this remains quite questionable"

31-03-2003, 09:44 PM	#6
Zytrex I am mad, you know. Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 207 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Okay... some feedback you were probably looking for. It looks like her face is all oily, she could use some powder. In other words, lessen the highlight. Maybe use a different shader, like switch from phong to blinn, or the other way around (I get them mixed up). Maybe make it a little easier to make out the hair and its color. The green cloth looks pretty good. As for post effects, it looks like you're using Digital Fusion or something similar. If so, lessen the highlights a little bit and maybe add a little glow with the filter set to highlight. Good work! __________________ If you had a neck and I had a hand, I'd squeeze your brain, which is your body, right out of the top of your head, which does not exist! Discuss Lighting Here Discuss Subdivision Surfaces Here Discuss Materials Here

01-04-2003, 04:40 AM	#8
jaykar Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: India Posts: 8 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Angel of Love n Peace Hi Friends Thanks a lot for all ur valuable comments..... I have reduced the hilites.. now. and as for the oilyness of the skin, i had some ref where the model was just looking like wax model and she was pretty much real life person... So only i took the liberty to keep that kind of look n feel for her skin... I shall shortly post the wireframe also.........Thanks once again. I am in Hyd Jaykar Attached Images __________________ jaykar www.jayring.com

31-03-2003, 04:29 PM	#4
blesson2k Registered User Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: India Posts: 51 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi Jayakar, Nice to see u aboard. I am not repeating what Zoo-prod and supervlieg have said and its quite obvious, too much highlights!!! Btw, still at Delhi? or Hyderabad?

31-03-2003, 09:11 PM	#5
lockdown2000 Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	welcome... looks very cool. I dont think you used too much jewlery, its fine, leave it alone very nice model. a wire would be nice.

01-04-2003, 01:59 AM	#7
lockdown2000 Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 213 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	her lips need some attending to as well..they look very odd.

01-04-2003, 05:02 AM	#9
loboloco Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: TEXAS Posts: 43 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Great model I agree with Zytrex about the skin though. But you already said you made it that way on purpose so nevermind. She seems a little stiff or artificial somehow...maybe it's the pose? or maybe the lighting? anyway, good job. __________________ "No! Try not. Do, or do not -there is no try" -Yoda

01-04-2003, 05:06 AM	#10
jaykar Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: India Posts: 8 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	HI Guys This is the wireframe of the model.. With lots of polys for jewellery and stuff. I guess it was worth, even while my system was screamminnng. Cheers Jaykar Attached Images __________________ jaykar www.jayring.com

01-04-2003, 09:03 AM	#11
mcrazer SnEaK StUDiO's Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Belgium Posts: 76 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	UMMMUMMM sorry lady but are you free for tho nieght Can i date you " HI HOW ARE YOU DOING" I like it alot keep it up pall Ps "is she free tho night" __________________ Born 2 be ..................

01-04-2003, 10:31 AM	#12
jaykar Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: India Posts: 8 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi Guys U can certainly date with her.... but she is modelled only till her waist..... OHHHH..... LOL anyways thanks for all ur comments __________________ jaykar www.jayring.com

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