Pastry

goljat · 01-07-2007, 10:07 AM

Here we go.. I got this idea from a party and I think it came quite well.. Done by 3dsmax, Vray and Photoshop.. There is something I want to improve if you guys notice it, I hope not because its hard to fix

What do you think?

brentagain · 01-07-2007, 10:58 AM

looks good.I like the fact that you added noise to the plate,it makes it look more realistic with the reflections.That`s a mistake a lot of people make,they dont realize that default geometry is mathimatically perfect,and has no subtle defects for realism.The only thing I dont like is the glass...the quality of it dosent match the scene.
I think to the wood texture is a little bit too low res for that extreme of a closeup.

Bubbaloo · 01-07-2007, 01:18 PM

Man, that looks good! Seriously, I want to eat it.

goljat · 01-07-2007, 01:38 PM

brentagain you are right about the glass and the wood. I tried to hide those problems with DOF efect which I would done anyway. The HDRI map some how messes the glass but its just perfect in other ways so I keep it. And for the wood, there isnt anywhere good wood maps, thats just the best for what I have found.

Bubbaloo print it and eat it

Heres the wire.

brentagain · 01-07-2007, 01:48 PM

yes your right,there`s only a very few good texture sites.
I think that`s why now a lot of people use their digicams and make their own.
I wanted to mention also about the dark chocolate streaks...I think the spoon would actually break it`s way through them instead of cutting it`s way through..just to add that extra realism

...but I agree...it looks good enough to eat

Tank[NL] · 01-07-2007, 02:31 PM

looks really darn tasty. just one thing that detracts from the realism of the whole scene. it looks to be some kind of chocolate covered contraption, correct?

chocolate tends to break when you put a spoon in. if its not chocolate, it could still use some entry wound, if you will.

other than that and the pointers given, i think its brilliant.

gfx.KhronoS · 01-07-2007, 02:42 PM

Suddenly i`m hungry

Looks great and delicious, but I agree with Tank[NL] about the entry wound...

goljat · 01-07-2007, 03:21 PM

Damet its hard to please you guys

Well, you found that, the entry wound. Thats what I have been trouble with.. I think its impossible to model so tryed to photoshop it. Its there but its not so apparent. Mayby I still have to prove it

Thanks for your C&C

goljat · 03-07-2007, 07:17 PM

Now look waht you made me to do.. Update on the first post ^

Heres the difference to the old one. Better?

Bubbaloo · 03-07-2007, 10:55 PM

I noticed that. Much better.

artecnl · 03-07-2007, 11:26 PM

great job, im hungry now, thats cool, you did something that can cause hungry hehe great¡

narull · 04-07-2007, 06:58 AM

That look nice !
but if you want a good texture why don't you just download wood workshop? (try googling it). you can easily make a high res wood texture with it.

sepirioth · 04-07-2007, 07:15 AM

This looks very nice, nice shader. of the cake. And nice image overal

Mr.Alex · 04-07-2007, 09:22 AM

I'm agree with all of you))Cool work,but render time is extremly high for VRay!

Bubbaloo · 04-07-2007, 11:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by narull

That look nice !
but if you want a good texture why don't you just download wood workshop? (try googling it). you can easily make a high res wood texture with it.

Wood workshop sucks. The textures it makes only looks like wood from far away. Not good for close-ups.

01-07-2007, 10:07 AM	#1
goljat .. with litle g! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Finland Posts: 174 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Pastry Here we go.. I got this idea from a party and I think it came quite well.. Done by 3dsmax, Vray and Photoshop.. There is something I want to improve if you guys notice it, I hope not because its hard to fix What do you think? __________________ wip: Chevrolet Corvette Stingray 1963 toycar Finished work: Leijona Saphire watch/clock Pastry Dead Fred Last edited by goljat; 03-07-2007 at 07:22 PM..

01-07-2007, 01:18 PM	#3
Bubbaloo I be learnin me some 3d. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma U.S.A. Posts: 1,938 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Man, that looks good! Seriously, I want to eat it. __________________ Brian Looney Tulsa, Oklahoma My Wesite: http://lunatic-studio.com/

01-07-2007, 01:38 PM	#4
goljat .. with litle g! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Finland Posts: 174 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	brentagain you are right about the glass and the wood. I tried to hide those problems with DOF efect which I would done anyway. The HDRI map some how messes the glass but its just perfect in other ways so I keep it. And for the wood, there isnt anywhere good wood maps, thats just the best for what I have found. Bubbaloo print it and eat it Heres the wire. __________________ wip: Chevrolet Corvette Stingray 1963 toycar Finished work: Leijona Saphire watch/clock Pastry Dead Fred

01-07-2007, 01:48 PM	#5
brentagain Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 776 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	yes your right,there`s only a very few good texture sites. I think that`s why now a lot of people use their digicams and make their own. I wanted to mention also about the dark chocolate streaks...I think the spoon would actually break it`s way through them instead of cutting it`s way through..just to add that extra realism...but I agree...it looks good enough to eat

01-07-2007, 02:31 PM	#6
Tank[NL] New goal: Platinum spam Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Your happyplace. I stole it... Posts: 3,423 Thanks: 3 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	looks really darn tasty. just one thing that detracts from the realism of the whole scene. it looks to be some kind of chocolate covered contraption, correct? chocolate tends to break when you put a spoon in. if its not chocolate, it could still use some entry wound, if you will. other than that and the pointers given, i think its brilliant. __________________ NEW SIGNATURE! aint it pretty?

01-07-2007, 10:58 AM	#2
brentagain Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 776 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	looks good.I like the fact that you added noise to the plate,it makes it look more realistic with the reflections.That`s a mistake a lot of people make,they dont realize that default geometry is mathimatically perfect,and has no subtle defects for realism.The only thing I dont like is the glass...the quality of it dosent match the scene. I think to the wood texture is a little bit too low res for that extreme of a closeup.

01-07-2007, 02:42 PM	#7
gfx.KhronoS ...want some peanuts? Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Romania, Galati Posts: 855 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Suddenly i`m hungry Looks great and delicious, but I agree with Tank[NL] about the entry wound... __________________ Follow your dream! Unless it's the one where you're at work in your underwear during a fire drill. Sorry for my bad english, still in the struggle to improve it.

01-07-2007, 03:21 PM	#8
goljat .. with litle g! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Finland Posts: 174 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Damet its hard to please you guys Well, you found that, the entry wound. Thats what I have been trouble with.. I think its impossible to model so tryed to photoshop it. Its there but its not so apparent. Mayby I still have to prove it Thanks for your C&C __________________ wip: Chevrolet Corvette Stingray 1963 toycar Finished work: Leijona Saphire watch/clock Pastry Dead Fred Last edited by goljat; 01-07-2007 at 03:25 PM..

03-07-2007, 07:17 PM	#9
goljat .. with litle g! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Finland Posts: 174 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Now look waht you made me to do.. Update on the first post ^ Heres the difference to the old one. Better? __________________ wip: Chevrolet Corvette Stingray 1963 toycar Finished work: Leijona Saphire watch/clock Pastry Dead Fred

03-07-2007, 10:55 PM	#10
Bubbaloo I be learnin me some 3d. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma U.S.A. Posts: 1,938 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I noticed that. Much better. __________________ Brian Looney Tulsa, Oklahoma My Wesite: http://lunatic-studio.com/

03-07-2007, 11:26 PM	#11
artecnl IZayado Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Monterrey, Mexico Posts: 653 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	great job, im hungry now, thats cool, you did something that can cause hungry hehe great¡ __________________ my new portfolio ¡

04-07-2007, 06:58 AM	#12
narull Registered User Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	That look nice ! but if you want a good texture why don't you just download wood workshop? (try googling it). you can easily make a high res wood texture with it.

04-07-2007, 07:15 AM	#13
sepirioth Michael van den Heuvel Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Netherlands, The Posts: 286 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	This looks very nice, nice shader. of the cake. And nice image overal __________________ http://www.michaelvandenheuvel.com/

04-07-2007, 09:22 AM	#14
Mr.Alex Sorry for my English. Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Ukraine Posts: 165 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'm agree with all of you))Cool work,but render time is extremly high for VRay! __________________ Sorry for my English!

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