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01-04-2003, 02:50 PM
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Object: Egyptian Vase
Hello, all:
Just looking for some commentary & suggestions on a work I did for a contest using Blender. Critiques welcomed!  -Bischofftep |
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01-04-2003, 06:53 PM
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I think there's too much light on the right wall behind the vase.
Maybe in the whole scene...
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02-04-2003, 01:42 PM
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Yes, it's way to much light in the whole scene...
And the pillar to the left, the paint seems like it's some kind of um... dunno the english word... but it looks like papper torn off... Remeber that the egypiants used Paint... So make it smear off more then using a straight torn line. If you gets what I mean.  |
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02-04-2003, 02:01 PM
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It could look like chalk has fallen off, but then it the edges need more bump
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