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02-04-2003, 10:26 AM
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Little girl !
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Here is one of my characters for a game i'm working on. Her name is Lucie. Tell me your opinion about her.
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02-04-2003, 11:08 AM
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I would recoment redoing the hair. It just looks like bloks on her head, maybe stompy horns. Also the nose is a bit long, but maybe thats your style. If you want it to be natural it should be shorter. The rest looks fine, especially the texturing of the pants look very good.
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02-04-2003, 11:55 AM
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Thanx for the critics about the texture.
Also the nose is stylised. All the character i designed for this game got a nose like that. Yes the air are strange, but, I don't know how making it with very low faces...
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argh...
TROUSERS!!! ok....anyway...good work.....just make the hair like the hair on the sides... |
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02-04-2003, 09:11 PM
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Well, let's show another character... with the same style.
Give me your opinion for this one.
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03-04-2003, 06:14 PM
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You really must do something about the hair. It just doesn't look good. The tumb look a bit fat to, but the model is nice enough. Somehow they remind me of muppets
 BTW could you pls post a wireframeshot and the polycount? |
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04-04-2003, 09:24 AM
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Hello,
yes you're alright for the hair... Sorry, i'm french, and i don't know what is "tumb"... Can you explain please...
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04-04-2003, 10:56 AM
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I had a real cool discription of what a tumb is, but then I relised I had a translater
 thumb = pouce. |
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04-04-2003, 12:18 PM
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Ok... Yes, it's so fat.
But, it works when i animate it... It's readable enough... I did'nt say that' s for a game about LSF, the french signed language (like A.S.L.) That's the reason why i did big hands...
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15-04-2003, 05:51 AM
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You little girl could use some work around the facial region. My Avatar's a bit similar to what you're probably looking for (or there abouts) perhaps it could be a help to you...
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